Originally posted by: maitydeblina
Ausum update👏 Thanks deblina. 😃
so prabhakar was shlok's teacher😕hmm he could not help him when he needed😕
poor shlok😭 Yes really a hypocrite.
Avdhoot in the dungeon🤣 Yeah he is now there, helpless just like he made Shlok feel as a child. 😈😆
""Never, my body may want you but my mind doesn't it hates you", she spat at him and pushed at his chest, trying to dislodge his touch. But he caught them in his hands, and slammed them against the wall. "Who gives a two hoot about your mind sweetie, your body has already accepted me as it's master and soon your mind will break down too", he smiled darkly.
"The process of decomposition had already begun two nights ago princess, when you gave your body to me and now I'll make sure that your mind breaks down before your body does", he whispered threateningly against her lips...
"Very soon, probably today", he added as a promise...
Astha's breath freeze in her throat. Why does it felt like that there was a double meaning behind his each and every word? He wasn't talking about breaking her body, he was talking about breaking her mind and that too very soon, what was he planning to do?, she shuddered to even think of what could he do to achieve his goals..."
i like this part the most😊 Thanks sweetie. 😉
now he want to break his mind.. and take away the spirit??hmmm...interesting😉what does it mean?😕 He wants to make her helpless and broken, just like him, wants to snatch away her hope, so she'll only have him to rely on.
was shlok married before?????????who that woman is???how the child related to shlok in the photo??😃 That's a secret buddy, 😳 but i'll soon disclose it 😉 but i can give you a hint, the picture is not of Shlok's parents.
u always twisting my mind😉😆i think i will break my head😆 Yep do that sweetie, so that my mission will succeed. 😆
all the best for project😆👍🏼enjoy the last sem🤣👍🏼 Thanks sweetie! 😆 And enjoying project! 😭🤢
thanks for the dose evil witch😆😉 My evil pleasure sweetie! 😈😆
will be waiting for 2 days😉update soon😉 Will do dear!
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988
congratulations dear 4 d new thread...
nice update...
Originally posted by: ChattyRach
Oops sorry i realise i commented about new thread when i shouldn't have!!
Originally posted by: jhumjhum
EQ Mahi a 😈 congratulation for your hat trick thread dear 👏. Aww thank you so much dear. 😃
Coming to update fantastic that's lesson of Prabhakar what he teach his student but he himself never follow them but as a student Shlok follow every single word. Really why it's happen when someone need help we hide in our safe cage n come to saw help when there nothing left to help such a hypocrite mentality of human nature. But Shlok make Prabhakar saw real face of his lesson & he lost his Faith... Yes Shlok lost faith in humanity. Now he don't believe in anything, no God or human. His heart is closed towards everything now.
Astha saw many pics of Shlok with that boy but in every pic that women pic is cutting mysterious women... Shlok came n saw her in his room make him angry but than he go back to his dark desire mood. Hmm now he want a strip show Mahi what's this fascination with strip 😉! Yep very fascinated with striptease. 😈😆😆. But Shlok wants her to strip for something else, 😆 but he can't say leniently, no lenient bone inside him. 😆
Ashlok fight over who get whom was very interesting Shlok try all his dirty seduce way to make her believe she give herself to him willingly & Astha saying he do it forcefully. But Shlok threat her after body he will now win over her mind n make her puppet of his hand very dangerous. Yes he wants to make her so helpless and hopeless that she won't have anyone to rely on. Wants to break her faith on her father just like his faith was broken.
Brilliant writing dear thanks for PM n waiting for next dark hot thrilling dose update soon 😃 Yep next update will be hot and suspenseful 😉
awesome MAHI EBP👏👏👏...ASTHA :S freight ..helplessness..and her doubts about the mafioso..wow !!! SIMPLYBREATH TA KING👏👏👏... I felt like ASTha when I was reading the scene ...she was looking at the pics and he opened the door...she quickly hid the pics under th bed,..NOW ,,what is he going to do her ..he will bring AVDOOT and make him CONFRONT what he did to SHLOK and his family😊...THEN Astha will give her MIND to SHLOk ..😉😉...
LOVED IT MAHI..now waiting for nEXT
awesome part Thanks dear. 😃
but u left in incomplete dear
I mean shlok and astha conversation Yep on purpose buddy, to make you suspenseful. 😉 my devilish trick. 😈😆 But don't worry buddy, the next update will be hot and suspenseful, i'll continue from right where i left. 😉
update next soon Will do dear! 😉
and congratulations for third thread Thank you so much buddy. 😃
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