CHURA LIYA HAI TUM NE JO DIL KO (2) MG, ch 8, pg 116, new thread pg 1 - Page 81

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

Nice update Avi..

Maan Happyly went to Geet's cabin sfter sseing her blowing kisses but was heart broken to see the object her attraction..

Maan came to knw that Geet was brilliant wit mind.. bechara wo to usko buddhu samajhta tha

Lo ab ek aur nayi musibat..

uske saath kisi ladke ko dekh liya...

gayi bhaijns pani me.. Now searching te uption to impress a girl..

Kuchh jana pahchana sa laga ... Hai na Avi😆

Originally posted by: Alpha01

Before i start on Chpt 7 i just wanted to say that whilst reading every update of this story i am always reading with a smile on my face. The smile turned into chuckles whilst reading chpt 7. Maan is so arrogant and full of himself - so unlike your other portrayals of him

He needs a good bashing to bring him back down to earth and some one needs to tell him he is not the lady killer he thinks he is especially in Geets eyes😃

Geet on the other hand is hilarious with her runaway imagination. She thinks that Maan is suffering from something which she will catch if he comes to close to her.😆The rate she is having antacids she is going to inflate the price without realising the symptoms are related to her unconscious attraction to Maan. How can she be a genius yet lack common sense😆. Waiting for the next part to see whether or not Maan is successful with his plan to woo Geet courtesy of Google and Geets reactions am sure are going to be mind blowing😉

Originally posted by: Poooja

Now I have planned to read all update not as soon as I get pm but at night the same day before sleeping...
Releasing all the stress 😉

Evn my question was when did she become cricked fan...
The dhoni thing was nice...
Aur ye mana to budhhu h... Gals possession se nahi care se patani padhi h...
But really she is so intelligent...
But budhhu in things gals should not bb 😆

Loved maans antics of seducing...
But hopefully he understand tht soon ki she is not someone to fall for those ..
She is diff n special... And he needs to patao her in special ways

Originally posted by: singh24

lovely update</font><img src="http://www.sherv.net/cm/emo/kiss/blow-kiss-smiley-emoticon.gif" alt="blow kiss emoticon" />

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<font color="#cc3366" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5"> i think ganguli ke Viyog mei..😉</font>

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<font color="#cc3366" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5"> yaar ye jhalli ko bas beemariyan hi sujhti hei...romance nahi..</font>

<font color="#cc3366" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">😕who r these Dev nd Naina...?</font>

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Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Omfggg this Maan is impossible. His desperation is at its peak. Naa aage dekha na piche, he just want Geet bas.

The lines on writers torturing Maan was hilarious Avi. 🤣

Heights of over confidence and "I-Me-Myself" attitude. Saw her blowing kisses and he thought one day it all took to have her in arms. So full of himself. Huh.

Rofflll @ MSD's poster with her lipstick mark on it. MSK has got a very tough competition. Banda is getting jealous from every people around her, be it in flesh and blood or in posters. Pehle his own Dadima, then Arjun Kapoor and now these cricketers. But the funny part was, Maan thinking about his 4s n 6s which he hit and she never noticed and here suddenly she seem interested in cricketers. 😆 😆

Maan is surely delusion and I'm definitely enjoying it a lot. The way he boost male ego whenever she avoids him, is so so funny. Gosh I just couldnt stop from giggling seeing his attitude and reading his thoughts.

And there, Geet wanted him away from her as much as possible. Her covering her mouth with hankerchief and carrying antibiotic gel and spray with her amused me. She is such a piece. Attraction ko bimari ka naam de diya jhalli.

I wonder, had THE MSK ever paid attentions towards his looks like he did today to impress Geet? Pink color informal shirt, top four buttons open; kya park mei ghoomne nikala tha ya Geet ko movie date pe le jaane? 😆 He gives himself 200 out of 100? Typical male. It feel suddenly he has gone back to his teenage days. Yeh banda kisi bhi angle se 24 ka nahi lagta Avi and definitely not a boss of KC.

Then his views on Geet's dressing just made me ROFL. Specially, cutting off the strings of her dress as a celebrity at a grand opening. Kya creative brain hai Avi. Awesome. He is seriously dreaming too much with open eyes. She would be the first one to make a move on him? Kaise? When she thinks he is having some sort of diseases and eye infection and dont even want to be standing in his vicinity? Uppar se the effect Maan has on her, the jhalli thinks it as acidity. This is getting super interesting. Ek taraf Maan is finding ways to have her in his arms and she wants to run to the opposite direction, far away from him.

Finally Adi's entrance made me come from my la la land and realize that MG are indeed in office. For a moment I was confused where are they standing. Maan first notices everything about her correctly, but damn that ego of his comes up and shut the rational part of his brain giving him all sort of wrong ideas. Banda is flying very high. Bas hoping jab niche gire toh he doesnt land straight on his face.

And then we get a glimpse of intelligent, smart, dedicated Geet which came as a huge surprise. Maybe cos I could never expect her to be topper of DU knowing her craze for TV, films and then cricket. She is a chupa rustam. I like it.

Maan is over possessive. Heck, I feel, even over possesiveness is understatement seeing his behavior.

He is definitely surprised to know the new Geet. Her intelligence, her talent, her playing cricket and having a team, living in Delhi at merit and scholarship. Seems like Maan babu is in for lot of surprises.

To test her, he gives her triple the work. Definitely his ego is too big that it wouldnt accept her smartness and that she has managed to complete a file in just 2 hours finding tons of mistakes in them. Uppar se his way to keep her busy so that she doesnt get time to drool was cute as well as annoying. He should definitely change his strategy cos Geet itni aasani iske haath nahi aane wali. His "mine, mine" ka jaap is also very adorable. As if he is assuring himself that she is here and she is his.

He is yet again impressed with her work. And if she is really so talented then he should offer her a different post. It wouldnt let his male ego down.

And she bajaoed KC in front of the Boss. Hilarious. Her talks with dadima were cute. Canteen se leke, work load to complaints about her empty stomach. And bang, Maan ki akkal tikane lag gayi. Finally... Finally he realized his bossy and possessive behavior. Good.

And just when I was sighing in relief thinking now Maan will is back on track, entry maari Dev ne making him jealous and possessive again. So I guess the circle of Maan craziness is going to continue. I mean jab banda posters se jealous ho sakta hai toh yaha toh ek handsome sa nau jawaan was seen entering Geet's apartment with Geet smiling at him wholeheartedly which of course Maan never gets.

So even here we will have DevTara romance? I hope so.

Geet is affected by his image on TV. Udhar Maan hai who does all utt pataang harkatein to impress and win Geet's heart. Aur yaha Geet hai, who connects all her body reactions to diseases. Inn dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta. Dono have lose some screws jo koi tight karo.

Maan returns back to KC just to check her status. Wah. Aur gayi bhains pani mein. He took help of google baba? Dhanya ho Maan babu. He is so gonna be laughing at his own behavior once he finally gets Geet. And even here, his ego dint let him check for all 50 steps. Short cut le li. Banda is in hurry.

I would so love to see Geet making holes to his ego. He needs a dose badly to come out of his delusional.

I'm loving this creative and hatke MG story Avi. Updates of CL makes my day. Its damn creative and Maan n Geet both are so different here. Full to enjoyable.

-Sanjana!

Originally posted by: singh24

<font color="#cc0033" size="4">Hi Avi...</font>

<font color="#cc0033" size="4"> how r u ..?</font>

<font color="#cc0033" size="4">abhi aapki info leker aa rahi hu... SB per...😃</font>

<font color="#cc0033" size="4">so tum bhi mumbaiker ho..😆</font>