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Posted: 31 March 2015 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhavali4RR

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It is very interesting to realize that your story uses so many words to convey Arshi's silence and your Arshi use so much silence to convey what many words cannot say. Silence or words, your story and your characters are just equally amazing. And you my dear, deserve all the praise for making it happen in every week, in every twist and every turn.

First of all, it was a most gratifying read for me. Yes, a tender kiss, faint rustle, the fingers slide and a small smile is all it took for me. But, these gestures this time, are of a totally different kind. Maybe because they come from a sense of understanding and a commitment. And that for me, is when a wedding ends and a marriage begins.

Arnav - If ever there is something called a right mix of caring and not caring, then what he did comes very close. For me, other than his England ambition, it's hard not to admire every move he made so far. Right from getting married to displaying his emotions to taking care of Khushi. He did what was needed for Arshi.

Khushi - The mind is still at war but heart is slowly winning the battles. I am hoping the smile at the end is the beginning of a new journey. She should have realized by now that she is the most important rose in his garden. She will soon realize that, the proof of that is not in how beautiful the bloom is, but it is in the time that gardener spent in nurturing it.  

NK - The love for his country cannot be any more pure than this, knowing what he has readily put on the line for the sake of that. We love you too and are wishing for some happy miracle. Have to respect his commitment and offer salute to his guts.

Some stories grow on you so much that sometimes when you are commenting, you kind of get the feeling if you could even do half justice to really what you want to convey. But I guess, that simple feeling already proves how much this story matters to me and a million thanks to you Choti for making that possible. 


Manasa, your comment made me teary eyed. Sach mae, I was misty eyed and emotional. 

@blue: I've got a little obsession with silence. I love how it can say so much without saying anything at all. Thank you for noticing it. 

@pink: I loved that line! That's what I wanted with this chapter- these two are sort of kind of maybe just beginning to understand each other. And while their journey isn't over yet, it's a good start.


@red: this made my eyes misty. My chapters don't do justice to your comments, that's how it should be. Your comments always, always, always hit the nail on the head- it's not just one little piece of chocolate, reading these are like getting an entire box of orange and raspberry filled dark chocolate truffles all to myself. Thank you! 

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Posted: 01 April 2015 at 7:19am | IP Logged
They are getting closer daily, although they love one another they can't see eye to eye about India and England

I feel sad for NK losing his life for his country but proud that he stood up for what he believed in

The English at that time oppressed and killed so many innocents not only in India but all over the  world. They thought themselves to be better than everyone else.

But in truth they were just bullies.

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Posted: 01 April 2015 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Haila... it's Wednesday and time for Aap to make a appearance... Baccha when will that happen?

Your Di is waiting for Aap... Day Dreaming

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Posted: 01 April 2015 at 7:46am | IP Logged
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We have to have our AAP there er dancing as well ...


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Posted: 01 April 2015 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Thank you so much for giving me a thread three. The new chapter has been posted there.



Love you all, always,
Choti.

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Awesome story.

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