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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
Loved the update.

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
Arnav and Khushi for it hard...but true love will conquer All

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
This is what I meant when I said earlier that your writing has shifted, assumed a more quiet, reflective tone.. as if you are now privy to these untold and unseen nuances of human interactions and you let us, your readers in on these secrets... This..

But as her children were finding their own spaces, they were finding themselves as well. Their relationship had changed, and she had grown closer to him as both of their children were spreading their wings.

I love that you are able to show Sakshi and Ashok's relationship, juxtaposed with Arnav and Khushi's - one where the older couple is still discovering things about each other while younger ones are also in their own pursuits of love and romance. The fact that romance is not the forte of the young and the fact that there is something so.. incredibly attractive about how Ashok is able to make his bride blush ever after all these years!! :)  Nothing Choti about this my dear friend.. :) 

I am curious to see what NK is up to. He is a part of a non-violent group of freedom fighters but has sentiments of impatience and therefore violence? He is an interesting character here in your story.. But I will wait for you to tell this story.. :)

Loved reading this update... As always looking forward to your next..

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Choti...
To be frank... I am glued to your writing now...
Your in depth thoughts on every character has made this story special...
Knowing your age... I am surprised to see you getting in this groove...which comes with age and experience...
Lovely update... Arnav subtly hinting what he wants without wanting to influence her decision by his thoughts... He is gently leading her towards where they both want to be...

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Brilliant Update...Clap

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Awesome chapter...it showed a little hope with Arnav trying to show khushi that she should not give up so easily and she should try to understand him...hope that he understand his khushi and give her a hope to say yes to him...even though his parents wish to have khushi as their bahu they knew their son too well...shakshi do not want to live on false hopes...Happy New Year...thanks for the PM

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
ohh..*sigh*
 they are such a sweethearts... 

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Awesome update. I glad that Arshi are giving chance to their relationship.

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