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Ek Mutthi Aasmaan
Ek Mutthi Aasmaan

Hum Tum...its only u and me...Ch -15e pg:46&Index updated-PG-1 (Page 12)

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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Chapter 5. Flash back Starts:

Vitthal kamla's oldhouse,a small 1 bed room house with a small kitchen space and abathroom.Prakash just got ready and came out of washroom

Pra:Priya,Kalpu...justget ready...quickly I am done...

...Kalpana isin class 11,getting ready for her school and Priya is tense as todayis her class test...having their breakfast...being afamily from Maharastra,they are fond of poha...but Priya andkalpi does not like poha...they like parathas like delhi crowd.

To be continued

P:Aai...again poha todayfor break fast.

Ka:No today is a specialday...so we will have poran poli

K:What is special today...todayis 28 th Nov 1989...nothingspecial?!!

Ka:Oh...today is the daywhen we have completed 15 years in this big city...so in orderto celebrate that day I have made poran poli.

P:Wow...whatever it isaai...i like anyother breakfast apart from Poha.but do not havetime now,so Kalpu just wrap them in foil,we will enjoy in our bus.

K:Kya...Priya di...blueline bus is so crowded, how can we have food in the bus...

P:We can still have...it'searly in the morning, still not rush hour, we will get seat,so letsgo.

Priya and Kalpu goes to thebest school in delhi,It's because Priya is a genius and withthe help of Harivansh sighania foundations help,she had bagged theseat in the prestigious school and though Kalpana is above averagestudent but not comparable to Priya,still got the seat with requestfrom Vitthal to school principal. But as they are from lower middleclass family they cannot afford the bus fare and they have to travelalmost 10 kilometers hence they travel through the local bus toschool.

They soon leave home and boardthe bus ,in the bus one guy started to get close to Priya,she wasbusy reading her book as today was her class test and Kalpi wasfeeding her poran polis and eating them too.Kalpi observes this andgets annoyed.

K:What are doing?


K:What ...what? Why areyou getting so close to my sister...there is so much space thatside...just stand there.

The guy again gets close tothem and brushes his hand on priya's cheeks,Kalpi and Priyaboth get annoyed and Kalpi slaps the guy hard on his face.

All other people in the busalso realize what is happening and they give angry glares to the guy.

G:I will teach you a lesson

K:First teach yourself somegood manners...do not forget that I know karate, should I showyou some steps.

Priya holds her hand and tellsher to calm down.

Then once they get down fromthe bus and while walking to the school, Priya asks

P:Where did this Karate thingcame to your mind...

K:Just like that...icannot see anyone hurting you...you know I do not knoweven a step in karate...but just told that guy...di letslearn Karate na...

Sammy comes to themrunning.(Sammy's mother is a clerk in the school, hence he isenrolled in this school ,but he also comes with father, who drops,him and his mom in his bike and goes to office. He is also an aboveaverage student)

S: Chasmu...hi

K:Kya Sammy,chasmu...ijust pray god that your girlfriend also wears a specs too.

S:Ok Chasmu...i willstill call you chasmu

P:So Sammy,Kalpu ,now juststop it,we have reached school and now behave.

S:Ok Priya di,Chal chasmu letsgo to class.what's for tiffin.

K:Poran poli


K:I will not share with you...

S:ok go share with Pakhi baby

K: (SADLY) Ya,Aai told me toshare with her...how sad.

S:Chasmu cheer up...pakhilikes you,she is a good friend...

K:Good friend?!! But why shehas to like the things I like the most...why?

S:ok ok...calmdown...shush...we reached classroom.

Kalpi is now upset,Pakhi comesrunning to her.

Pakhi:Hi Kalpi,goodmorning,Kamala ma said there is poran poli for me.

K:Ya pakhi...will giveyou at munch time

Pakhi hugs kalpi

P:So sweet..kalpi,I love you,muah...(gives her a flying kiss and goes to her desk)

Kalpi is sad

Flashback ends

She gets back from her trance,realizes raghav kissing her lips again in sleep and murmuring I loveyou,she kisses him back and Raghav wakes and says softly.

R:you are still up...what areyou thinking.

K:I was remembering olddays,aai,Priya di,poran poli...lot of things.

R:Poran poli...you want to havethem now

K:I will make them tomorrow,I hadmade the arrangement for that already.

R:I asked you want to have them now

K: Now...it's middle ofthe night.

R:What middle of the night, I canstill make it ...now

K:No Raghav...not now...yousleep please...

R:Humm ...not sleepy, lets goand make some poran polis and revive some old memories.

She reaches his lips and says

K: ok as you say lets go

R:Like this?

K:Like what?

R: Whitout clothes?

K:Raghav...just stop it...

R: Why stop it...i am stillcrazy about you...ok ok now do not give me that look.

He quickly put on tracks and sheputs on her night gown and they go down stairs to the kitchen. Shegets the dough from the fridge and ingredients from shelf and Raghavstart to knead the dough mixing with ghee. The ghee, falls on hischest ,She removes them ,he hugs her from behind and let her also dothe kneading with him.

K:Like this if we do,we will not beable to make...

He stops her and captures her lipsand kisses her,after few moments breaks the kiss and says.

R:let me quickly make the polis

And in 10 mins 3 polis are fried andready.then he says

R:I am done and now you will have tomake up for this and we will have the round 2.

K:No raghav...not round 2.

R:Why not sweets

K:no no no...(she takes theplate and about to run)

He quickly grabs her and lifts herback to their bedroom

R:I said round 2...

K:Still I am saying...no

R:Yes...yes ..yes

K:No...no ...no

They reach the bedroom and she saysshyly Yes..yes..yes

Edited by PMOHANTI1774 - 18 February 2015 at 11:18am

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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Awesome update so kalpi protective over her sister n rag n kalpi lovethey so romantic 
Update soon

Edited by sweet1308 - 18 February 2015 at 11:35am
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plez update soon..Big smile
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suprb update dear ... Update nxt chappy soon...
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
Kalpi slapping that idiot in the bus was awesome
Aww RagNa making food together while romancing was wonderful
Fabulous update
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lovely update ..kalpi slap that guyClap & she is protective to her sister & liked how sammy called her a chasmuLOL ragna Tongue
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Pls update soon next chappy dear :-)

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