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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Amazing update

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 7:23am | IP Logged
you have taken me in that era with your detailed describing and it felt like as if I'm the part of the crowd gathered there and witnessing everything...
I salute the lady nk's grandmother is,,, despite loosing everything and she sent him and understood him knowing that he may never come back ,,,, her family wood end there ...
without having any arnav or khushi in this part it was greatly written and I loved reading every line of it,... '
I hope Anjali and aman gat away safely ... and at the I hope that 'aap' was arnav comeing there to bail her out... so now it is the part that's coming that we had read at the very start of the story...

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 8:55am | IP Logged
That was intense! I really liked the way you have brought out the sentiments of so many people at this crucial time in India's history. Besides the big picture of India's (and Gandhiji's) fight for freedom, your story talks about the emotions of the common people at that time - could very well have been our own parents and grandparents!
The British giving India Independence is always something to reflect in hindsight and say that Gandhiji's patience and determination paid off. And it did. But it must have been very difficult for many young, idealistic, passionate men like NK to wait patiently when they were in the thick of it. Patience usually comes with understanding and wisdom of experiences.

You have done a tremendous job of putting yourself in the shoes of NK, Khushi, NK's grandmother and even the British soldiers. 

From Khushi's perspective, her heart is broken again - at least Arnav was honest about his feelings and ideas and NK's behavior was shocking to her. It will be interesting to see how you deal with her reactions now - to both NK and Arnav. I am sure her mind is tortured now!

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by canapoem

Choti, take a bow.Clap

I just cant explain how I felt reading this update. The mood during those times, the anticipation in the eyes of the freedom fighters, the respect they had for Gandhiji and his humility, Choti, you have written all these so well that I felt I was one of them taking part in the Quit India movement.

Ofcourse there were people like NK who thought just ahimsa and satyagraha were not enough and they needed to resort to violence to achieve end results.

Loved the dilemma you showed in NK's mind regarding his actions and how his heart pained knowing that Khushi would be hurt in the process. but loved his determination to do something for his mother land and loved how his grand mother supported him, even knowing that she might lose her grandson in the process.

The way they arrested Khushi, it literally gave me shivers. It brought back the realisation how our own Indians were treated in their own country and the sacrifices so many people made to get us freedom we are enjoying today.

Poor NK got caught too. The scene where Khushi realises what NK has done and his guilt looking at her, Choti you have outdone yourself in writing that scene. Sometimes I wonder how you do this at such a tender age as 18. 



Kavitha,

Agree with your thoughts. @ bold, Only, she is not 18. may be a 40 year old trapped in a 18 year old's body. Or has a birthday falling on Feb 29, or, has a going on 40 year old's mind... the possibilities are endless... but the bottom line is the same - she is not 18!

in the previous chapter, describing a broken man in arnav, is not something an 18 year old can do, let alone comprehend. and with that, i rest my case.
 

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 11:55am | IP Logged
oh wonderful piece of writing
beautifully written
NK's character was beautifully portrayed - lovely piece of writing
great job choti
will wait for the next one dear

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kushikumari

Originally posted by canapoem

Choti, take a bow.Clap

I just cant explain how I felt reading this update. The mood during those times, the anticipation in the eyes of the freedom fighters, the respect they had for Gandhiji and his humility, Choti, you have written all these so well that I felt I was one of them taking part in the Quit India movement.

Ofcourse there were people like NK who thought just ahimsa and satyagraha were not enough and they needed to resort to violence to achieve end results.

Loved the dilemma you showed in NK's mind regarding his actions and how his heart pained knowing that Khushi would be hurt in the process. but loved his determination to do something for his mother land and loved how his grand mother supported him, even knowing that she might lose her grandson in the process.

The way they arrested Khushi, it literally gave me shivers. It brought back the realisation how our own Indians were treated in their own country and the sacrifices so many people made to get us freedom we are enjoying today.

Poor NK got caught too. The scene where Khushi realises what NK has done and his guilt looking at her, Choti you have outdone yourself in writing that scene. Sometimes I wonder how you do this at such a tender age as 18. 



Kavitha,

Agree with your thoughts. @ bold, Only, she is not 18. may be a 40 year old trapped in a 18 year old's body. Or has a birthday falling on Feb 29, or, has a going on 40 year old's mind... the possibilities are endless... but the bottom line is the same - she is not 18!

in the previous chapter, describing a broken man in arnav, is not something an 18 year old can do, let alone comprehend. and with that, i rest my case.
 


P, have you read the OS written by Jigs for Choti's 18th birthday which was a few weeks ago. 

I guess Choti is 18, but she is mature for her age. LOL

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by canapoem

Originally posted by kushikumari

Originally posted by canapoem

Choti, take a bow.Clap

I just cant explain how I felt reading this update. The mood during those times, the anticipation in the eyes of the freedom fighters, the respect they had for Gandhiji and his humility, Choti, you have written all these so well that I felt I was one of them taking part in the Quit India movement.

Ofcourse there were people like NK who thought just ahimsa and satyagraha were not enough and they needed to resort to violence to achieve end results.

Loved the dilemma you showed in NK's mind regarding his actions and how his heart pained knowing that Khushi would be hurt in the process. but loved his determination to do something for his mother land and loved how his grand mother supported him, even knowing that she might lose her grandson in the process.

The way they arrested Khushi, it literally gave me shivers. It brought back the realisation how our own Indians were treated in their own country and the sacrifices so many people made to get us freedom we are enjoying today.

Poor NK got caught too. The scene where Khushi realises what NK has done and his guilt looking at her, Choti you have outdone yourself in writing that scene. Sometimes I wonder how you do this at such a tender age as 18. 



Kavitha,

Agree with your thoughts. @ bold, Only, she is not 18. may be a 40 year old trapped in a 18 year old's body. Or has a birthday falling on Feb 29, or, has a going on 40 year old's mind... the possibilities are endless... but the bottom line is the same - she is not 18!

in the previous chapter, describing a broken man in arnav, is not something an 18 year old can do, let alone comprehend. and with that, i rest my case.
 


P, have you read the OS written by Jigs for Choti's 18th birthday which was a few weeks ago. 

I guess Choti is 18, but she is mature for her age. LOL

he he he, i think that was deliberately misleading...

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
You guys caught me.


I'm secretly Nicholas Flammel, and in possession of the Sorcerer's Stone, thus providing me with the Elixir of Youth.


Juan Ponce de Leon (accent sobre la o) really did find it after all! He sent it to Britain, where I obtained it during my tenure as a student at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.


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