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Case SS : Missing Chapter 6 updated - 09/04/2015 Pg : 14 (Page 14)

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Posted: 10 March 2015 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
awesome update sneha..
finally some investigative moves..van mil gaya..but koi faida nehi...another dead end..
aisha spoke to her dad...good...Big smile
sakshi is covering up TongueTongueTongue
then comes the fbs...nice ones again...SmileSmile
Sam subah subah hi pohuch gaya aisha ko dekhne..TongueTongueTongue

continue soon...SmileSmile


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firstly, Don't start expecting much by seeing my comment. I am not a regular reader of this wonderful story of yours. just read it for the first time today n I really don't know when I will read the next chap.
Secondly, The prologue is very much interesting.
It is not a new concept but coming it from you surely made it special.
Everything was written with utmost care. I am glad that you did not make any OTT expressions.
I am actually surprised by your improvement  in writing skill. 
you are doing a great job. Keep it up girl.Thumbs Up


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Wow dear...
It's awesome update...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon...
And thanks for the pm..

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sorry for late comment
awesome update
lovely flashbacks 
con soon
thanks for pmSmile

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Posted: 28 March 2015 at 5:49am | IP Logged
awesome update
love sameer concern for aisha 
aisha ne apne father ko contact kar liya 
shree uss number ko trace kar raha hai 
like the case details 
but they don't have any clue 
love both FB,...specially second wala
love arjun's pov
love the last part
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Hello Friends, I am back with a update after a month...LOLLOLLOL

And as usual again I am late...this update is dedicated for my Thakur aka rimi_invisible...Big smileBig smileBig smile...I know bohat din ho gaye but still belated Happy Birthday Thakur...HugHugHug

To the readers of this story I want to tell you all that Thakur has always been there for me & my story, she has helped me every time & has even proof read...there is not a single update which has not been read by her prior to update except this update, as it is dedicated to her it has been proof read by Shakal aka Annu di...Thank you Annu di...HugHugHug

I hope you like it Thakur...HugHugHug

Chapter 6

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Sameer don't know for how much time he was sitting there lost in his thoughts, his thought were broken only with the door opening noise, doctor has came for check up.

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Sameer stood up to greet doctor, doctor came towards him & smiled, both shake hands. After that doctor took the reports from the side table & started looking at the details.

Sameer asked looking at sleeping Aisha, "How is she doctor??"

Doctor smiled & said, "She is fine now...you can take her home"

Sameer looked at him confused, doctor smiled & said, "Legs ki chot kafi hadh tak theek ho gayi hai, right hand pe toh plaster abhi rahega, & about her memory, woh yahan hospital mein rehke wapas nahi aayegi, so it's better if she go back her home"

Sameer nodded at him & asked, "Toh kab tak discharge hoga"

Doctor replied, "Noon tak"

Sameer said, "Ok...& thanks doctor"

Doctor replied, "No need to thanks Mr Rathod...it our duty  & make sure unko yeh sach ki woh apni 8 saal ki memory kho chuki hai kahin aur se pata na chale, I mean kisi ajneebi se".

Sameer, "We will take care of that doctor"

After that doctor left from there. Sameer looked at sleeping Aisha, thought something & called Sakshi.

Sakshi was almost ready & was combing her hair when her phone buzzed blinking Sameer's name. Sakshi put the comb on table & picked the call, "Haan Sameer"

Sameer, "Sakshi...doctor aaj noon tak Aisha ko discharge kar denge"

Sakshi became happy hearing this & said, "Woww...that's good news"

Sameer, "Haan...lekin ek problem hai"

Sakshi asked, "Kaisi problem??"

Sameer, "Aisha rahegi kahan...I mean iss halat mein usse akele toh uske ghar mein nahi rehne de sakte"

Sakshi relied, "Oh haan...waise bhi abhi tak unn goons ka bhi kuch pata nahi chala hai"

Sameer, "Haan"

Sakshi, "Toh ab??"

Sameer, "Ya toh kisi ko Aisha ke saath Aisha ke ghar rehna hoga, ya phir Aisha ko kisi aur ke ghar"

Sakshi, "Mujhe nahi lagta ki Aisha kisi aur ke ghar pe rehne ke liye manegi?"

