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Ishveer OS......SACHHE AUR JHOOTE

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 9:22am | IP Logged

Hey...Guys ... This is my first OS ...So bear with me...I am open to all comments and criticism...I wanted to improve forum activity ...And one more thing...I am not that well versed in Hindi...Ignore typos...

Ranveer's Dialogue : RED

Ishani's Dialogue : GREEN

So...Here we go...

 

 

 

Ranveer...We need to talk ...NOW...

RV had a mock smile on his handsome face...

Ranveer pls...hear me out...

 Haan...Haan...thikh hai...Kya kehna hai...Waise cleaning darma kaisa laga...achha than a...I enjoyed it...

Ranveer ...tum itna kaise badal gaya...(teary eyed)

Oh...toh tum cry baby ka natakh karne wali hai...?...!!!!

His every word was piercing her heart...

Ranveer, kyun kar rehi hoon yeh sab...

RV took out his laptop and started working by the bed...

Ishani went towards the bed,, but tripped on something and fell on RV...

EYELOCK

After sometime RV hosh mein aaya...He felt disgusted and pushed her away...and hit his hand hard on the wall due to frustration...

Ranveer yeh tum...dard hooga...

DARD...!!! (he shouted) Do you even know how much pain I was in jab tum Chi...

He was going to say it...but decided against it...                                                             

Jab mein kya...Ranveer...Kya... Aur mera pain...janti ho mein tumshe kitna pyaar...

RV holds her sholder and shakes her...Hosh mein aaoo... Ishani mein Chirag nahi hoon...(RV mode par aaya)... RV hoon...RV...

Hum dono ki beech Chirag kab se aagaya...You have gone crazy...( fountains flowing from her eyes)

Pagal banaya tum mujhe ... Nafrat karthi hu tumse... I HATE YOU...!!!

Ran...veeer... Stop it...(breaks down)

Kyun...(Sobs)...Kyun...

Jaana chahthi hoon...?... Toh (takes out his phone) ddeklo...

Ishani sees the images and looks at RV...She could see the hurt in his eyes...PAIN..

She first breaks down...but then wipes her tears and explains everything...right from how he called her to his house to how he tried to molest her...

After hearing this...Ranveer was fuming in anger...if Chirag was in front of him then, he would have killed that b*****d...then it struck him...Rv thought abt todays hungama and how much his Ishani was hurt...He had tears in his eyes...

He then begs her to forgive him...Ishani mujshe maaf kardo...pls...

Ranveer mera pathi hone se pehle tum mera accha dosth thi...Phir bhi tum nahi samaj paya ki yeh sab choot hai...

Tum mujshe zyaada Chirag ki joot par trust kiya... How could you...SACHE AUR JHOOTE ke beech ka farak nahi pehchana ???

Ishani...Ishani...(she runs away)

...Now the great RV have to pacify his wife...HIS Ishani...  

That's it...Loved it ...Hated it...     Pls comment                                                                                                            TongueWinkLOL

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Awesome
Loved it..some os of ishveer Clap
Plz plz make it ts or ss...one part z nt enuff...u wrote it so well wanna read hw rv ll manofy ishu?

Edited by tinatartari - 31 December 2014 at 9:52am

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tinatartari

Awesome
Loved it..some os of ishveer Clap
Plz plz make it ts or ss...one part z nt enuff...u wrote it so well wanna read hw rv ll manofy ishu?
Didn't think about continuing... Well can't promise anything...TongueSmile Thanks a lot...this is my first OS in the whole IF...so was kinda tensed abt its acceptance... Thanx...

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nandasweetie

Originally posted by tinatartari

Awesome
Loved it..some os of ishveer Clap
Plz plz make it ts or ss...one part z nt enuff...u wrote it so well wanna read hw rv ll manofy ishu?

Didn't think about continuing... Well can't promise anything...TongueSmileThanks a lot...this is my first OS in the whole IF...so was kinda tensed abt its acceptance... Thanx...


Its just awesome..
I loved it ttly..nd i ws just expectng it to continue..this is like u showed half epi of math nd aftr tat say it has ended
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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Hi guys...
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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 10:13am | IP Logged
update soon
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 2:34am | IP Logged
I this realy going to happn in upcoming episodes?
tellme IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 3:30am | IP Logged
waow dear its tooo amazingClap
plz continue this.
and i wish director copy your this ideas.
and make show like that.LOL

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