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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
oh ur update r superb neha thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY

It's really very nice neha...i just love ur stories u r fab yar...but plzz don't show Raghav like this much yar he is our hero our prince charming.. N u hv shown him as devil

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relax dear
i'm writing raghav character as devil and kalpi as angel so it's obvious somethig like this definatly happen but as i say before this story has a long way to go.
have faith on me and give sometime for story to shape up.
and regarding making raghav character like that if u think i'm doing wring so i'm exrtremely sorry but dark character never suit kalpi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
😊

Originally posted by: leelu0001

nice new story neha but pls raghav ko thoda human bano cant see him this harsh n obsessive

give some time to story to shape up
hope u understand
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Neha ek aur update yaar it's so good 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
if possible give one more update its too good love this story too much plz plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Neha babes Update Na...I  like seeing Rags in a different way so 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
suprb update Neha... OMG Raghav kissed Her... Plzz update nxt chappy soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
 Superb update yaar waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Yay I finllly get to read your update...I didn't see it at first😆
What an amazing chappy

Kalpi hates Rags now his touch,His look everything and she can stil feel his gaze in her.Now Raghav and Kalpi and remeembering each other,She through Hate! and Him through obbsession😳😳 Lust and All!!
So 2 days pass kiss kiss😳😳,Kalpi's out and her thoughts is on Rags as she remember their encounter,She almost go bounced down and Rags saves her,his hands is always on her waist😆😆
He just takes her away,Kalpi's frozen,Wow he carries her to the same hotel and Pins her to the wall he does want that kiss badly😆😆
So as he leans in she jerks him away...Kalpi really has to run otherwise he'll kiss her😳😆
So he Kisses her finally...wow I wonder how Kalpi will react😲😳

Neha babes such a lovely update👏👏 I really love this FF waiting to see how you shape it up😳 Will always read you amazing stories🤗 Love you babes😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
neha this story of ur is very different from ur other stories
 this is really interesting to see devil v/s angle