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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
I cannot believe Arnav is thinking of marriage...I hope khushi gets what she wants

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
i missed out on 2 of your updates i am catching up tday... :-)
Arnav thinking about marriage with Kushi but he also wants her happiness and does not want to hurt her ...where does that leave them...in-spite of that he cannot see her belong to another guy...

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Heavens_Flower

How to resist when...



All he can see is Khushi everyway
Unable to tear his eyes away
The slip of sliver glinting ray
How to resist when his eyes obey


All he can hear is Khushi's appeals
The distinctive tinkling of her payals
What the noiseless laughter reveals 
How to resist when his ears signals


All he can feel is Khushi's merits
The vulnerability as they sat up on the terrace
The sharp nudge in his stomach as realization hits
How to resist when his heart cherish


All he can crave is Khushi for something
The taste of her sweet mouth enticing 
The kiss leaving them with wanting
How to resist when his taste buds becomes exciting


All he can smell is Khushi's scent 
The distinctive fragrance through the wind
A perfume so unique and refined 
How to resist when his nose has its own mind


All he can think of is Khushi around
Love for her making him spellbound
A future with her life wraparound
How to resist when his brain is astound


All he needs is his Khushi at best
Is that the person who makes his heart go dhak dhak
Or is it the letter that makes his heart thud in his chest
How to resist when one needs to choose his quest


I think this one is your best one yet, Re Re. It perfectly, perfectly captures this sense of anticipation that I wanted, the discovery of love, the spell that's between them.

Please make an index.


Edited by chotidesi - 16 January 2015 at 8:21pm

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiwikali

Oh wow. You have me believing in a happy ever after for these two, yet I'm not sure I can trust you to deliver it, just yet. I'm waiting for the twist in the tale...

LOL LOL LOL

Damn it, I was hoping I'd get you to trust me!

I can assure you that they will have a happily ever after.


Now whether it will come when you want it, that... that is debatable. 


Edited by chotidesi - 16 January 2015 at 8:21pm

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhavali4RR

I am not sure who said but I got remembered of the poster that used to hang in my principal's office - "If Speech is silver, silence is golden". I am renewing my appreciation of that quote after reading your chapter and who knew silence could be so loud and so much can be accomplished just by looking . I guess seeing and feeling is lot more powerful than just hearingSmile.

What a deserving coincidence that just like Arnav and Khushi, you have captured and expressed the essence of infinite love with finite words. The feeling of being in love, the butterflies in your tummy, the moments of wanting, a sense of holding, being so close and yet feeling so far - moments like these are always a special feeling and kudos to you for being one of very few who have the charm to put it in words for others to feel it Clap.

And the kiss - as they say, a kiss that is not tasted is always wastedBig smile. Thanks for not wasting it for us and even though it turned out to be the most silent one, I am sure the echo of this one will last a lot longer. Keep them coming and we will promise you that it will not go wasted Big smile

That line. I like these little gems you leave me in your comments- last time, it was the food metaphor that made me incredibly hungry.

And this time, it is one of my favorite words! An echo. I'm flattered that I was able to make you feel the feeling of being in love, the butterflies- the silent, secret glances that only the couple is privy to. 

Thank you!

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
Hi!

I'm still finishing up some major editing on this update. I'm not sure when it'll be up- but hopefully soon! I realized I wanted to change something, and it's taking a lot longer than I expected. 

I'm really sorry! Thank you for waiting :)

Love always,
Choti


Edited by chotidesi - 17 January 2015 at 8:10am

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
What ever is brewing in your pot authorji.. I am sure it will be worth the wait. :) 

Originally posted by chotidesi

Hi!

I'm still finishing up some major editing on this update. I'm not sure when it'll be up- but hopefully soon! I realized I wanted to change something, and it's taking a lot longer than I expected. 

I'm really sorry! Thank you for waiting :)

Love always,
Choti

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Thank you for the note..Take your time and update...Thumbs Up

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