Superb...
Sorry can't
say anything more as I'm speechless by ur writing skills... N now coming to story...
It's just so wonderful and the best part was ajabdeh had less mahantha here... Nice
ending...
Thanks for giving us such a wonderful story
Originally posted by: Suranya_TitliThis looked straight out of some fairytale so romantic and perfect! Our PrAja.'
Originally posted by: AsYa_CelanaWOW! This was amazing!
Even i always thought that the truth about phool blaming Ajabde would be revealed to Pratap someday, but sadly, it never happened.
You know what, if i had written about this same incident, i'd have shown Pratap getting angry on Phool, which would have been more like venting out my frustration through Pratap, but then again, the way you potrayed Pratap-understanding and calm, this exactly how he is.
Great job girl! Loved the way you wrote the OS. At least, here Ajabde showed a little bit of less Mahanta. Heheheheee
Keep writing girl!
Originally posted by: twilightlover29
Oh My - Celu you commented and maine dekha hi nahi- please forgive me for my very very late latif response
And now am going to turn red for the entire night because I saw your comment😳
I love it when you, Anu, Pari and the other elder writers of the forum comment on my work after all am a fan girl here
Wow I would so love to read an OS from you showing the angry Pratap- daydreaming about it now
Thank you so much Celu and haan mahaanta kam rakhi because it was really irritating uski mahaanta- chup chaap thoda greedy ho jaati toh kya jaata but CVs ko phir love triangle dikhaane ka mauka na milta na
Glad you liked it
Originally posted by: pari0706
Pari jaana 🤗
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