Sameer, "Right...isliye kisi ko Aisha ke ghar hi rehna hoga"

Sakshi, "Haan...kaun Aisha ke saath rahega yeh hum baad mein sochenge, abhi mein Aisha ke ghar jake ussko thoda saaf kar deti hoon"

Sameer replied, "Haan..thik hai"

With that both cut the call. Sameer has just cut the call when he heard door opening, he turned to see who has arrived & saw Chotu-Shree coming inside.

Chotu-Shree together in slow hush voice, "Good morning sir"

Sameer nodded at them, Shree saw Aisha sleeping & indicate Sameer to come in a side, Sameer understood.

Trio were standing in a corner, Sameer asked, "Haan Shree bolo"

Shree, "Sir meine uss number ke bare mein pata kiya"

Before Shree can continue, Arjun entered the room, Arjun saw them standing in corner, went to them & asked, "Kya hua"

Chotu, "Sir, Shree ne uss number ke bare mein pata kar liya hai jispe Aisha ne kal apne papa se baat ki thi"

Arjun looked at Shree, Shree continued, "sir jab uss number pe call kiya gaya tab woh railway station par tha"

Arjun asked puzzled, "Mumbai se Kolkata jane ke liye koi train kyu lega??"

Shree, "Sir...yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hai...aage sunoge toh aur sawal dimag mein aayenge??"

Sameer asked confusingly, "Kaise sawal"

Shree, "Sir...yeh number Aisha ke call karne se pehle band tha...aur call karne ke baad bhi band ho gaya"

Sameer-Arjun, "What??"

Shree, "Haan sir"

Sameer, "Par kyu??"

Shree, "yeh toh pata nahi Sir...par yeh 12 saal pehle ek business owner Narendra Gupta ne kharida tha... aur sir yeh number Aisha ke phone lagane se lagbag 5 ghante pehle chori hua tha, chori hone ke baad phone sirf thode time ke liye hi on hua jis time pe Aisha ne baat ki"

Rathod-Arjun-Chotu were confused, they were trying to figure out something from this news, but Shree dropped another bomb on them saying, "Aur ab yeh number band hai...yeh number on bhi railway station pe hua tha aur band hone se phele bhi railway station par hi tha"

Confusion & only confusion left for team, Chotu voiced a bit loud, "Sir...yeh kya hai...kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai"

Just then they heard a voice, "Kya samajh nahi aa raha hai??"

All looked at the source & found Aisha awake, sometime back Aisha woke up, after adjusting her eyes in light & sitting on bed, she saw Rathod-Arjun-Shree-Chotu standing in a corner & talking among themselves very slowly, she could not understand what they were talking bcoz she can only hear there murmurs, she was getting curious on what they were talking about just then she heard Chotu, out of curiosity she asked the question.

"Kya hua??", Arjun asked doubting whether she had heard there conversation or not.

Aisha replied, "Aapko kya samajh nahi aa raha hai?? Aur aise dhire dhire kya baat kar rahe ho"

Arjun understood that she had heard only the last line of their conversation i.e. of Chotu, so he replied, "Hum log ek case ki baat kar rahe the"

Aisha replied, "Oh ok"

To change the topic Rathod said, "Tumhare liye ek khushkabri hai??"

Aisha looked confused at him & asked, "Matlab??"

Rathod looked at other who were also looking at him suspiciously, "Woh...tumhe aaj noon tak discharge mil jayega"

Aisha was happy to hear that news & asked, "Really?"

Rathod replied, "Haan"

While Aisha was happy with the news while others were confused & looking at Rathod for confirmation, just then nurse arrived in the room for helping Aisha in her morning chors.

Men came out of the room, & Arjun asked, "Discharge??"

Rathod told him what doctor has said to him & he also told them about the conversation he had with Sakshi.

Just then Sakshi arrived like talking about devil & devil appears. She was carrying a small bag with her, she came to them & asked, "Kya hua?? Tum log bahar kyu khade ho"

Chotu replied , "Kyunki hum andar nahi ja sakte"

Sakshi, "Matlab??"

Shree replied, "Woh nurse andar hai"

Sakshi understood the meaning & said, "Oh"

Arjun asked looking at the bag, "Yeh bag mein kya hai"

Sakshi replied, "Woh kuch clothes hai...mujhe samajh nahi aaya ki Aisha kismein comfortable hogi isliye 4-5 le aayi"

Sakshi stayed at hospital with Aisha while others returned to office, they will come back at the time of discharge.

