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honey-sweety IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
That was wonderful update...

At last Arnav realized his feelings towards Kushi and how strong his feelings... but i am curious to know about their future...

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aquagal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update.
Arnav here has emotions and he is not running away from them. He faced them and confessed his deeply felt feelings. I loved the contradiction you showed with him saying he doesn't know if they'll be good together given their different thought process, that she deserves someone like-minded but at the same time he isn't ready to let her go.
Khushi is in love and at the same time a little cautious. I love this combination because it feels real.
You have brought out the conflicts they went through & will still be going so beautifully.

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seeta_naips IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Just read the last three parts

Whoa things have escalated between them

Arnav asked Khushi to marry him and confessed his love for her but their are so many things that are still hidden

Their views differ so much and their attitude towards their country are a big stumbling block

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mkavi Groupbie

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 4:54am | IP Logged
nice update.loving the father son duo

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chotidesi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kushikumari

i wish i had the power to materialize at will, because i so want to give you a wonderfully big hug filled with warmth. this is so beautifully done, you are unbelievable, you know that? to take a rose bush, weeding, and a hot sun and turn it into such a romantic and sweet moment! a beautiful proposal and an equally beautiful response. yet the awareness that they both have such opposite views lingers in them...
you don't waver for a minute, and that is simply fantastic about your writing. 

a warm hug,

So this is kind of an awkward hug, but pandas are really adorable- especially the babies, not the ones that are not fuzzy yet but the ones that are fuzzy and tiny- so I figured it would be warm and convey my feelings!

I'm thrilled that despite the sweat and grime that comes with gardening- you found it romantic and beautiful. The feeling you described is exactly what I wanted to convey- I'm glad I was successful :) 

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prpk525 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Loved it

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chotidesi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Raila1014

I absolutely love this chapter.  This was very well thought of and very well written.  I love that you dragged the scenes prolonging the feelings making us absorp the scenery, the people, their looks, their touch, . . .i feel like I was watching a movie in slow motion.  That's good writing chica - well done!  
The opening scene was beautiful, a new morning and a dawn of a new Arnav, one who realizes what the emotions he was feeling about her were.  I am glad Ashok was there first instead of Kushi because along with the feelings he is developing, the conversation with his Dad also forced him to face the reality of their situation.  I like that Ashok's guided him to those realizations but did not provide answers.  Though I felt bad for Kushi, I hope she does not jump to conclusions before talking to him.

The scene where he reveals his feelings for her was absolutely perfect, no beating around the bushes expecting her to reveal her feelings first.  He exposed himself and his vulnerability by sharing his feelings first which is a very hard thing for a guy to do.  I think she appreciates this and that is why they were able to just sit and enjoy the moment.  

I am glad you gave us this before the storm hits.  Now I am a bit confused as to what happens exactly to split them up.  They are so good at communicating that it is hard for me to accept the fact that they will not discuss the job offer.  Anyway I will wait for you to continue.

@Bold: Okay first things first- I couldn't help but notice the pun here. Beat around the bush? Rose bushes? LOL LOL LOL Okay I'm done. I'm far too amused by terrible puns. Runs in the family, and (un)fortunately, I inherited it too LOL

Puns aside- that vulnerability is also another thing I really, really wanted to portray. I wanted Arnav- who traditionally doesn't share his feelings- to put his guard down here, and that does make a difference for Khushi.

However- I will say, that people don't want to lose something beautiful, and will run from what could cause them to lose it. 

Thank you, for always leaving such beautiful comments!

Edited by chotidesi - 20 January 2015 at 5:54am

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Arshi67 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 6:28am | IP Logged
"Their names seemed to meld together, fitting together like two shards of broken glass, the

 jagged edges squeezing themselves into the crevices."

Choti such beautiful words. Clap

Each update leaves me stumped at the poignancy with which you portray the emotions of 

each and every character. 

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