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The first ever fiction or part of it dedicated to me. I feel accomplished. Yaaay.
"She seemed surreal. The smile on her face had always made his heart skip a beat. The pout, made his face break into a smile. The gleam in her eyes made them special all the more, the love lurking in her eyes which now belonged to some one else."
This DID IT for me. You know I crave Subbu. Seeing him burn in rage feels so good. So f**king good. Just like sex. But then I haven't done so, we'll let's not go there.
But this? This is heaven. Perfection. Good. Epitome. Bas. This is ecstacy. Just heaven.
If only Subbu was long. If only. But then, I'm not complaining. I know I did. And I read it again. This time word by word. And I loved it.
Your beauty lies in how you keep it short and yet manage to get everything important in.
Heart Beat : 107 bpm
I calculated. I told you. This comment needs to extended. But my heart is beating and it f**king hurts. Okay. Okay? +imagine the TFIOS clouds+
Listen to Matlabi while you read this. f**king amazing. Okay. Imma stop cursing before you decide to wash my mouth clean with soap. Bas.
Heaaaveeennn.
P. S. I love to see Subbu burn. That's my motive in life. If only I had time to have a Meherbaan update. Remind me to put in a Subbu-Nandini chapter. I shouldn't be discussing that here. But you made me love Subbu more. The burn. The f**king burn. The diss. Raman. Why so awesome, yo? Great. Now you have me all hyper. Amna. Why? WHY!!!!!!!!
The highlighted part - that's the one I said reminded me of meherbaan.
And now I want my share of an update of your fiction. Urgh. Your exam schedule sounds like forever.
Aww.. The smiles your comments give me. Thank you!!
Matlabi by? Let me Google it. I havent heard it.
I love this hyper you on my thread and don't think twice before spamming my my thread (as of now😉 )
P. S I'm glad I could make you see subbu toss and turn in his own ashes.
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