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Posted: 05 March 2015 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Awesome update...

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Posted: 05 March 2015 at 11:58am | IP Logged
This update was loaded with emotions and each of them were so well depicted by every character.
Sakshi's hurt and guilt of being betrayed by her kids for not coming to her and letting her know what they want and how they felt of other and than her guilt of not understanding her kids was so well portrayed. Than her joy of having her long unspoken wish if seeing Khushi and Arnav together and having Khushi as her daughter and daughter-In-law coming true. But in all this a lingering doubt of whether these two people of different thoughts and belief will be able to make it through a happy marriage, which was part relieved by the emotions and feelings Khushi and Arnav let out without any guards unintentionally at the dinner table was so amazing.

Ashok's helplessness of not able to help Khushi on seeing her sheen eyes on Arnav's declaration of going back to London after wedding, his helplessness on seeing his wife hurt and on himself on finding short of words to comfort her. Irrespective of years of being together each marriage has it's own challenges and that is well portrayed here. 

Khushi is a kind of person who keeps others wishes and happiness above hers and her guilt of betraying her friend NK is eating her joy of her wish of living her life with her love coming true. But than she doubts her and Arnav's love now as nothing but the passing and Arnav's change demeanor only makes her doubt more. But the way she understood all the emotions and feelings Arnav let shown on his face and his apology in his gesture along wih her belief that he will never let her fall, says all that there is still love wrapped in layers of doubts. It will be interesting to see how she overcome those doubts and accept Arnav as her husband.

Arnav's need, his love, his jealousy, his guilt, his apology they all were like the living being along with him. Such livid were his emotions that after going through each it becomes difficult to hate him for overlooking Khushi's want in this relation for his selfishness to have her in his life forever.

Again a splendid job choti!!!Clap

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Posted: 05 March 2015 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Choti, another awesome update from you!!!
I love the way you portray emotions with just a touch or a squeeze of the hand or just a look. In real life how we take these actions for granted and never realise how much one can convey with these little gestures.

Ashok is shocked that the kids suddenly decided to marry and is wondering what happened to their differences. He even confronts Arnav about it, but Arnav cleverly hides everything and Khushi too says that she wants to marry Arnav.

Sakshi is hurt because her kids hid the fact from her, the fact that they love each other and want to get married. As a mother, she probably expected atleast Khushi to have told her something before making a grand entry with hand -in-hand.

Arnav, he loves Khushi, scared of losing her to NK and took this opportunity to get her to agree marrying him. But whatever his methods are, he surely loves her from his heart.

Khushi loves Arnav but here she is feeling so guilty of betraying NK. NK betrayed their Ahimsa following group and she saw the guilt and remorse in his eyes at the police station for breaking their trusts. Khushi does not want to repeat the betrayal act by marrying Arnav even though she wants to marry Arnav. 

Will Arnav understand her mental turmoil when marrying her? Also what is this he wants to runaway to England soon. But what about Khushi, does she want to go or not???

Finally their wedding, a few more hours and then they will be married for life!!!!
Waiting to see how things progresses after their marriage.

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Posted: 05 March 2015 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 05 March 2015 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
that was another wonderful chapter...you cant help but still fall for this Arnav ..he is so filled with anger and jelousy  against NK  ...just beacause Kushi was ready to marry him and had placed a faith in NK..
he feels like he has to tie her to him...legally spiritually and physically...and she is no less in love inspite of what he made her do they do love...but i wonder what his  return to england would bring about...
awaiting next update..
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Posted: 05 March 2015 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Choti what a full on update. First the announcement that thay are getting married, then the parental confrontations, Sakhshi and Khushis relationship is so sweet, and I liked how she hoped that she wanted them to get married, alas his need to keep her away from NK is pushing him to move back to the uk. Maybe he is hoping that with time her love for him will return. I loved his inner dialogue, he seems to be fighting with himself, even though his heart is telling him that he doesnt wsnt to let her go.BRAVO young lady take a bow, myriads of emotion, intertwined with simmeting desire was completely oveshadowed by keeping her safe from external men.

brilliantly written.

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Posted: 05 March 2015 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 05 March 2015 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
The is such a beautifully written chapter. The emotional turmoil that every character is going through especially arnav's roller coaster ride.
This arnav is more believable for me than the one in the show.. 

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