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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Loved the update dear...especially the way u wrote about khushi and Arnav ' s feelings...
They both surely can't fight the love they have...
But on the other side feeling rilli sad fo NK...
Is he rilli going to die??
The conversation between NK and Aman was very touchy...
Amazing update dear...Very strong and matured writing. ...continue soon tc

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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
I feel so sad for NK :-(  But proud of him ..

I guess Arnav resigned from his job in UK..he better do

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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
What a contrasting update! I mean if part 1 was the love + resistance scenario in between Khushi which was all a smooth yet intense part, Part two was damn emotional breaking the whole wall! 
Man I feel for Nk especially now! He deserves a chance! He does!

And Aman what a beauty he's turned out to be!

Loved the update as usual!
 
You have, a unique way with words here! Truly gifted!


Stay blessed!


cheers

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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update...loved Anjali who understood Arnav and Khushi and trying to make khushi see what she is trying to not see...Arnav and Khushi struggling and trying to not acknowledge what they have in between them...Aman and NK convo misted my eyes...poor NK he had to under go so much...he felt happy for khushi...his parting words were touching...thanks for the PM

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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
awesome. ...loved it...

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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update... I think ill come back later to comment when my emotions r in check

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addicted25 Senior Member
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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Shocked OMG!!!!!!!!!
How has Aman got himself locked up? Please dont let Arnav be behind it, it will break everyones heart. Or is this the kick in the butt that Arnav needs to see Khushis point of view?

I loved the way they came together ( ladies get your mind out of the gutter Wink thats not what I meant!) I meant she realises that he loves her and is now sharing his bed, holding hands is a great way to start, none of that explosive stuff you get in modern stories. It was very sweet the way its been written Choti.

But what got tears in my eyes was Nikils plea to Aman, tell his dad that he loves him. Little does he know that Aman ( ok conjecture here) gave up himself up to save NK.

Clap Clap Clap This story is amazing!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter XXX

Edited by addicted25 - 25 March 2015 at 3:12pm

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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
I still can't wrap my head around the fact that you are only 18. The last few chapters were so intense and an emotional roller coaster, and you wrote them with so much depth and maturity. You are one talented girl. Thank you for the brilliant story :) 

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