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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
It was so nice..the emotions of shagun is so beautifully written.. The diary part was so lovely..

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
awesome... fabulous...
perfect couple ishra
their convo was cute..
emotions of shagun was very well penned
atlast she realised she had spoiled her life and house with her own hands..
but tooo late...

 perfect start of a os for this new year 2015.. loved it


Edited by yazhi - 31 December 2014 at 10:16pm

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
excellnt...
thanks fr pm...

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Completely, thoroughly and irrevocably in love with this shot. How I loved the diary entry and the conversation and kiss that followed! Day Dreaming

Indeed it's cheers to Shagun's stupidity that Ishita got this life today! Big smile

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Hey priya
I guess this is the first work I am personally reading from you.
That's amazing. I love it n would like to read more from u now on.
Keep it up n cheers to shagunya n her stupidity! Big smile
Happy new  year n stay blessed.


Edited by omshreejaanu - 01 January 2015 at 12:33pm

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Firstly new year wishes to u buddy...
Awesome superbbb os though I hate shagun's character this particular os in shagun's pov is just amazing...ClapClap

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome   ...loved it 

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
This is just beautiful Priya!Clap

Not sure why you are unsatisfied, it's a look ta an ordinary moment that works so well. 

Your portrayal of Shagun is very well done- not overly 'vamp'; just a very misguided woman full of regrets and and a sense of desperation.  I can understand and appreciate that.  I love that she witnessed such a normal moment between the couple that says more about their affection for each other then any real intimate moment could.

Terrific job once again,  I can't believe you posted two pieces of writing so close together!Dancing

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