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ZAYA SS : THE 12 MONTHS ( Chap 4 page 16) (Page 18)

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Posted: 25 April 2015 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
Saleha 
Oh my God ...
I am speechless...so so so well written 
Ahh i loved the way Aaliyas feelings of love have been described ...
her anxiety ...her apprehensions ...her fear of hearing a bad news...
and Zain ...ahhh...the way she smacked him in the conference room ...
Girl...this is a sixer ...when a reader can visualize every scene every move ..like the digging of her nail on his skin below the table ...the frustration that he was being ignored...the hidden intensity ...the swirling passion ...
that is the power of a good read ...
the excellent story ...the words ...the feel ...i could feel the emotions...every word .
the way he said rehne do tumse nahi hoga...
ahh...i cant have enough 
please, i mean it dont make me wait for ages to read such classy story 
I write heavy stuff...but nothhing so damn classy the plethora of emotions is raw ...master stroke...
Ann extraordinary
Madhus Ostracized 
N now Urs 12 month 
my fav ones on the forum 
love you loads for writing this
love
Sim

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 4:16am | IP Logged
wow !wow ! wonderful chap
amazingly written ...I just loved it ...u have written it so flawlessly... their convo ...totally loved d chappy ...do cont soon !!

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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fariya98

Awesome chapter saleha...Clap
You're a very good writer...Thumbs Up
I hope aliya accepte her fellings for zain...Wink
Thanks for the pm...Tongue
 Continue ASAP..Smile

Thank you Fariya happy that it was upto your expectations !


Edited by KitkitMkb - 26 April 2015 at 4:58am
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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nazzz16

Amazing update Saleha !!
Loved it <3
Aliya falling fof zain :)
Continue soon !!
N pls do pm me if possible !!
Thank you Nazz , regarding Pm i have sent you a busy request !
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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zainedil

Saleha 
Oh my God ...
I am speechless...so so so well written 
Ahh i loved the way Aaliyas feelings of love have been described ...
her anxiety ...her apprehensions ...her fear of hearing a bad news...
and Zain ...ahhh...the way she smacked him in the conference room ...
Girl...this is a sixer ...when a reader can visualize every scene every move ..like the digging of her nail on his skin below the table ...the frustration that he was being ignored...the hidden intensity ...the swirling passion ...
that is the power of a good read ...
the excellent story ...the words ...the feel ...i could feel the emotions...every word .
the way he said rehne do tumse nahi hoga...
ahh...i cant have enough 
please, i mean it dont make me wait for ages to read such classy story 
I write heavy stuff...but nothhing so damn classy the plethora of emotions is raw ...master stroke...
Ann extraordinary
Madhus Ostracized 
N now Urs 12 month 
my fav ones on the forum 
love you loads for writing this
love
Sim


OMG , I need time to reply this ! This is HUGE !
 Mujhe rulane pe tuli ho ?LOL
When you wake up in the morning , and see this your eyes half open , i was like "Khushi ke aansoon" !

You REALLY MADE MY DAY! FIRST WITH the chapters of BI IShq and then with this ! I don't need a reason to smile but today you were the reason of my smile ! Thank you itna zyada ! I did not knew that my writing had power LOL and that too said by our Sim Sahiba the Great , our Malika-e-Emotions !
Okay , I am saving this in my phone i will show it to everyone see i too have talent LOL 
and Oh God i am a pidi si amateur in front of Ann and Madhu , and i too love their stories !
 
Really Sim i will never forget this , Love you bohot zyada , take care and keep writing like a boss Cool !




Edited by KitkitMkb - 26 April 2015 at 12:35pm

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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Priya_arora

wow !wow ! wonderful chap
amazingly written ...I just loved it ...u have written it so flawlessly... their convo ...totally loved d chappy ...do cont soon !!

Thank you so much Priya ! I will try my best to continue this week !
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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Hi Makhi hugs ..
Kaisi hai

Shukar hai kisi ko yaad agaya k yeh story update karni hai

I loved the chapter yar each n every moment well described

I can see everything happening in front of me
The conference room bickering osum osum osum

Dont ma me wait more
Plzz jaldi jaldi update kar

Loads of love to u
Alu pataltu (alina)

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Posted: 26 April 2015 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zayalove

Hi Makhi hugs .. Hugs back ! I am Fine Alhumdulilah and you ?
Kaisi hai

Shukar hai kisi ko yaad agaya k yeh story update karni hai SORRY (ZAYA STYLE )

I loved the chapter yar each n every moment well described Thank you inna zyada

I can see everything happening in front of me
The conference room bickering osum osum osum

Dont ma me wait more       I will try my best 
Plzz jaldi jaldi update kar

Loads of love to u                       Love you too !
Alu pataltu (alina)



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