Amzingly written
Pls write anothr part where sahil unit..
Originally posted by: honeybees22Me first! Yayy!!
This OS is hell intense dude!The way you wrote it really makes one shiver and think hard!Totally dark as wellBegum Saibha dead! Best thing ever!It was amazing!One of the best ones so far!The ending is great!So full of emotions!Keep it up! We need writers like you!π
Originally posted by: sageflower7Resπ
** unres...Brilliant piece!I loved the mix of anger and pain and betrayal, as both of them addressed the actual problem in their relationship : lack of trust.whatever everyone else did to damage them further, they didn't have each other's back to start with.Gorgeous feelings in your words my friend. .ππΌ
Originally posted by: MrDarcyfanThat was fabulous! Loved it. This is what Aahil deserves for giving Nayi Sanam a status she dosent deserve and for not trusting Sanam when she needed him to. I guess her not trusting him anymore is fair! Great story!
Originally posted by: evedallas1I love it ! Aahil deserves a good waking up after all the drama ! Sanam shouldn't be so forgiven. It would kill me to see the man I love in the arms of someone else ! I will probably kill both of them lol please don't stop here I want to see the young nawab trying to win her trust back.
Did not know about the limits on # of posts/time span. Thought I would write all my thanks in one post. Thank you for the outpouring of appreciation on this OS. It was very encouraging.
@sahil333: Thanks for the compliment. Really hope to see something like this on the show, but am not holding out much hope. π
@flora212: Thanks! I may do a sequel, but let's see where the mood takes me. π
@Ramlath: Exactly what I was going for! Thanks!
@mahwash22: Thank you. π³. I am glad you could see those emotions in this scene. It's been so long since we have seen any rational/passionate scenes, that I thought I'd write my own. Does that make sense? The scenes were Aahil/Sanam should be crying/emotional, etc just get glossed over. We need some of that back!
@AhilTheBest: Thanks!
@Raingoddess: Thank you for the compliments! I'm currently finishing up a Maneet fanfic, but might consider writing a SaHil Fic after. An idea is percolating in the back of my mind. π
@Manyata5: Thanks! Probably won't turn it into a fanfic, but may do a sequel. Keep an eye out.
@siyasharma94: Thanks! As for a sequel . . . maybe. π
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