New FF: Piya Ka Ghar - Page 2

haye...jigyasa bhi na...whats wrong with her...who wont pick JW...stupid girls...main toh JW ko dekhte hi haan kar dehte... 😳 continue soon...

Another one😆..........Great start jaanu!👏

another one by gulli.... where do u get the ideas,girl??
ur fan fics kept me into TD and now kasam se...
way to go... 😊

Hey,
I have to hand it to u.
8 Fanfic!! I have a hard time controlling 3 fanfics at the same time!!!
Way to go!!!
I love the beginning!!!!
Pls continue soooooooooooon!!!!!
Kudos to u!!!!!
👏

Keep smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

Originally posted by: mk727272

Hey,
I have to hand it to u.
8 Fanfic!! I have a hard time controlling 3 fanfics at the same time!!!
Way to go!!!
I love the beginning!!!!
Pls continue soooooooooooon!!!!!
Kudos to u!!!!!
👏

Keep smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

8 is nothing to me!!!!!!!!!!

fabloussssssss.......ii mustt sayyu r justt 2 muchh mannn i luvv urr ff veryy muchh ......by the way waitngg 4 the nxt part...

wow fab fanfic
plzz do continue it soon
👏 👏 👏

8th?

Kya baat hain Jaanu.....Lage Rahooooooooooo😆

Part 3

Jai hugs Masi!!!!

And he's like good morning!!!!!

Masi; good Morning!!!!

Jai: I will be leaving!! I have to go to work!!!

Masi: But… there is a girl who's going to come and see you!!

Jai: Masi!! I am sure you will like her! If u do.. I approve! But I have to go!! Bye!

And he leaves!!

Before she can talk!!

And she's like paagal!!!!!!

She comes down!!!!!

Masi asks Jigs..

Is everything ready for them to come!!!!

Jigs: Yes!!! But weren't you going to the temple?

Masi: Yes I will go!!! But after I see the girl then I will!!

Jigs is looking at her

And she's shocked!!!!

Jigs: Okay that's okay!!!!!

And then…….

She puts her cell phone under her sari

And dials the home number

Jigs says I will see

She picks it up!!!!!!

And she's like what?

really????

She's like okay!

And hangs up!

Masi is like who was that?

Jigs is like that was the girls parents!!!!

They said they wont be coming!!!!!!!!!!

Masi is like really?

Jigs is like oh well!! There are plenty of fish in the sea!!!

Jigs is like

Now don't worry

Go to the temple!!

Part 4

Masi is like yes! I guess ur right!!

She goes

And leaves!

Jigs watches her!!

Afterwards

A girl and her parents come!!!!!

Jigs is like welcome!

She starts talking

And then she acts all sweet

And says I don't want to be rude

But I think you should reject this proposal!!

They are like why?

Jigs makes everything up!!

About how he had girlfriends!! And he flirts a lot!!!!

Jigs is like I don't want u to be unhappy!!

Parents are shocked!!!

Jigs is like

She wont be happy!!!

Parents like well then!!

WE don't accept!!!

And they leave!

Jigs smiles!!!

Bani is walking on the road…..

And she's going to cross the road…

And when she does

A car brakes fast!!!!!

And comes in front her…..

She stops

And looks

Driver is like Hey Madam!! Watch where ur going?? Why are you walking like this?

Bani: excuse me…. U can drive a little slower!!!

And they starts arguing!!!

And then…..

Door opens

And out comes Jai!!!!!!!!!


The End!