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cocoamob Senior Member
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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
I loved the way you described Sakshi and Ashok's relationship. Theirs was an arranged marriage and it took her years to understand him but the journey is sweet - their courtship was romantic and a long one :-)
NK seems to be a fuse ready to blow and could hurt a lot of people with his impulsiveness. Remembering the prologue, Khushi may get pulled into his actions as well? 

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
Freedom  movement is fast catching up .
Sakshi is being sensible here and till now the NK has not been rejected by khushi...let's c. how far this goes...
Arnav is really trying to make it work!

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
my heart went all Dhak Dhak..

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
interesting chapter.everytime u keep us waiting for more.

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
Happy New Year!!!

This one feels like a buy 1 get three free offer Wink. And you can never get enough of the free stuff Smile. Aman/Anjali, NK/Kushi, Arnav/Kushi, Sakshi/Ashok - the platter was well set and kudos to your writing skill Clap, you have made sure we tasted them all without overeating.

The sweet appetizer from Aman/Anjali was a perfect starter followed by the hot headed dish from Kushi/NK. The perfectly slow cooked Sakshi/Ashok story brought the aromas out and finally the sweet and tart dessert from Kushi/Arnav definitely ended up with me asking for more.

Overall, it feels like the stories are just meatier from all directions and it definitely raised my anticipation level. The sweet undertones you are bringing to these love stories are marvelous. Keep them coming and as always will be eagerly waiting for the next update.


Edited by bhavali4RR - 07 January 2015 at 8:53pm

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhavali4RR

Happy New Year!!!

This one feels like a buy 1 get three free offer Wink. And you can never get enough of the free stuff Smile. Aman/Anjali, NK/Kushi, Arnav/Kushi, Sakshi/Ashok - the platter was well set and kudos to your writing skill Clap, you have made sure we tasted them all without overeating.

The sweet appetizer from Aman/Anjali was a perfect starter followed by the hot headed dish from Kushi/NK. The perfectly slow cooked Sakshi/Ashok story brought the aromas out and finally the sweet and tart dessert from Kushi/Arnav definitely ended up with me asking for more.

Overall, it feels like the stories are just meatier from all directions and it definitely raised my anticipation level. The sweet undertones you are bringing to these love stories are marvelous. Keep them coming and as always will be eagerly waiting for the next update.

I loved this comment! But I also ended up feeling hungry.. :) 

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
I feel for Aman. He is a leader and it must be quite difficult for him to keep everyone together, present a united front when people are scattering.
Differences between them are starkly clear and so is their feelings for each other. They may not have same opinion about the struggle for independence but they do think on the same lines for each other.
Khushi's dilemma is quite understandable with NK. Her heart can't love him irrespective of their same goal and dream. Few things are not meant to be.
I loved the little glimpse in Ashok and Sakshi's world.
Arnav has said without exactly saying it and Khushi has understood. Now I wonder what led them to the situation where we first met them in the prologue. Do they finally rebel in non-violent way and also does she say yes to NK?

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Firstly wishing you a very happy new year;
Now an amazing update cupid Anjali did help! And wonderfully you sketched out each and every dynamic of relationship wrt all the couples!!

Lovely! Beautifully penned down!


Cheers


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