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oh boy another dark story.
n overview was interesting concept looks fresh.
n again rd in a dark character.
it seems tht every1 loves him in dark face.
even I also love him in dark face but love to c sanyu in dark face.
nevertheless it was awesome start.
n congrats for Ur first ff being a male u hv taken a risk to compete with women captured field just kidding. n I dnt know any male who has written any ff.
so congrats for new story.
but what was d last para of dis overview rd push sanyu to do something desperate n scandalous.
its sound too much scary. dnt want to think abt tht part.
waiting how d story ll proceed further.
do pm me whenever u update
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