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Posted: 20 March 2015 at 8:53am | IP Logged
This story gets better with each update!
How I enjoyed reading this chapter.
You showed us a tender loving Arnav here.
We already knew he loved Khushi.
But here one could feel his desperation.
The worry that something was wrong with her.
He is afraid he will lose her.
Beautifully written, Choti.
I love your attention to detail.
This hzppened around 75 years ago.
And one can sense that. The bobby pin, the thermometer with the mercury and other such instances remind us that this is a historical piece of fiction.



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Posted: 20 March 2015 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Awesome updateTongue I can't believe that arnav let khushi sleep outside Confused but i know that from now on, his love for khushi will definitely overtake his big fat egoWink Can't wait 2 read moreSmile eagerly waiting for the next updateBig smilethanku soo much for giving us such a wonderful updateTongue


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very well written update...Clap

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Posted: 20 March 2015 at 9:18am | IP Logged
lovely update

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awesome! just awesome
how he takes care of herDay Dreaming
thankeee Heart

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Posted: 20 March 2015 at 10:05am | IP Logged
beautifully written

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Posted: 20 March 2015 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Awesome chapter...the early morning after their marriage...she got up from the pool side, with fever and body aches...he missed her and still sleeping with her dreams...he knew that she was by his side and still wanted to continue the dream as she would move away if she knew that he is awake...she did not realize that she is sharing the room with him and walked without wrapping the saree...it is new to both of them watching each other getting ready early morning...he noticed that she did not applied sindoor and offered...she felt the pain when he had a cut while shaving...beautifully written...it is as though happening in my home...I am witnessing it...he would not forgive himself for her ill health...the possessive husband is taking care of his lovely wife...it is so enticing seeing him taking care of her...beautifully written...

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great update

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