Choti, what an exquisitely written update on coming to terms with reality. Living with your decision. Sach mein, kyun dard hain itna tere ishq mein. My heart aches for the two of them. You've brought out their emotions and feelings of pain and bewilderment at what's happening so beautifully.
Ashok's perspicaciousness had continued to give me hope that he will be able to bang some sense into their heads, but Khushi's acceptance of NK's proposal has my heart sinking. A girl like her will not go back on her word I think. Ab kya hoga?
While I understand Sakshi's joy at the prospect of seeing her daughter settled, I wish she'd see the resignation in Khushi's demeanour. She's giving in, not accepting the proposal. Something Anjali sees so clearly.
Your writing, my love, just gets better with each update. The depth with which you are able to portray their feelings is searingly poignant. I love it!
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