#4 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/ UPDATED/ Chapter 55/ (Pg-147) - Page 67 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

Subhashini Chowdary

@Subhashiniiiii

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Elation

I prefer to do this, than replying to you!

But neither i spare you this time IMP , i will have you ducked in holy water!😲😡

Jessi not only u Mahi become too naughty on my comments too she also confessed she like to pull our legs on page 78

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Astha officially join the underworld...

she cant change him so join him...

where is this leading...

so his son no more... or he is somewhere else

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 45:

Another amazing update Mahi...

Shlok was shocked when astha told him thst she loves him...

Shlok memory brought back swathi's memory whom once showered her love to him...

shlok compared astha and swathi...

he though one day astha will also pity on him instead of loving...

he doesnt want to accept his love for her...

he made her confirm her what she said is true...

she is even ready to do anything what he says to prove her love...

finally he agreed on a condition that she has to appear in public as his mistress...

Poor girl even agreed to that to prove her love to him...

He has underwent so much pain in past that he is not ready to fall in love again...

Astha will make shlok confession his love to her very soon...

What happen to shlok child with swathi...

Thanks for the wonderful treat dear...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 46:

Another wonderful update dear...

Shlok was crying thinking of swathi...

or is it a happy tears after hearing those 3 letter from astha...

or worried tears whether astha is going to behave like swathi...

loved the lovely bond between shlok and abhi...

what happened to him... why shlok though that he didnt cried when it happen to abhi...

Shlok is became monster because of this continues disater in his life...

Astha in netted saree...shlok in black suit...

loved the way u explain each and every small details...from clothing to accessories...

decor of the wall and the room...so nice dear...

Shlok can control him anymore...so he decided to shower her with a kiss...

The maid interrupted them...

Shlok took her with him to show her to his own world...

The women are jealous of astha...

Loved the cute convo between shlok and astha...

and my cute doll decided to walk in pride...

showing the world that he is mine...mine only...

Thanks for the wonderful treat...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

I guess i am not boring u with my long and usual comment...

i am a good writer dear...

so just keep writing like a essay whatever come to my mind...

after reading ur amazing work...

so pls ignore my comment if it really boring...

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vijaya lakshmi

@VijjuShrenu_MB

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

hi mahi dear😃.

first of all very sorry for nt commenting earlier as i missed your updates😭.

now i read all the missed updates asusual mind blowing updates👏.

chapter-44 loved the confession part 😊.

chapter-45 beautiful update again,love hurts though im not in love with nybody but i've heard from my frenz saying that😉.ofcourse im in love with all the stories of ebp forum😆. and liked the lines "love couldn't be forced on the other person, it was a feeling that was born unconsciously without knowledge."👏

chapter-46 oh god shlokie boy confused soul😕.he want her to prove her love and aastha z ready to represent herself as his mistress poor girl wat love has turned her into😭.

very well written dear 👏.

if i would've been your teacher then i would have passed you with full marks in all subjects even without you giving the xmz😆

lots of love🤗 and lots of luck sweet heart😊.

thanks for the pm dear😃.

wish you a happy holi in advance😃

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ChattyRach

@ChattyRach

Newbie

Posted: 9 years ago

Sorry Mahir! Being busy having a birthday!

Loved the update!! Tears!! Wow!! Feelings are seeping through his ice cold heart!

Can't leave her alone for single minute!! Very sensual kiss!!

The Hall Gathering! Reminded me of the Bar Scene in the original "Star Wars" movie!! Full of misfits thieves and murderers!! She held her own with encouragement from Shlok!! He was there for her! Waiting to see how long or if he continues to fight his feelings for her!!

Super update!! Almost like a normal couple getting ready to go out!! Minus the thieves and murderers!! 😆

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vijaya lakshmi

@VijjuShrenu_MB

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Subhashiniii
Mahi U r so famous and become a celebrity
Thats why U r bashed Darling Chill kar 😊
..somebody wasting time to investigate on u ..search for intrenet to bash u and comment on ur thread😆
Stalking each and every thread for your comment ..U are underscan😆
Ignore them and Be happy😊

agree with wat subhi said celebrities like you has to face problems like dis and fans like we were always der with you to support you dear buddy😃

and don't waste your time dear with this bladdy shit😊

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Elation

@Elation

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Subhashiniii
Jessi not only u Mahi become too naughty on my comments too she also confessed she like to pull our legs on page 78

Okay, we both can jointly deal n trouble her more. Our comments should backfire her!🤢

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