Sakshi-Aisha were talking among themselves but not like the way they use to talk before the accident, things have changed, now Sakshi took special care in speaking in front of Aisha, she has to be more alert.

On the other side Aisha was happy that she got a new friend in Sakshi although she could not understand that she herself is not a talkative person & mostly don't like such people than Why this girl Sakshi is special.

Their chatting was disturbed by nurse, who came in with a tray in her hand, Sakshi asked looking the tray, "Sister aap nasta laaye ho??"

Nurse looked at her shocked, that nurse was able to guess what was going on inside the room as she was attending Aisha regularly, so she said, "Ji nahi...waise suna tha ki ladkiyo ki baate kabhi khatam nahi hoti...par aaj dekh bhi liya"

By this time nurse has reached near the bed & was taking out the table from under the bed, when Sakshi asked making faces, "Aap kya kehna kya chahte ho...sab log hum dono ko yeh hi tanna kyu marte hai...uss din Chotu bol raha tha aur aaj aap??"

Nurse smiled but before she can reply to Sakshi, Aisha asked, "Chotu...unhone hume kab aisa kuch kaha"

Sakshi was about to reply her but soon she realized her slip of tongue, but Sakshi being Sakshi covered up saying, "Arey woh Chotu ne office mein kaha tha jab mein apni colleague se baat kar rahi thi"

Aisha smiled & said teasingly, "Baat kar rahi thi...ya ghape maar rahi thi"

Sakshi looked at her making different faces & replied, "Whatever"

Aisha could not control her laughter & laughed out aloud, Sakshi ignored her & asked nurse, "Sister aap kuch keh rahe the?"

Nurse replied while settling the table on bed, "Yehi ki yeh naste ka nahi balki lunch ka time ho gaya hai"

Aisha-Sakshi looked at each other in shocked, Sakshi looked at her watch & looked horrified, they were talking from the time team left & they even didn't know.

Nurse asked, "Wasie aap dono aisi kya baatein kar rahe the ki aap logo ko time ka pata hi nahi chala"

Sakshi replied thinking, "abhi toh hum shaadi ki baatein kar rahe the...par baatein start..." Sakshi was trying hard to remember the topic from which they started their conversation but it was looking that she could not remember.

Even Aisha tried hard remembering the initial conversation but could not remember, this time nurse laughed looking at their faces, hearing her laughter both Sakshi-Aisha came out of their thinking mode, nurse said, "rehne do...kabhi yaad nahi aayega...yeh hi toh hum aurto ki khasiyat hai"

Aisha-Sakshi smiled at her.

2 hours later

Aisha was sitting on a bed in a room of a flat which the ETF team said that its her flat but the question arises how does she have a flat in Mumbai?? & how did she landed in Mumbai from Delhi??

Flashback

2 hours before, after having lunch, Shree arrived at hospital as others were busy in a murder case, he met with Aisha & Sakshi & then went out to complete the formalities of discharge, in the mean time Sakshi & nurse helped Aisha to change into her clothes which Sakshi brought along with her in morning.

Sakshi has told her that they will take her at her house, hearing about her house Aisha was confused but didn't voiced out. Soon they were sitting in ETF SUV, Shree was driving, Sakshi was sitting on passenger seat & Aisha was sitting on back seat, whole the way she was looking outside the window, she was thinking how did the city changed in just 3-4 days, why the people outside were looking different & many more but she didn't asked any question to Shree-Sakshi.

Shree-Sakshi were aware of some of her confusions from Aisha's expression but they didn't probe her as Rathod has already said they will tell her about the loss of 8 years in her memory together as they don't know how Aisha will react on that.

When they reached the building, Aisha looked at the building in much confusion but before Shree-Sakshi can tell her something one lady in her late forties spotted Aisha.

That lady came near to Aisha & called her, "Aisha"

Aisha was looking at the huge building when she heard some one calling her, she turned towards that lady, while trying to recognize her she voiced out, "Ji"

That lady smiled & said, "Kahan gayab thi tum itne din...mujhe laga ki tum Mumbai mein nahi ho...sayad kisi under..."

