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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
What a beautiful chapter!

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
This is one of those absolutely well thought out stories
there is no hesitation in your narration or characterization.
Its a pleasure to read!


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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
Arnav's thoughts and his emotions are so clear that it even surprises him. The way his heart spoke about there being so one to Ashok along with he fact that he will never let her go. Can't let her go. The way he just said that he loved Khushi and repeated it without hesitation. Yet he hid the fact about his job coz he wants this moment to last at least even if there future together is unsure.
And there is Ashok who understands his son well yet didn't want to push him in sharing his feelings or pressure him. Yet he guided him hoping he will give Khushi and her decision respect.

And there was Khushi who acted herself. Cautious. Not jumping in to his confession with hers. She knew about his job as well yet she waited for him to speak up and still let it pass for the contentment and longevity of the love confession she always wanted to hear but never thought will be possible.

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 12:01am | IP Logged
niceee

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 12:14am | IP Logged
That was a confession. ..Rather than a proposal..excellent chapter

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anukap Senior Member
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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 12:39am | IP Logged
Choti my dear you are an awesome writer. This update was so lovely and you got the emotions spot on. Well, I hope this warm fuzzy feeling between the two lasts for a while before the nk thingy comes in between. Well done, now waiting for the next.

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Awwii
Confession time.
I love You time.
Arshi time.

Nice heartfelt update. Smile

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Arnav proposed that too so easily, this was such a surprise. Loved his proposal and Khushi's reaction. 
  But this is just the beginning, resistance is yet to be seen. Waiting for more:-) 

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