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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
awesome...make their wish possible please...

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
Very beautifully written...
They r completely in love with each other...
Hope their wish comes true...

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
I am not sure who said but I got remembered of the poster that used to hang in my principal's office - "If Speech is silver, silence is golden". I am renewing my appreciation of that quote after reading your chapter and who knew silence could be so loud and so much can be accomplished just by looking . I guess seeing and feeling is lot more powerful than just hearingSmile.

What a deserving coincidence that just like Arnav and Khushi, you have captured and expressed the essence of infinite love with finite words. The feeling of being in love, the butterflies in your tummy, the moments of wanting, a sense of holding, being so close and yet feeling so far - moments like these are always a special feeling and kudos to you for being one of very few who have the charm to put it in words for others to feel it Clap.

And the kiss - as they say, a kiss that is not tasted is always wastedBig smile. Thanks for not wasting it for us and even though it turned out to be the most silent one, I am sure the echo of this one will last a lot longer. Keep them coming and we will promise you that it will not go wasted Big smile

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
So much emotions in this wedding and it is making me go back in time to mine.  Weddings are special, hain NA?  The bride and groom's love for each other was very touching - Anjali and Aman made it look like dreams do come true, that the raj kumari does marry her rajkumar and live happily ever after.  And then you show the parallel with the other couple with strong emotions between them along with a big chasm that they need to overcome to achieve this happily ever after. However this wedding did produce the desired effect in him - that is he wants her as his wife.  Big question is how?  To some extent, I think Kushi was able to read this in his eyes too.  Is Sakshi putting pressure on Kushi to accept NK?  Is this why she thinks his parents would prefer her Union with NK over Arnav?   I thought the chai making scene was so domestic, he knows how she likes her chai and made it just right long with the jalebis.  Sure look like a hubby taking care of his missy.  Oh, they both have so much to think about as they have reached the do or die stage in their relationship I fear.  They now can't just take it a day at a time to see what happens but rather how can they be together always?  

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
u rocked it choti...
all subtle emotions and nuisances... so beautifully written... hats off to you... 

thanks for writing this... 

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Amazing update

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
lovely update. 
There was so much of emotions, all the unsaid words and yet both of them were able to understand what the other felt. 
How much they want and need each other is so evident but their personal dreams are so different that they are scared of being disappointed when the initial love frenzy calms down. And, the fact that they have even thought about such a scenario, marriage and long term bonds like their parents, tell us how serious they are about each other. 

Looking forward to more turmoil. I enjoy such stuff. Smile

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 11:34pm | IP Logged


Very Beautiful chapter...wonderful thoughts between Arnav and Khushi...their feelings described so beautifully...as I scrolled down the lines from the marriage mandap...the lines got better and better...cannot wait to see these two get married now irrespective of the differences...their love came across so well that the differences do not matter anymore...Wink

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