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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Awesome update girl, simply awesome.
I felt like I was watching this movie in theater and at the terrace scene where Khushi question him...

"Do you want me to remain unmarried because I won't marry you?"

"Yes."

Her eyes rounded, her mouth falling open in shock at his audaciousness. He didn't look remotely apologetic, his gaze meeting hers directly, unnerving her with their sincerity. 

I felt like clapping hard for the appearance of ASR to have his love if not with him than not with anyone. 

And let me tell you the update didn't stop to surprise me at all, whether is was above declaration or Arnav declaring he will stay for Khushi, that she matter and not his dreams or London. And there was Khushi who had it all in one moment and before she could relish in it she gave up on the fact that Arnav will be miserable without his dreams. 

And that pain and hurt for refusing him, his anguish and heartbreak at the finality of her answer but her effort to memorizing his looks and those love filled caress, oh my as if I could feel it myself. *sigh*. 

Loved it all and was little disappointed by end of terrace scene but Anjali rocks. She made the ASR come back  and claim his love. Now prologue make sense, Arnav fighting to get his love back  and Khushi resisting for not letting him give up his dreams. 

Bring it on choti, surely you and your stories are no way Chota packet of surprise and awesome writing. 

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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
Khushi is giving up on her love even when Arnav has voiced his love and need for her...she doesn't wish Arnav to relinquish his dreams for her and make compromises
If the marriage with NK happens and Arnav and khushi would still be a family ...would khushi be able to face him ...same as for Arnav ...

Ashok is doing all he could do to bring them back together...their sorrow and soulless eyes conveying how much they are struggling to stay apart from each other...and Anjali has triggered Arnav and let's hope he doesn't act stupid .


Longing in the eyes of khushi to hold and feel him for one last time ...that's the favorite part of the update

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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
NOOO. I can't believe you ended it there! This push-pull between A and K has been going on for waay too long. I was hoping after that teaser that you would include what Arnav actually does! I can't believe that we won't be able to find out for a while :(

Khushi, Khushi, Khushi! How can our favorite heroine always be so self sacrificing? And Arnav even said that he'd stay--how deeply he must've felt to even consider the idea of losing his dream for love? I can't wait to see where you'll take this <3 Thank you for such a wonderful chapter!

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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
Ah so he is willing to sacrifice his dreams for her but she is not willing to let him


She is wlling to sacrifice her love for his dreams

Hmm so Anjali made him get up and not give up

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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
Unres'd here

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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
Oh god Choti! Kya karti ho?! I felt every pain, every twist of the stomach like it was my own. This was beautifully written. One of best written chapters so far. How did they reach here?? They were happy..
And he had decided to stay. He wanted to stay. I don't know whether I should be happy at Khushi for standing by her word or should I go to her and shake her and reprimand her for giving up on her happiness..
Anyway thankyou for the PM and update again soon!

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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
You're an amazing writer ... Spent all of last night reading the story !!!! Super !

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Posted: 07 February 2015 at 10:39pm | IP Logged

"She had to think positively.

It would work out.

She hoped."


Hum bhi same hope-wa karat rahe, nandkisore. 


I hope it works out too. 


You can do it Arnav! You got this! LOL



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