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ipkndlover75 Senior Member
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Posted: 13 March 2015 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Could really feel Arnavs pain and shock at Khushis decision...it was so palpable... Amazing job!!!

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Posted: 14 March 2015 at 2:19am | IP Logged
Amazing update...
Shaadi part was  beautifully written...
Ashok's conversation with arnav was heartwarming...
Both khushi and arnav are strong headed...let's see how their married life progresses...

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Posted: 14 March 2015 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Dearest Choti, this was a wonderful chapter.
Their marriage was described to such perfection, both yearning to be together, lost in their feelings wanting to be with each other. Repeating their vows to be husband and wife together. The sanscrit adding to the meaning far more than I could ever imagined. Is it still taught in todays India? The scenes after the wedding where Ashok, asked Arnav to keep his daughter happy, and in turn keep himself happy, were touching , but somehow him waiting for his father to help him was so much more heartfelt, this man does understand his resposibilities, even though his heart still yearns to go back to England. Khushi sitting on the bed remembering their conversation re the mendhi, relating it to the present, and how she felt for him, prepared to be his wife in all ways. Couldn't Aman have waited to give him the letter? Khushis feeling for his disregard for her thoughts and wants is warrantied, but so unlike the 1930s world, an incredible thought for someone from that era. Most women would have accepted it was not their choice, but she stood up for her needs, good for her, but gosh did she have to war with her own inner needs to be with him. Good for Arnav his last words to her had me floored. Clap Clap Clap
Awesome update Choti, cant wait forcthe nextechapter. Hug

Edited by addicted25 - 14 March 2015 at 7:44am

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Posted: 14 March 2015 at 7:57am | IP Logged
I love this story. I actually love anything you write. but this one story, it's so strong. I generally pick sides, I'm a practical person so I always side withheld more practical party (protagonist that is), but this one story has me boggled, I can't pick a side, I just cannot. I cannot wish for either of them to lose their perspective. I don't know how you're going to reach a middle ground here, for I would be upset if either of them lost their outlook, their perspective. I cannot wait to se how you're going to play these characters, how you will turn this around.

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Posted: 14 March 2015 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Choti ... I just don't know how i've missed the last three chapters Ouch
will try and catch up before your next update ...

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Posted: 14 March 2015 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
There finally got married now where will this take them get them closer or far away from for each other

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Posted: 14 March 2015 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arshi67

Originally posted by 1chilly

I undssed, on page 107!
Made it to the first page. Big smile


Baaraatis making sure to bag the ringside view of the Shaadi?!    LOL

Hehe! How could the wedding take place without the honoured guests! Wink

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Posted: 15 March 2015 at 6:33am | IP Logged
the fact that both know that they love each other makes things so much more complicated! loved the feelings u described

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