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Posted: 17 years ago
omg.. i only got 2 comments..
i am soo not posting another part unless i see moree..

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Posted: 17 years ago
yo i no i said id continue but my midterms are in a month and i needa do that.. ill continue after jan 20.. okay.. thanks for coperatinggg
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Posted: 17 years ago
ill continue this weekend.. sry for keepin u waiting..
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Prithvi: WAT!!! I CALLED U HERE TO BREAK ALIYAH AND JOSH UP AND YOU ARE SAYING YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW HIM!!!
Simi: wat.. u said u were here to talk to your mom, let her know youre alive and well. That you were gonna ask her for my hand in marriage!

Prithvi: (in a snobby way) Ask for your hand in marriage?! Yeah right, I only love Aliyah. She was my first and last love.
Simi: but… omg, I cant believe I trusted you.

Damini: What, prithvi you lied to a girl.. such a big lie.. I cant even imagine you would do this.
Mishti: Bhai, I thought u loved Kripa?

Prithvi: No, Mishti, I never loved kripa. That day you saw me proposing, it was meant for aliyah, not kripa. Kripa was just a way to get closer to aliyah. I never liked her but she was aliyah's friend so I had to befriend her too.

Josh: STOP THIS!!

EVERYONE IS SHOCKED, INCLUDING ALIYAH WHO IS CRYING HER EYES OUT.

Josh: You can't do this Prithvi, not to me, aliyah, or simi. I love Aliyah and we are getting married, whether you like it or not!

JOSH YELLS THIS OUT AND SO EVERYONE HEARS, INCLUDING ANGAD AND KRIPA. ANGAD CAN'T STOP KRIPA FROM COMING DOWNSTAIRS CONSIDERING SHE IS REALLY CURIOUS AS TO WHAT IS GOING ON!

Angad tries stopping her but kripa, to escape his "clutches"[lolz], she runs downstairs. Poor Kripa, slips on a step and the stairs are so long she hits her head, and falls straight on her stomach.

Angad: KRIPAAAA!!!!!!!!!!

EVERYONE LOOKS AT HER. THEY TRY WAKING HER UP BUT SHE WON'T GET UP. ALIYAH ON THE OTHER HAND FAINTS OF SHOCK. JOSH IS WITH ALIYAH AND ANGAD IS WITH KRIPA. SIMONE CALLS THE AMBULANCE AND THEY COME AND TAKE BOTH GIRLS TO THE HOSPITAL.



i no i havent continued in the longest time but i had writers block.. i hope u read mere aashiq.. i will continue that after i am done with this which is in a couple of more parts. so plz comment!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part... hope nuthin happens to da baby!!! Pls continue, but dnt tke soooooo long this time loll 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow.. after soo long.. great part.. i thinki mite have to refresh my ememory..

mansi
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was reeally serious i guess amazing fic just read it
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Posted: 17 years ago
just read yr ff n its gr8 n hope she doesnt get a miscarriage
cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
This content was originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part... hope nuthin happens to da baby!!! Pls continue, but dnt tke soooooo long this time loll 😉


thanks and we'll see what happens to the baby.
lol. i wont take so long.. im updating rite now..
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Posted: 17 years ago
This content was originally posted by: mansi1219

wow.. after soo long.. great part.. i thinki mite have to refresh my ememory..

mansi



haha.. yeah i was really bzyy!!! im posting a part in a min...