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SS-I Never Told You But I Always Loved You. (Page 8)

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Superb ending dinnaaazzz...
Read both parts in one go...
Loved both of them..
The whirlpool emotions the way u sketched it..
Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved them to the core...

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Part 1

Superb start

Aww puraane din yaad aagaye yaar. Kya yaad aagaye ye math poochWinkWinkWink

She waited for him.  Pehli nazar main hi pehla pyaar hogayaWinkWinkWink

Her nervousness was clear in her actions.  LOLLOLLOL

That last line -

I never told you ... but I always loved you...

It touched my heartBig smile

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Part 2

Beautiful update

No!!!! Not again.  Hamesha aisa kyu hota hain ki hamare past hamaare saamne aajaata hain.

He is reacting as though he doesn't know her.  That's strange

Girlfriend!!!Ouch  Aww Dil toot gaya uska. 

He was crying when she got hurt. What was that?ShockedShockedShocked

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Part 3

This update was just fantastic.  I loved it

Ye jaha bhi jaati hain vo ladka bhi wahi pohoch jaata tha.  Ye kya chakkar hain?LOLLOLLOL

Sadness was clearly visible in his eyes

She is no longer my girlfiend - I was so happy for tht girlLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Part 4

The Ending was just lot more than fantastic

I love happy endingsDancing

He loved her too but due to commitments he could not tell her

What a unique way to propose a girl.  Aww Dinu I just loved it yaar

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Awesome epilogue

Perfect description of love

Beautiful journey ended.  That's ok.  Ending happy to huwa

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Nethra !! aap ke comments ne mujhe khush kar diya !!Big smile
mujhe bahut khushi hui ki aapko yeh pasand aaya !!Big smile
we all love happy endings... 
pehle yeh story first chapter tak hi tha ... it was just that much ... a sad ending... 
par phir socha i should  make it a happy ending thus i added a few more chaps  ...Big smile
thank you so much !!Hug

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dinazz

Nethra !! aap ke comments ne mujhe khush kar diya !!Big smile
mujhe bahut khushi hui ki aapko yeh pasand aaya !!Big smile
we all love happy endings...
pehle yeh story first chapter tak hi tha ... it was just that much ... a sad ending...
par phir socha i should make it a happy ending thus i added a few more chaps ...Big smile
thank you so much !!Hug

Main bhi bahut Kush hoon yaar ye story padkar. I really loved it. Accha huwa Ki tune iss story ka ending happy kiya

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