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ZAYA SS : THE 12 MONTHS ( Chap 4 page 16) (Page 19)

Zainedil Goldie
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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KitkitMkb

[QUOTE=Zainedil]Saleha
Oh my God ...
I am speechless...so so so well written
Ahh i loved the way Aaliyas feelings of love have been described ...
her anxiety ...her apprehensions ...her fear of hearing a bad news...
and Zain ...ahhh...the way she smacked him in the conference room ...
Girl...this is a sixer ...when a reader can visualize every scene every move ..like the digging of her nail on his skin below the table ...the frustration that he was being ignored...the hidden intensity ...the swirling passion ...
that is the power of a good read ...
the excellent story ...the words ...the feel ...i could feel the emotions...every word .
the way he said rehne do tumse nahi hoga...
ahh...i cant have enough
please, i mean it dont make me wait for ages to read such classy story
I write heavy stuff...but nothhing so damn classy the plethora of emotions is raw ...master stroke...
Ann extraordinary
Madhus Ostracized
N now Urs 12 month
my fav ones on the forum
love you loads for writing this
love
Sim



OMG , I need time to reply this ! This is HUGE !
Mujhe rulane pe tuli ho ?LOL
When you wake up in the morning , and see this your eyes half open , i was like "Khushi ke aansoon" !

You REALLY MADE MY DAY! FIRST WITH the chapters of BI IShq and then with this ! I don't need a reason to smile but today you were the reason of my smile ! Thank you itna zyada ! I did not knew that my writing had powerLOLand that too said by our Sim Sahiba the Great , our Malika-e-Emotions !
Okay , I am saving this in my phone i will show it to everyone see i too have talentLOL
and Oh God i am a pidi si amateur in front of Ann and Madhu , and i too love their stories !
Really Sim i will never forget this , Love you bohot zyada , take care and keep writing like a bossCool!



Saleha
You are no piddu or amateur
I had sensed it in the holi spcl update itself
N if anyone has evr any doubts on ur talent just snd thm to me
It's a art n u excel in it
Evry word tht I wrote I mean it, my exp in writing is more than 17 yrs quiet near to ur actual ages
N cing ur Ann's n madhus potential mkes me feel proud
This forum has the best writers
Thts why it's still so active
I waited a long time to read this n was worth the wait
Love you n stay blessed
Mine is heavy duty but I wish to write like u or Alina light n humor
Love
Sim

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
Amazing update...
u write it so beautifully...
loved dis update...
hope aaliya will realize her feelings for zain..
Cont soon...

KitkitMkb IF-Dazzler
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Posts: 4245

Posted: 27 April 2015 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zainedil

Originally posted by KitkitMkb

[QUOTE=Zainedil]Saleha
Oh my God ...
I am speechless...so so so well written
Ahh i loved the way Aaliyas feelings of love have been described ...
her anxiety ...her apprehensions ...her fear of hearing a bad news...
and Zain ...ahhh...the way she smacked him in the conference room ...
Girl...this is a sixer ...when a reader can visualize every scene every move ..like the digging of her nail on his skin below the table ...the frustration that he was being ignored...the hidden intensity ...the swirling passion ...
that is the power of a good read ...
the excellent story ...the words ...the feel ...i could feel the emotions...every word .
the way he said rehne do tumse nahi hoga...
ahh...i cant have enough
please, i mean it dont make me wait for ages to read such classy story
I write heavy stuff...but nothhing so damn classy the plethora of emotions is raw ...master stroke...
Ann extraordinary
Madhus Ostracized
N now Urs 12 month
my fav ones on the forum
love you loads for writing this
love
Sim



OMG , I need time to reply this ! This is HUGE !
Mujhe rulane pe tuli ho ?LOL
When you wake up in the morning , and see this your eyes half open , i was like "Khushi ke aansoon" !

You REALLY MADE MY DAY! FIRST WITH the chapters of BI IShq and then with this ! I don't need a reason to smile but today you were the reason of my smile ! Thank you itna zyada ! I did not knew that my writing had powerLOLand that too said by our Sim Sahiba the Great , our Malika-e-Emotions !
Okay , I am saving this in my phone i will show it to everyone see i too have talentLOL
and Oh God i am a pidi si amateur in front of Ann and Madhu , and i too love their stories !
Really Sim i will never forget this , Love you bohot zyada , take care and keep writing like a bossCool!



