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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by exploringmyself

superb!


Originally posted by lourel24

Awesome


Originally posted by Viji15

Loved it!


Originally posted by prachi_vrushan

it was brilliant
superb
loved it
happy new year


Thanks a lot guys! Means a lot :)

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pri12

awsome...loved it Happy New Year To you and your family...may ur all wishes come true in this year...may this year brings all the happiness in ur life Stay happy and keep writing Wink


Thank You :)
And wish you the same :)
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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yazhi

awesome... fabulous...
perfect couple ishra
their convo was cute..
emotions of shagun was very well penned
atlast she realised she had spoiled her life and house with her own hands..
but tooo late...

 perfect start of a os for this new year 2015.. loved it


Hey!

Thanks a lot yaa!

REally glad you liked the way Shagun's emotions were described..

Thanks again :)
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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mrinalini-

Completely, thoroughly and irrevocably in love with this shot. How I loved the diary entry and the conversation and kiss that followed! Day Dreaming

Indeed it's cheers to Shagun's stupidity that Ishita got this life today! Big smile


Hi meri jaan!

Really? Thanks a lot yaara! Terrese yehi ummeed thi mko.. :P

I really dont like the diary part personally.. but since you say its good, i accept itWink

lol yeah! She's a stupid confused soul.. and she needs to get a life!
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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by omshreejaanu

Hey priya
I guess this is the first work I am personally reading from you.
That's amazing. I love it n would like to read more from u now on.
Keep it up n cheers to shagunya n her stupidity! Big smile
Happy new  year n stay blessed.


Hey Di!

okay.. we havent interacted really and i dont know how to address you.. Hope Di works fine :)

I really feel glad that you liked the story.. and im actually dancing at the fact that you want to read more from me.. you made my dayHugDancingParty

Thanks a lot for the comment :) and really glad you like it :)
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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ishra123

Awesome update


Originally posted by N.R.Rona

It was so nice..the emotions of shagun is so beautifully written.. The diary part was so lovely..


Originally posted by shavi2311

excellnt...
thanks fr pm...


Originally posted by cutie782

Firstly new year wishes to u buddy...
Awesome superbbb os though I hate shagun's character this particular os in shagun's pov is just amazing...ClapClap


Originally posted by shinseen

Awesome   ...loved it 


Hey guys!

Thanks a ton for the comments! Really glad you liked the update



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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RomComFan

This is just beautiful Priya!Clap

Not sure why you are unsatisfied, it's a look ta an ordinary moment that works so well. 

Your portrayal of Shagun is very well done- not overly 'vamp'; just a very misguided woman full of regrets and and a sense of desperation.  I can understand and appreciate that.  I love that she witnessed such a normal moment between the couple that says more about their affection for each other then any real intimate moment could.

Terrific job once again,  I can't believe you posted two pieces of writing so close together!Dancing


hey there :)
Pehle toh naam batado yaar! I dont even know what to call you..

I was unsatisfied mainly because i was really blank when i wrote this and i didnt know what i was typing.. im really relieved it turned out fine..

Im glad you like the way Shagun was portrayed.. thanks for the appreciation..
well sometimes a normal gesture of care concern and affection can create a magic that even physical intimacy cant. Hence this..

hehe! i cant believe i posted two pieces of writings so close together either.. But i needed to get this out of my system.. Bas frustration nikalna tha..





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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahibasharma

awesome...loved the way shagun realised her stupidity...
absolutely loved this piece of work


Originally posted by Arooj.M

Lovely OS!


Originally posted by JniISHRA83

SuperbClap


Originally posted by florine_20

Awesome


Originally posted by VENBA

A beautiful os...
Loved it,,
So brilliantly written...
Happy new year..Have a great and successful new year..SmileSmile




Hello guys!

Thanks a ton for the lovely comments.. really glad you liked it..

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