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addicted25 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
Wow choti, what an amazing update, so we have a contract marriage but it has nothing to do with Anjali, and about 80 years in the past! Choti I hadnt realised you were still at school, you really should take up writing in some form or another as a career choice. This is awesome so thankful that Arnav saved her... eventually. I am liking the plot line so much.Big smile, keep up the good work. Muuwh

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kushikumari Goldie

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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 3:46pm | IP Logged

first of all, congrats on the win! and good luck for the next round.

coming to your story, you have captured the restlessness of the pre-independence youth very well. a restlessness coupled with an impatience. which didn't leave much or rather any room for clear thinking. a majority of the youth in that time period lacked a foresight. and almost all of them ended up being killed, or locked up and tortured till their body gave up. a shame really, considering how most of them were so courageous. While i can understand that ahimsa might not be the right choice at all times, a meticulous planning is required to be successful in anything else also. a daring attitude will only get one so far...or not.

and that brings me to our kushi... representing the youth of that era, a naivety in her as well, and a stubbornness that she can do well without! a confusion, a fear, a helplessness. yet that indomitable boldness. a loyalty towards nk because of his spirit towards his country, and a disdain towards the man who is willing to get her out of jail, because... it's not just his angrez duniya, is it? she wants his understanding, his comfort, his warmth, his acceptance... on her terms. for her reasons, for her feelings, when she feels like it. he has to do only as much as she will allow him. a misguided anger - the frustration of being ruled by the british, coupled with an anger for what happened to her parents, all being directed towards this one man... won't live with him, but can't not live without him...


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srain10 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
Congratulations on winning tournament...
As usual wonderful update...
After reading update i felt like khushi cares more for NK than Arnav...

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1chilly IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 01 December 2012
Posts: 12496

Posted: 24 February 2015 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
Firstly, congratulations my dearest Choti on winning the contest.
I had faith that you will do us proud.
And you did it!
Very very happy.

You brought out very well Khushi's emotions in this chapter.
She is torn between her loyalty to her friends and NK and on the other hand her love for Arnav's parents.
She does owe them a lot and surely feels guilty on bringing them shame.
Arnav played his cards well and got her to agree to marry him.
I'd love to see khushi bring about a change of heart in Arnav.
That would be very interesting.
I just hope he realises the error of his ways and joins hands with Khushi in the service of his motherland.

Edited by 1chilly - 28 February 2015 at 4:46pm

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LadyR Goldie

Joined: 21 March 2012
Posts: 2390

Posted: 24 February 2015 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
It's a win win situation for you and Arnav! 
Your hard work truly paid off, well done ;-)

Arnav may have taken advantage of Khushi in a bind...but I do wonder has he ensured NK will face the strongest penalty possible...
Khuhsi has agreed to a marriage and is hoping the status of a Raizada Bahu will help in her cause.. But in the long run has she thought it through.. She's agreed to the marriage to avoid upsetting Ma and Pa.. Will they agree and if they do ... will she not be expected to show decorum as Mrs Raizada... 

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roseycheek Senior Member

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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 5:31pm | IP Logged
OMG!! captivating update...I hope Khushi soon realizes that NK is not what he seems to be...

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Pinky.Raizada IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
archmink Goldie

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Posted: 24 February 2015 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
he is sounded so cunning but right in his own way...
and khushi is thinking right she firstly needs to get out to help nk in any way so for that she needs to marry arnav and the bahu of raizada had lots of door open for her ...

I thought they showed up married at the door step the way their ma and papa was stunned looking at them at the door

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