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Posted: 17 February 2015 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Came across this bful FF yesterday Read all, 16 chapters n a go.
Bfully written work. Loved it Clap

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Posted: 17 February 2015 at 4:07pm | IP Logged
Sorry for being late!


NK!he definitely showcased how the youth felt then...how aggressive and patriotic they were...
The anger  and the reason behind it...May be the words his grandma uttered " I am proud of you" we're said by his father...the story would have been different...

The anticipation and the build up for the relay of gandhijis speech held me on to the seat ...

NK had finally chose "sacrifice" over his "love" ..and he has to face the consequences...

And will ""aap"" succeed in taking her away and claim his love now?


One last thing...Aman is also involved in the independence struggle...Arnav doesn't have any objection to his involvement ...what does Aman do for living...doesn't he believe that he is wasting his life in this struggle?  Did I miss something in earlier updates regarding Aman and Arnav angle?

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Posted: 17 February 2015 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
Hola Choti,  read this on the plane ride back from NY but I was dead tired to reply. I love the insight into the person that is NK.  I get his impatience and seeing all the brutal atrocities committed by the British.  Not everyone can be Gandhi and there is a reason an eye for eye was adopted by civilizations long ago.  However, he is fighting with the greater entity and along with his friends and the person he is in love with.  How can he be so selfish as to betray her and put her at risk like that?  One always protects our most loved ones, not exposed them to danger.  For this alone, I cannot pardon him for his irrational action.  Kushi is in jail and is completely shattered by how easily he has broken the trust that she had placed in him.  I do believe it is the end of the line for him here.  I do hope that Ashok and his wife continue with any kind of relationship for him and Kushi.  How can he vow to love and Protect after this?  There will be no sincerity to his wedding vows after this.  So now Kushj is in jail at the mercy of the British but Aap is here to save the day.  Yes we are finally at the prologue.  He may be angry but he will be making the decision for them from now on I think.  I feel he would want her safety and if he has to force her, he will.  Can't wait to read more.  Cheers!

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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 6:10am | IP Logged
choti...I may call you choti? This was an excellent chapter! I loved the tense anticipation of the gathered crowd, loved the family undercurrents and NKs relationship with his dadi and ...now on to the much awaited showdown and the prologue!
Brilliant!

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Posted: 19 February 2015 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Awesome ff

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Posted: 19 February 2015 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Catching up on a few chapters...will comment soon.

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Posted: 21 February 2015 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Hey guys,


I'm really, really sorry to do this- I've had a crazy week, haven't even had time to properly look at your comments. It's speech season and I had a midterm, and I'll be out all weekend competing at a tournament.


I'll have to put this update off until Wednesday, when I have a little time to breathe.

However, I AM posting a teaser: 


"May I speak to her, please?"




Her eyes widened in shock, and she was distinctly aware of the women surrounding her that stared at her curiously. Her head pounded, her eyes stinging as she stared at him, completely drained.




She couldn't do this right now.




She silently pleaded with him, begging him to come back later. He merely stared back at her resolutely, his jaw set as a storm gathered in his eyes.




The leering jailer looked between Arnav and Khushi, before nodding, scuttling away.




Had Khushi been anywhere else, she would have been amused by the way the previously mocking jailer cowered like a mouse in the face of Arnav Singh Raizada.




The lights flickered uncertainly above them as the wooden door to the room swung shut, the jailer giving them one last, curious peep. Arnav stood in front of her, his mouth quirking up slightly in a taunting smirk.




She shifted uncomfortably. The silence was deafening, pressing down on her with a heavy weight, the tension thick in the air. She almost wished the jailer would stay, so she wouldn't have to face the man standing in front of her.




"I cannot say that I am entirely surprised to see you here, Khushi."






I'm really, really sorry! I promise you, this update is worth the wait- Or I hope it is LOL


Love always,
Choti.


Edited by chotidesi - 21 February 2015 at 4:43am

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Posted: 21 February 2015 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Will wait Choti..

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