Saleha  
You are no piddu or amateur
I had sensed it in the holi spcl update itself
N if anyone has evr any doubts on ur talent just snd thm to me
It's a art n u excel in it
Evry word tht I wrote I mean it, my exp in writing is more than 17 yrs quiet near to ur actual ages
N cing ur Ann's n madhus potential mkes me feel proud
This forum has the best writers
Thts why it's still so active
I waited a long time to read this n was worth the wait
Love you n stay blessed
Mine is heavy duty but I wish to write like u or Alina light n humor
Love
Sim

Actually , i started writing almost one year ago , some texts poems , etc 
but never thought that i will write stories on any forum that too on Zaya !
U do write heavy , but there is another charm to it , the first time i came on the forum , i wrote an emotional os , but when i write heavy , I become heavy too , so that's why ,, i prefer keeping it in my diary ! Yes , you are right , surely the forum has got one of the best writers , so many , but unfortunately has the show ended , people left ! But i am a fan of the writing of the writers of the forum ! Love you and take care , thanks again !

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Posted: 27 April 2015 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepika_Zaya

Amazing update...
u write it so beautifully...
loved dis update...
hope aaliya will realize her feelings for zain..
Cont soon...


Thanks Deepika , let's see if she realizes her feelings or not ! Wink
butterfly20 Goldie
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Posts: 1434

Posted: 27 April 2015 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Wow saleha...
chupi rustum...
What an uodate!!! Wow
and the way u described her emotions was fantastic.
the office scene was fab.and zain's way of manaofying her was alovely...lol
continue soon.

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 27 April 2015 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by butterfly20

Wow saleha...[DIV]chupi rustum...[/DIV][DIV]What an uodate!!! Wow[/DIV][DIV]and the way u described her emotions was fantastic.[/DIV][DIV]the office scene was fab.and zain's way of manaofying her was alovely...lol[/DIV][DIV]continue soon.[/DIV]

Thank you my torture queen !
zaya.fatima Senior Member
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Posted: 27 April 2015 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
The crackling fire of the candle , an intense atmosphere  inviting them , to lose themselves in each other , allowing to them to drown into the oasis of love .He was scrutinizing every contour of her face , trying to imprint her face forever into that shaped organ ,which beats harder , sometimes taking her name , when being close to her yet so far ...  Her eyes which used to enlighten him , were looking down, hiding from his , a long hide and seek which seemed never ending ." Why?"       She could not muster courage to look at him , to look into his eyes and spoke those cherished words , that her heart used to scream when the blueish sky would be pouring his heart out in form of droplets called rain  . Those words ,died a new death everyday  , when she was with him and could heard his unspoken words through his heartbeats ."Speak up , Aaliya ! "Let me go !"" I'm not holding you 
Wonderful job SalehaClap
The way you write the emotions intensity of inner feelings it is just amazingThumbs Up
Plz continue soon

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Posted: 27 April 2015 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zaya.fatima

The crackling fire of the candle , an intense atmosphere  inviting them , to lose themselves in each other , allowing to them to drown into the oasis of love .He was scrutinizing every contour of her face , trying to imprint her face forever into that shaped organ ,which beats harder , sometimes taking her name , when being close to her yet so far ...  Her eyes which used to enlighten him , were looking down, hiding from his , a long hide and seek which seemed never ending ." Why?"       She could not muster courage to look at him , to look into his eyes and spoke those cherished words , that her heart used to scream when the blueish sky would be pouring his heart out in form of droplets called rain  . Those words ,died a new death everyday  , when she was with him and could heard his unspoken words through his heartbeats ."Speak up , Aaliya ! "Let me go !"" I'm not holding you 
Wonderful job SalehaClap
The way you write the emotions intensity of inner feelings it is just amazingThumbs Up
Plz continue soon
Wow ! Kiran , right ? It's one of the last paragraph added , thank you for noticing it ! 

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