Maneet ff-Humrahi.#7...link to thread 8 page 1 - Page 9

superb update
sad for maaneet
geet is pregnant which incresed maan's guilt...
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👏awesome update di loved it

Awsm updte...
Maan dilema shown perfctly...his angr n frustration too
Geet is too naive to undrstnd all ds...

awesum emotional update.maan destroy his best moment with his own hands.now I want maan to apologized geet n give her warm hug ,take care of her n give her kissy wissy on her cheeks :p ;)

Lovely update
maan was shock of age and becoming father
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firstly wish u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR ...its emotional part di...maan is very angry on himself...geet is scared to see him like him...maan can't able to digest this fact...moreover geet pregnancy news broke him inside...he was feeling like he comitted a big sin...now who will be geet support?..who will assure her everything would be fine?...continuee soon di...

Loved it. Am very scared. Maan is going to ask for abortion. Will he ask geet what she wants or is he going to force his decision on her. Poor geet what she must br going through. Poor maan 

Very well written. Maan's outburst and geet's emotions are very nicely portrayed. Now maan in dilemma abt their relation and as if not sufficient u gave him shock of geet being pregnant... wat an idea sir jee... but still waiting wat further changes happen in their lives and how they overcome the... waitinggg... and also Happy new year😃

superb update...well written👏