Shree interrupted her as he could guess what that lady was going to say, so he said, "woh aunti ji...Aisha ka accident ho gaya tha...toh hospital mein admit thi"

That's when Lady looked at the plaster on her hand & a bandage on her head, she asked worrily, "arey yeh itni kaise lag gayi tumko??"

Aisha could not reply to her, so Sakshi replied, "Aunti ji ab lag gayi toh gayi...kuch nahi kar sakte sivaye aaram ke"

Lady nodded at Sakshi & said to Aisha, "Ab tum aaram karna...koi kaam mat karna...itni chot dekhke lagata hai ki chot kafi gehri hai...koi jarrorat ho toh batana"

Aisha could not do anything rather than nodding at her. After that the lady went away & Shree-Sakshi brought her in a flat stating that its her flat.

Present

Aisha now came to know why roads, environment was different on the way from hospital to building.

Shree has left from there as he has to go to office, Sakshi left Aisha in her room to take rest & was outside in hall.

But rest was last think in Aisha's mind, due to that lady Aisha came to know that right now she is in Mumbai not in Delhi. But how, she clearly remember that she was returning from her college when she met with an accident than how did she came to Mumbai??"

And most important question is How is her father? Where is he?? And Why did he asked her to lie to ETF team?

Flashback when Aisha called her father

As usual Aisha-Sakshi were chatting with each other, when nurse came inside the room. Both smiled at nurse, so did nurse, nurse came towards them & said to Sakshi, "Aap thodi der ke liye bahar jaiye"

Sakshi asked with confusion, "Why??"

Nurse replied with smile, "Kyunki mein yahan sponge bath dene ke liye aayi hoon"

Sakshi said, "Oh ok" & left from there.

After Sakshi left, nurse started doing some pre-prep for the bath, nurse noticed that Aisha is quite upset, so she ask, "Kya hua??"

Aisha replied, "Kuch nahi"

Nurse, "Kehte hai jhoot nahi bolna chahiye...paap chadta hai" & chuckled on her own statement.

Aisha smiled but did not said anything, nurse also started doing her job. After a while when silence in the room started bothering nurse, she asked, "Kisi ki yaad aa rahi hai"

Aisha asked shocked, "Aapko kaise pata"

Nurse smiled & replied, "Itne saal ho gaye hai mujhe yeh duty karte hue...patient ko dekh ke bata sakti hoon ki uske dimag mein kya chal raha hai"

Aisha replied, "Oh"

When Aisha didn't replied for some more time, nurse herself asked, "Family ko miss kar rahi ho??"

Aisha replied sadly, "Haan"

Nurse, "Toh baat kar lo na unse"

Aisha's face bright up hearing that, "Aap mujhe reception tak le jayengi"

Nurse replied immediately, "Nahi"

Aisha asked, "Kyu??"

Nurse, "Kyunki tum chal nahi sakti",  pointing towards her legs, "aur yahan se reception tak le jane ke liye wheel chair ki jaroorat padegi, matlab doctor se permission leni padegi, jo ki nahi milegi"

Aisha became sad hearing that but nurse came with a option, she pull out her mobile from pocket, seeing mobile Aisha looked at nurse & understood from her smile, nurse said, "number bolo...mein laga deti hoon"

Aisha smiled & said excitedly, "9132***897", this was her father's number.

Nurse dialed the number & forwarded the mobile to Aisha, Aisha took the mobile excitedly in her hand & waited for her dad to pick up the call.

In fifth ring, a man picked up the call & said, "Hello"

Aisha smiled hearing the voice but it was like she was hearing his voice after a very long time, she ignored that & said, "Hello Papa"

Her father, "Aisha??"

Aisha, "Haan"

Her father, "yeh kiska number hai...tum toh hospital mein ho na...wahan se kaise phone kiya"

Aisha, "Woh sister ke phone se kiya hai"

Her father, "Oh ok thik hai...kaisi ho tum?"

Aisha replied thinking something, "Mein thik hoon...lekin aapko kaise pata ki mein hospital mein hoon...aapko ETF mein se kisi  ne bataya"

Her father, "Nahi...mujhe sab pata hai"

Aisha asked, "Kya pata hai"

Her father, "Yeh sab chodo Aisha...pehle yeh batao tumhare aas paas koi hai kya??"

