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SuryaIshraholic IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
excellent work.. 

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Akshatha19 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
wow...amazing yaar... 
beautifully written...
just loved it...
very well done...ClapClapClap

thanks dearBig smile

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Beautiful OS Anjali, there was so much warmth between Adi and his Ishimaa in your story, loved how you played the Delhi cold into it and the warmth oozing from the characters and I loved the title. Thanks for the PM. Happy New Year Smile

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Different Os
Loved it
Great written

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 5:33pm | IP Logged
awesome!

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N.R.Rona Senior Member
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Aww that was brilliant..loved the way they acknowledged each other..i really wish to see this onscreen

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Beautiful OS love this side of Adil not so arrogant and soft toward Ishu. The way he interact with Ishu much better and the self talk too he want to get attention from other too and hope one day he will have picture with his family too that was good. Hope in the TV he will realize like your story too.Smile



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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
This was a beautiful and a heart warming OS. Something which might not happen in the show anytime soon. Loved the way you played both of them together. Perhaps, very natural. short and sweet. The last line was just awww..
Thanks for this one dear Big smile

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