Originally posted by: veeba4eva
Wow!! That was so beautiful!!! 👏👏👏
Originally posted by: zainabawoon
Amazing yaar! Just so so beautiful 👍🏼 loved it!
Originally posted by: Lovelyvb
Wow amazing.. Its fab! Vibha u r too good in writing emotions.. In the last i was moist eyes can feel their all emotions 😭 thank u so much for the happy ending 🤗 hope to see something like this in the show too
Originally posted by: mansi_as18
this was just heart touching
Again an amazing part! Why cvs didn't show crystal clear in serial!
Loved it, and you have a right to brag, infact you should write another one so you can brag some more.
baldev is just so sweet and caring, luv him snd nice to see veera suddenly be hit with the realization that baldev needs her.
Originally posted by: ...Jammy...
Nice upate!Loved the way it ended ❤️
That was Wonderful,thank u 4 hearing our request and updating a 2nd part 😊,I'm short of words right nw superb to the core each 'n every line was flawless my fav line was "Their lives were fused together and she loved him to death like he did."This is AWESOME... 👏👍🏼
that was amazing dear... 👏 so touching ...u explained it very well...the condition of VeeBa...Love their convo...thanks 😊
Originally posted by: SewwandiVB
Happy ending 😊 enjoyed it
Originally posted by: ...navina...
Awww, that was lovely 😳!Thank you😳
Such a perfect second part,and I particularly loved the last sentence ...That was just beautiful!That was something he said in the show which i liked, so added here too❤️
You're an exceptional writer; so I'm not really surprised that it took u 2.5 hours to write it !awwie thank you so much😳
(any chance u can take over my FF 😉?)No one can write like you⭐️ so no question of taking over😆 besides i have wrecked my own FF(s) if u remember😉 lolz
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