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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

plez update soon..waiting waiting waiting
plez update soon..waiting waiting waiting
plez update soon..waiting waiting waiting
plez update soon..waiting waiting waiting
plez update soon..waiting waiting waiting
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Will do ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Anjinie

feel so bad for Kalpi, how can Raghav be so cruel to Kalpi, and what is wrong with Gauri and Raghav that they are thinking of marrying that which, I really hope Raghav feels like crap when realise that chain Kalpi bought was for him,




Raghav hates Kalpi...So I'm portaying that he hates her and that's it!! He'll bully her and Take advange because she's a Klutz but I'm going to show Kalpi thought she likes him she'll stand up to him,Gauri thinks Kalpi's dead...also That's a lookalke so she's planning a wedding,Raghav is just angry so He'll react like that and he doens't like His Spot,He'll feel like crap don't worry๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Excellent update.

 
Now the time has come for Haider to payback her arrogant boss and his clinging
shrewd girlfriend.
 
Just because,she is clumpsy and childish in nature,Rags doesn't have the rights to misjudge
her,comment abt her status and constantly scold her ,inspite of being a new comer and putting
efforts exceeding her limit.
 
Plzz,why don't u reverse their roles for sometime??.Let him taste his own medicine.
 
Won't he ashamed abt his own acts after knowing her actual identity???
 
Plzz yaar ,try to give the next chappy by tomorrow.Can't wait to see Rag's reactions after his Spot's
sudden emotional outburst!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Thanks so much deary...Yep Kalpi will do payback to the both...I'm excited to write it lol ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† He really don't like her Yet...So he's treating her like crap.
Yep why not...I will thanks for that amazing idea sweetie๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ashamed he'll die Yaar๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ Ohhh she'll outburst and take no crap from him
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: usahingora

beautiful update thsnk u waiting 4 nxt prt



Thanks Babes๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sunyy

Omg ๐Ÿ˜ฒ that arohi ๐Ÿ˜ก what a bitch she stole kalpis chain. And rags I m ๐Ÿ˜ก on him. He is so hard in kalpi and doesn't believe her. But prem is so sweet. Waiting for kalpi to speak up. Update soon.big hugs Lotsa love and big muah ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿฅบ โค๏ธ



HAHAHA you really don't like that chick ๐Ÿ˜† Yep everyone's angry at him...He doesn't trust or lke her so he'll react that way...He thinks she's just his Kalpi's lookalkike,Prem is  sweet ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ Kalpi will speak up ๐Ÿ˜› Thanks babes love you too muah!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update plz let the truth of the chain come out n rag punishes that arohi n kalpi get her chain back

Update soon too lovely



Thank you sweetie,Yes the truth Will come out and Kalpi will get Her chain๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: akshara82

Can i just strangle dat Arohi with my bare hands ๐Ÿ˜ก

She had the guts to steal kalpis chain which she bought for Raghav..
Raghav.. has he lost his mind?
Or is he doing all this to make Kalpi realise herself?
Is he pushing her to the extent that the Old Kalpi to be back in form?
The way hes behaving bfr her is sooo strange?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Dats not the same Raghav or did he lost his mind after Kalpi disappearance?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† 
Just my thought aftr today's update..
Anyways Aria.. its getting interesting chapter by chapter..
Update Soon..



Yes you should...Everyone hates my Aarohi...๐Ÿ˜†...Raghav reacts like that because he hates his Spot,He might ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Thansk you sweetie I'm glad you're reading it๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for Kalpi's shocking attitude wala reply to that dumb Aarohi and oversmart Rags!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Aaj tho ek cute sa update dedho naa yaar.
 
YOU ARE U  REALLY PROMPT IN UR UPDATES.NO NEED FOR REMINDERS.AND ALL ARE CUTE AND AMAZING ONES.BUT U HAD ENDED THE PREVIOUS UPDATE GIVING CHANCES FOR SO MANY GUESSES.AB  SOCH SOCH HEY SIR DUKRAHAAHEY.
 
HENCE...
 
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: AmbroseFever

Aria...


Razzz/Akria๐Ÿค—

Are you trying to kill me here?

Maybe ahahaha

Came back to read the stories here after so long and the first one I picked up was this one here. i swear, I read it all in one go and lord help me but I want more. I usually don't care about love triangles but the way you're playing them all out is fabulous. 

Really wow lucky pick๐Ÿ˜† In one go ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ณ Really ahhahaha ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰Thanks sweetie,I don't like love triangles myself but Since I'm writing it I can make it good๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜† Thank you so much๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

What I particularly liked was the fact that you made Raghav "hate" Kalpi in a more logical way than most TV Shows would do it. You made him believe that she wasn't his Kalpi and then made him hate the fact that she was sporting the same face as hers. 

