Originally posted by addicted25
π π π first AWESOME!
it has just occurred to me, Resistance, has the story now moved on from the resistance against the Raj, to Resitance of her love for Arnav? The first part where she realises that from now on his room is now their room, she will be sharing his room with him. Then she watches him shave, but her actions make him nick himself, and she then has to go and make sure he is ok. She cares, actually loves him so much yet is still fighting it. Maybe if she can explain her memories to him he will feel differently?
It was a very touching chapter, both of them can feel the electricity between them, yet she is still resisting him. Now she has become sick, how is he going to explain that to his parents who have entrusted her to him, their own son?, yet he let her, he could have brought her in. Slept on the floor if she wouldnt share the bed.
How very star plusπ
I loved how you showed his myriad of thoughts, the need to take care of her, yet feeling uncomfortable about changing her clothes... gosh wouldnt it have been less than letting his mother do it for her, withehim in the same room? But he did eventually do the right thing. Hopefully her resistance will now break down, or will it, has the story just begun?
Absolutely love your writing. Cant wait for the next chapter x
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@Blue: Yes! Yes yes yes. This is a shift I wanted to portray- the resistance against the Raj is still there, of course, but it is also resistance against themselves.
@Pink: Aakhir it is a fanfiction of a Desi soap, no? π π Drama toh banta hai!