Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

FF- Treacherous Fate [Thread #2 (Obscured Fate)] Chapter 26- Page 17 - Page 2

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OMG..What a beginning...Amazing is the word
A man being burnt alive...woah now that's some dark stuff right there and you promised darker themes...

Can't wait for the next update...till then am off to re-read Obscured Fate againπŸ˜‰

Amazing update πŸ‘

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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: twilightlover29

OMG..What a beginning...Amazing is the word
A man being burnt alive...woah now that's some dark stuff right there and you promised darker themes...

Can't wait for the next update...till then am off to re-read Obscured Fate againπŸ˜‰

Amazing update πŸ‘



Guilty pleasure I am afraid. Always wanted to write a dark and gory piece.
Anyway thanks a lot for reviewing.
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I read both the posts. Do you mean that Amar's a secret and Ajab is probably living as Baijilal and everyone thinks that she is dead? You know, while reading your ff I had made a timeline for the dates you had provided. So according to my calculations, Amar was born in 2009, the same year in which those goons (probably hired) had chased Ajabde. Also , as far as I remember, Pratap had been backstabbed by his bros in 2008. am I correct? 
 
I have also got a feeling that the man being burnt is probably a Suryavanshi.
Beautifully written as usual. Update soon.😊 
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Nikki !!!! 
I have a question !!! Have u taken the year's resolution as - to keep things under more manifolds than before ?? πŸ˜† 
Anyway, I have made a wild guess on who was burnt here though...but I ll keep that guess to myself... for the fear of making a fool out of myself (again)...πŸ˜†
Waiting for the next !!! πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks 4 pm...but is ajabde alive?
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Oh...the beginning of the new thread. ...intriguing. ..niki please update periodically. ...and thoughtful to give synopsis  ...of earlier  thread
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OH MY GOD no you did not just do this to your readers another cliffhanger?? 😭
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Thanks for the synopsis in front though πŸ˜ƒ
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Nikki !!!!

I have a question !!! Have u taken the year's resolution as - to keep things under more manifolds than before ?? πŸ˜†
Anyway, I have made a wild guess on who was burnt here though...but I ll keep that guess to myself... for the fear of making a fool out of myself (again)...πŸ˜†
Waiting for the next !!! πŸ˜›



Not exactly a resolution cuz I never seem to do well with those, but yes I did decide on Treacherous Fate being more convoluted and treacherous (sorry for the pun) than the previous one.
Also do guess the identity of the burnt man. Mayhaps our thoughts might match.
Let me give you a little hint.
That man who is dead in the fire is a very loved and respected man of Pratap.
Keep the guesses coming...
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Oh...the beginning of the new thread. ...intriguing. ..niki please update periodically. ...and thoughtful to give synopsis ...of earlier thread



I know I was quite irregular in the previous thread. Laziness unfortunately is a legacy of my father's family.
As for the synopsis, after I finished the first 20 chapters a silent reader asked me for a synopsis. I am afraid the idea of the synopsis at the start of the thread is due credit to mishrapriya68.