Wow really...I guess so,Yep I was so messed up how to make it Logical...So i decided and went that way,He does hates her for having His Kalpi's face...But He's so stupid she is Kalpi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I have to admit, seeing Kalpi getting Raghav all fired up with her antics was super adorable. Her cuteness and her never-ending quest to annoy the wits out of him was absolutely hilarious. Aarohi seems like a thorn in the path of RagNa but let's see what you have planned.

Hhahaa i wanted to make her oppisite of her real self..you know Clumsy,Klutz,annoying...She had grown up in an enviorment with Love and care...for 3 years so she's a happy joyious person,Aarohi is my Main villan she is the major thorn and Glue to RagNa๐Ÿ˜‰

Thank you for not making Prem negative. I really liked his character in the show and always wanted him to be a positive character. Yeah he seems to be showing some grey shades here and there but the love he has for Kalpi seems genuine and not forced. Although I'm loving the fact that Kalpi and him share a working relationship because seeing Kalpi with Prem will only further Raghav's anger. The jealous lover Raghav that we havent' seen in a while will surely come up. 

Ya! how can I make my handsome Neeraj A villan,I really love Prem ๐Ÿ˜ณ Prem is Not negative but He does has grey shades,He hates the Jadhavs and Raghavv alot,Especailly Raghav alot for hurting Kalpi,Yes the love he has for Kalpi is Real...He truly wants to Marry her and Give her all the Happiness,Yep Prem will be trying to make Raghav jealous alot...and They'll show alot of closenesss(Prem & Kalpi) Infront of Raghav...a jealous lover will appear๐Ÿ˜›


As for Paakhi, no I never liked her. Yes I practically wanted to kill her in the show but ta-da you go ahead and bring her character like this who has changed completely and I'm starting to enjoy her storyline. Not particularly a fan of reading Sammy-Paakhi (for obvious reasons๐Ÿคฃ ) but I'm enjoying myself. 

PPaakhi..hahaha no likes her,She is changed,I wanted to make sammy hate  her and SHe'll have to fight to get his love,That he'll insult her and Ignore her,I think you love sammy and Paakhi with him gets you jealous ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Now Aarohi on the other hand is a totally different character altogether. The feelings of hate keep on growing with each update and her stunt with stealing the chain Kalpi bought for Raghav has probably gotten her several death threats. Even though I hate her, I'm glad she's there because she'll only add the fuel to the fire by spoiling Kalpi's plans and having Raghav yell at her. We'll get to see the infamous Singhania anger again with maybe Kalpi giving it right back to him or doing something that will have Raghav running after her. 

Aarohi is everyone's most hated character๐Ÿ˜†She hates Kalpi because she never got Raghav's love,she'll be scheming everytime..hahaha true,Both will happen ahaha Raghav will always be Rinning after his Spot and Kalpi will always fire back.

One thing I really like about your stories is that you don't rush things. You let the feeling develop with time rather than have two-three chapters after the meet and everything is resolved. Kudos to that!

Really...seriously?? I;ve never noticed, but a awesome writer like you saying that to me...I feel really happy and bless thank you Akira,

The whole element of mystery that you have thrown in with Kalpi and her not knowing (or possibly never knowing) her past is like icing on the cake. Reason being that the whole revelation of truth will be an epic moment. 

Yeah that's so true...And I have no Idea how she's going to remeber But I have a little Idea๐Ÿ˜‰

As of now, I'm enjoying the build up of Prem-Kalpi-Raghav-Arohi and Suhana-Sammy-Paakhi.

My Triangles...You gotta love them๐Ÿ˜†

The pre-cap you've given in the Valentine's Promo is heart wrenching but makes the story all the more interesting and the latest pre-cap on Chapter 14 is even worse. He's so blatant about his hate towards her and never considers her feelings, typical Singhania. 

Thanks so mcuh,Yeah he's so evil...But He'll get it all  back!๐Ÿ˜›

Aria, you HAVE to continue like ASAP otherwise I will surely die from waiting to know what happens next. You give us these amazing pre-caps and leave us wanting more and more. 



Please please please continue soon because I'm dying to know what happens next.

Lots of love,
Akira




Akira I'm so Happy...This is an epic moment right now...That one of the most popular and Amazing Writers would read and say all this to me,Akira I'm so happy you read my story and you liked it...I'm definally no match to you...SO I'm so thankful...Thank you that's all I can say,I know it's not much But You render me speechless ๐Ÿ˜ฒ