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The ups and downs...



How bad, will this anger expand?
NK is getting very impatient
While he is becoming hot and boiling
Aman better remain sensible and calming


How true, one should heed 
Khushi is talking of a creed
When they need to unite and be smart
Internal conflicts will break them apart


How touching, the older couple's bonding
Ma is still learning about Papa
And their love is still growing
With their life, love to continue to be blooming


How apt, Khushi reading Sense and Sensibility
Does her life make similar sense?
Will her sensibility help to dispense
Khushi's self erected defense


How sweet, Chote brining sweets
He not only bring what his Ma needs
But also bring Khushi's favorites
Thus help the love to increase


How typical, Arnav is jealous
Good thing that it is making him conscious
Great to see him rattled by the marriage process
About time he admits his feeling and be honest


How sad, with one sentence
Arnav made himself a distance
While Khushi says "India is my favorite place"
Arnav says "this is my favorite place is my India"


How enchanting, both smiling, whew!
He knew that she knew
She knew that he cares too 
Hopefully their affection grew



Edited by Heavens_Flower - 10 January 2015 at 3:18pm

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 7:14am | IP Logged
loved Arnav.. he is so optimistic... good one..

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Things are surely getting complicated between them.

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Just loved the way you portrayed 3 love stories in this story. All 3 different from each other but the ulterior motive is to love unconditionally. 
The part where Sakshi blew off the bomb of Khushi's marriage with NK and Arnav's reaction on that had me feeling happy . I like green eyed monsters...

Last part was beautiful... he wanted her to know that he cared, had feelings and would claim her when the time comes.. And she knew !!!! 

Continue soon !!!

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 10:11am | IP Logged
very interesting ... would love to read more :)

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
Sorry Choti, but today was a complicated day, as you have heard on the news.
I was quite upset by the goings on and didn't come online at all.

Just read the update.
Khushi seems caught between what is good for her and what she really wants.
This certainly is a dilemma.
Wonder what turn her life will take now.
Arnav is jealous of NK and wants Khushi for himself.
But is he ready to sacrifice his way of life for her?

When are you posting the next chapter? Big smile 

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
beautiful update as always
thanks for pm xx

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Posted: 07 January 2015 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Choti, loved this update.

The path of non violence is always tough. Results are not immediately visible and but the results are guaranteed. History is the witness to it.

You have described the turmoil Aman and NK are facing so well. Aman and Anjali are indeed made for each other. 
Loved the way Khushi made NK understand their POV. 

Ways of destiny are indeed strange. Even if NK and Khushi are ideally the perfect pair, yet Khushi fell for Arnav.

Loved the little gestures Arnav is showing like bringing jalebis for her along with other sweets knowing that she likes it.

The ending part was so good, Arnav trying to prove to Khushi that he also cares for his mother land just like her.

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