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New FF: Piya Ka Ghar

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Posted: 09 October 2006 at 8:40pm | IP Logged

Fanfic #8  : PIYA KA GHAR

 

The day when she got married was the day her life changed forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And also it was the day where all her troubles started!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 09 October 2006 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
Part 1

The scene starts in a small middle class home……….

And you go inside

Its all nice and clean

And then

In the mandir….

Someone is sititng on the floor

And is singing aarti early in the morning!!

You see her hands folded and what not!!

Everyone gets up!!!!!!!

She finishes singing!!!!

And she turns around

And smiles!!!!

She gives everyone prasad!!!!!!

And u see her face

And its Bani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Her and her family all have breakfast!!!

And they are talking and laughing!!!!

Pia: Di….

She yells from outside!!!

Bani turns around

Pia: U wore my shoes again!!!!!!!!!

Bani laughs!!

Bani: Yeah so!!

Pia: Who said u can wear them!!!

Bani: I did!!

Pia: One day… its shoes… then earrings….. what else…… I hope you wont be taking my husband!!!!!!!

Bani laughs!

Bani: I will never do that!! Becuz I wont get married!! I will stay with Mama and Papa for ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Papa: Forever?? Are you sure?

Bani: Yes!!!

Papa: No… u will have to go one day!!!!

Bani: Why?? I wanna stay here!!!

Mama: Every daughter has to go to her husbands hosue!!!!!!

Bani: But I will never leave you!!!!! Unless he comes and stays here!!!!!!

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Part 2

Mama: Arre Nahin!!! Don't worry!!! Whoever you marry… will be tall dark and handsome!!!!!!!!!! And wherever you go… u will reign that house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pia; Hello…… what about my shoes?

Bani: okay baba! I wont wear them!!!!!!!!

Pia: U said that last week!! Ugh!!!

And she walks off!!!

Bani is like I love it here!!!!!!

Meanwhile…..

In a big mansion…….

All the servants are cleaning the house and what not!!!!!

And its moving around the whole house………

And then……..

You see Masi…..

She's praying!!!

She wants everything to go all well……

There are a girl coming to see Jai!!!!

Masi doesn't know why in the past….

Girls have rejected him!!!!

And she's like please today……

Let everything be good!!!!!!

Jigs is talking

And she's like

I will make sure that Masi is isnt here!!!!

So I can do my thing!!!

She smiles!!!

Jigs is the one that has been causing all the girls to reject him!!!!

By telling lies about Jai!!

So they reject him!!!

Jai himself doesn't know!! Cuz he isnt there!!!!

He trusts them for whatever choice they make!!!!!!!!…..

Masi comes out!!

Masi: Munna!!!!!………

She goes into his room………

And she smiles!!!!

She gives Prasad!!!..

And he hugs him!!!

And you see Jai's smiling face!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 09 October 2006 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
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yay! another fanfic by Guli!!!!
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Posted: 09 October 2006 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwww luved it.. i don't like pia - especially her. one day u'll take my husband away - that doesn't sound so convincing Ouch haye ram.. i know it. she gonna fall fo jai.. jai and bani gonna get married - and her life's gonna change and troubles - thanx to jigs.. can't wait Clap
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Posted: 09 October 2006 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
WOW plz contu. i love ur f-f.
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Posted: 09 October 2006 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
Another ones!!! Great, cant wait until u write more!!! Also where is Rano!!!
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Posted: 09 October 2006 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
WOW! di.. fantastic and congrats for the 8th ff..

how do u manage to have parts for all 8 ffs..????

loved the beginning!!

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