Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

PrAja SS: Post Marriage Moments! - Page 4

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hey adaah.. !! u r back.. n sorry to comment late.. πŸ˜” now I read ur prologue.. n rushed to comment..😊 so the intro is awesome.. 😳 waiting for the story to continue.. do update soon..πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice  plzzz update soon
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PART 1

The marriage procession reached CHITTOR MAHAL... Ajabde had been crying profusely... As soon as she got down from the palanquin, the first that caught her eyes was her husband... He was dismounting from his horse... From where Ajabde was standing she could only see Pratap's back... She sighed heavily... During their marriage ceremony, she had completely avoided looking at him coz even his presence was overwhelming for her...

As Pratap dismounted the horse he could feel someone's heated gaze on his back... He instantly knew dt it was Ajabde... He closed his eyes... Wid every passing moment, controlling himself around Ajabde was becoming difficult... During the marriage ceremony, he had stole glances at her... She was looking breathtakingly beautiful... It had taken Pratap every ounce of self control to keep his hands to himself...

Pratap took a deep breath, opened his eyes and headed towards his mother who was waiting for them, unknowingly infuriating Ajabde...

A: "Arre!!!!!!! Inhone ek bhi baar hamari taraf dekha nhi aur hum hai jo inke siwa kisiko dekh hi nhi paa rhe hai... Ye toh Ranima ke taraf aise badhe jaa rhe hai jaise vivah nhi koi yuddh jeet ke aaye ho.."

Ajabde was completely lost in her own thoughts and didn't realize that she was headed in the wrong direction.. Suddenly, she collided wid something and was about to fall when two strong hands caught her shoulders...

Ajabde slowly raised her eyes only to see to that she had collided wid none other than RANA UDAY SINGH!!!!!!!

A: "Wo.. woh Ranaji hum.. woh toh..."

US (angrily): " Woh hum kya Ajabde??? Ye aap kaha khoyi hui thi???"

A: "Nhi Ranaji.. H.. H.. Hum toh"

Suddenly, Uday Singh started laughing... Ajabde looked at him, confused...

US: "Ajabde... Aap itna ghabra q rhi hai??? Aapko kya lagta hai ke hum nhi jante ke aapko apne daata aur maa ki yaad aa rhi hai?? Ajabde agar aap chahe toh hume dajiraj keh skti hai qki humne aapko hamari bahu nhi beti maan liya hai.."

Ajabde couldn't believe her ears... All this time, she had been deprived of fatherly love and now that she was married she was being showered with so much of love that to from her father-in-law, the Rana of Mewar... It was too much for her to bear... Without realizing, Ajabde hugged Uday Singh... The sudden hug shocked Uday Singh for a moment but he soon recovered from it and hugged Ajabde back...

The father-daughter love made everyone emotional... Pratap's heart swelled with happiness... His eyes brimmed with unshed tears seeing his father and his wife bonding together...

Ajabde slowly pulled herself back...

A: "Woh.. woh hume k..kshama kr dijiye Ranaji.. Hu..Hum..."

US: "Ajabde, hum aapke Ranaji nhi Dajiraj hai.. Aur ab se aap hume Dajiraj hi keh kr pukarengi... Samjhi aap??

Ajabde's face lightened up...

A: "Ji Ran... Ji Dajiraj..."

US: "Chaliye aapki Ranima aapka intezaar kr rhi hai"

A: "Ji"

Together, father & daughter headed towards Jaivantabai and Pratap... Jaivantabai welcomed the newlyweds with aarti and other rituals... All the while Pratap avoided looking at Ajabde... PrAja were taken to the Kul Devi mandir to take blessings and then were taken to the main hall area for the ring finding ceremony...Pratap and Ajabde were sitting opposite to each other with a huge vessel filled with milk and rose petals between them...

SB: "Ye rahi anguthi... Isse hum iss doodh se bhare patra main dalenge aur aap donoko isse dhundhna hai.. Thik hai?" Saying so she dropped the ring in the vessel... Both, Ajabde and Pratap instantly started searching for the ring... While searching both Ajabde and Pratap looked at each other and were lost in each other's eyes, completely forgetting where they were... Everyone present in the room started smiling shyly...

C: "Arree Baujiraj, aapka dhyan Bhabhisa pe nhi, anguthi pe hona chahiye" Everyone started laughing loudly embarrassing PrAja... They instantly looked away...

The game ended with Pratap winning twice in the three rounds...

SB: "HHmmm.. Lagta hai Ajabde aapko puri zindagi Pratap ki baat manani padegi...  Kahi aapko aapatti toh nhi hai na iss baat pe??"

A: "Arre nhi nhi Manjhali Maa.. Hume koi aapatti nhi.."

SB: " Par q?? Hume toh bilkul achcha nhi lagta agar hamare bindh(husband) humse jeet jate.."

A: "Manjhali Maa, inse harne mein hume koi aapatti nhi hai.. Balki ye toh kbhi bhi hume apni baat manane k liye vivash nhi krenge.."

SB(teasingly): "Arreee wahhh!!!!!!!! Inhe toh bahut bharosa hai apne bindh par"

Ajabde blushed deep red and so did Pratap...

P: "Ranima, woh hu.. hume apne kaksh mein ja kar vishram krna chahiye" Saying this Pratap left from there..

JB: "Kunwar Pratap, suniye.. hmph, lagta hai lajja gaye... Chaliye koi baat nhi.. Ab aapko bhi vishram krna chahiye Ajabde.. Chaliye... Ajabde?? Ajabde??"

Ajabde was looking at the door through which Pratap had just left... It hadn't escaped her that he had avoided looking at her throughout the ceremony...  She was confused and needed to know why was Pratap avoiding her... 

Precap: Ajabde trying to gain Pratap's attention

So, as promised I have updated the first part of the story.. Yes, this part didn't involve PrAja moments bt I needed to build the base of the next part..

Criticism+Appreciation = All welcome

Waiting for your response...

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Edited by adaah22 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: ApekshaM

hey adaah.. !! u r back.. n sorry to comment late.. πŸ˜” now I read ur prologue.. n rushed to comment..😊 so the intro is awesome.. 😳 waiting for the story to continue.. do update soon..πŸ˜‰


Hey Apeksha.. Yup m backπŸ˜ƒ.. Nt an issue😊... Thnks alot and I updated the first part😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thnks
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This content was originally posted by: Pawarneha13

nice  plzzz update soon


Thnks alot.. The first part is updated😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesomeee too good lovelyyy part waitinggg for next asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome part loved it 😳 do continue soon.. n update as soon as possible.. thanks for the pm πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for pm😊
bechara Pratap, he is avoiding Ajab to control himself and now he is going to have it ... an angry wife πŸ˜†
Edited by pari0706 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice thanks for pmπŸ‘πŸΌ