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afsana pyar ka2 sorryyy page 17 (Page 4)

brainychild92 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 October 2006 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
they all go to the hospital. the hospital take kripa and everyone is waiting in the waiting rooom..aliyya is hugging josh and crying at the same time... prithvi is jealous but is quiet cuz he there is a sign saying SILENCE!! an hour later the doctor comes out. he is hanging his head. angad runs to him and asks doctor if he can see kripa. the doctor nods his head and leaves.

on the other hand we see a girl. she is by the phone waiting for a call. she screams. WHY ARENT U CALLING. I AM SOO WORRIED ABOUT U..

who is this girl and wat happend to kripa???
sry for a short part but i have a light fever.
i want atleast 5 comments before i continue....

Saregama_fan IF-Dazzler

Joined: 23 January 2006
Posts: 4248

Posted: 24 October 2006 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
o wow, wonder what is going to happen...please uncover the mystery soon...but more importantly get better soon Smile
Love''sAngel Goldie

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Posts: 1501

Posted: 25 October 2006 at 2:35am | IP Logged
nice part
continue soon
IndianCutie13 Goldie

Joined: 22 March 2006
Posts: 1508

Posted: 27 October 2006 at 11:30am | IP Logged
great part but short
please continue soon
insia12 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 December 2005
Posts: 6063

Posted: 27 October 2006 at 11:43am | IP Logged
nice prt...i wonder whoz the gal???
brainychild92 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 21 June 2006
Posts: 11614

Posted: 02 November 2006 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
angad runs inside. he sees kripa and is so happy she is alritee.. he asks kripa wat happend and how the doctor was sad and all....
kripa puts angad's hand on her stomache and looks down. at first angad is confused but nanina is also in the room and she starts crying.. she is sooo happy..
****if u didnt guess, she 2 month preggyy****
everyone is sooo happy.. prithvi aliya josh forget their problems and share happiness with them. krpa gets discharged and they all go home..

angad takes kripa to her room as soon as the reach home.
then tension rise. they dont create a scene infront of kripa because of her pregnancy. angad's strict orders!!!

everyone sides with aliya.. they try explaining to prithvi that she couldnt wait all her life!!! but no he doesnt listen. after an hour of argueing we hear the same voice.
"waddyo think prithvi, u were gonna leave and i was gonna let you. i told you they didnt care for u and wouldnt accept you!"
everyone is shocked.. especially joshh

WHO IS IT.. GUESS!!!! i gave a pretty big hint.. lets see who gets it..
candyprincess IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 June 2006
Posts: 3276

Posted: 02 November 2006 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
great part
Dark Love IF-Rockerz
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Joined: 19 June 2006
Posts: 9547

Posted: 02 November 2006 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
ohhhhh cool part but short Ouch , um i have no idea who it could be Confused cont soon

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