Aisha looking at nurse,who was doing her job, "Haan sister hai"

Hearing this, nurse looked at Aisha & smiled, Aisha also pass the same.

Her father, "Meri baat dhyan se suno...aur sister ke samne koi reaction mat dena...na hi koi sawal puchna"

Aisha asked, cutting him mid, "Par papa..."

Her father didn't let her complete & said, "Aisha please baat ko samajho...baat bohat serious hai"

Aisha was left with only one reply, "Thik hai"

Her father, "Good...toh suno...tum iss waqt ETF team ke saath hi rehna...I am sure jab tak ETF unn gundo ko nahi pakad leti tab tak woh log tumhe akela nahi chodenge isliye tum woh hi karna jo woh log kahe"

Aisha, "Thik hai"

Her father, "Aisha...tumhare aas pass aise bohat si cheese hongi jo tumhe samajh nahi aayegi...par kisi se kuch mat puchna...bus jo cheez ho rahi hai usse hone dena"

Aisha replied confusingly, "Thik hai"

Her father, "Aur sabse khaas baat...galti se bhi apne baare mein kuch mat batana...tumhara naam woh log jante hai...bus isse jyada kuch mat batana ETF team ko"

Aisha replied getting scared now, "Hmmm"

Her father, "Aur mere bare mein bhi...unhe abhi tak tumhare papa ke bhaare mein kuch nahi pata...yahan tak ki mera naam bhi...aur tum unhe batana bhi mat...kuch bhi mat batana"

Aisha replied gulping her saliva, "Hmmm"

Her father, "Aisha...ghabrao mat...mein jald hi sab kuch thik kar dunga..."

Aisha replied, "Hmmm"

Her father, "Bus mujhe tumhara saath chaihye"

Aisha replied, "Mein samajh rahi hoon"

Her father, "Dhyan se...galti se bhi apne bare mein kisi se kuch bol mat dena"

Aisha, "Mein dhyan rakhungi"

Her father, "Good...abhi mein Kolkata ja raha hoon...jaise hi wapas aaunga tumse mil lunga"

Aisha, "Please jaldi aana"

Her father, "Koshish karunga...aur haan ab tum mujhe contact mat karna...jaroorat padne pe mein hi contact kar lunga"

Aisha, "Par aap kaise??"

Her father, "Meri beti kahan hai aur kis haal mein hai...yeh mujhe har waqt pata hota hai"

Aisha's eyes were getting teary, she was feeling very scared now, her father continued, "Aisha...ghabrao mat...kuch nahi hoga tumhe aur na hi mujhe..."

Aisha replied, "Hmmm"

Her father, "Abhi mein rakhta hoon...tum apna dhyan rakhna...aur meri ek ek baat yaad rakhna"

After that Aisha cut the call & gave the mobile back to nurse, nurse was about to ask Aisha about her conversation but just that time a ward boy opened the door & said while standing on the door, "Sister ek emergency hai"

Nurse replied, "OK...I will come"

Ward boy left & soon nurse also left from there without asking anything.

(Note :- Aisha has told the name "Avinash" as her father's name to ETF team, she lied that time, her father's name is not Avinash)

Flashback End

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padh to main pehle hi chuki thi...ab comment kr rhi hu
interesting very interesting
waise aisha k dad ne etf ki ek problem to solve kr di k aisha ab zyda swal nhi puchegi k etf uske sath kyun reh rhi hai
hummm something is very interesting...
aisha k dad antaryami se kam nhi hai...unhe pta tha k aisha kab phone karegi 
to unhone phone uss se kuch derr pehle hi chori karwaya then aisha ka call receive huya
aur uske baad number off ho gya
ab railway station se kya pta chalega...
aisha ko aunty ki baaton se ye to pta chal gya k wo delhi me nhi mumbai me hai
but now what...abhi to aisha ko ye bhi pta chalna baki hai k wo reverse gear me chal rhi hai
Aisha k dad ka samjh nhi aa rha...
unhone aisha ko kaha k etf k sath rehna...matlab k wo aisha ko kidnap nhi karwana chahte the
balki sirf aisha pr nazar banaye huye the...kya wo nazar shuru se hi banaye huye the ya aisha k accident k baad...



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