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Praja ss - Truth -Painful & Rewarding Last part Page 9 10/1/15 (Page 8)

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Here is the long update that i promised full of Praja moments... 
next part will be the last part 

Part 7

Ajab and Pratap left JB's room and went to Pratap's room. Ajabde closed the doors, whilst Pratap looked at the sky from the window.

Ajab came upto him and stood beside him

"jante hai, hum jab chote the na, toh data humara chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahte the"

Pratap was stunned to hear her talk about her childhood at such a time and looked at her. He saw that she was looking at the sky longingly. Pratap wanted to get away from his thoughts and hence thought that maybe that was what Ajabde was trying to do. Make him feel better. So he turned resting his back on the window ledge and facing her and listented to her attentively

"humne sare prayas kiye apne data ko khush karne ke, parantu ve humse kabhi prasan nahi hue. Sada hume yeh ehsaas dilate rahe ki hum ek putra nahi hai. Aur hume, apne hi mehel mein chip kar rehna pada. Kyunki yadi hum apna chehra unhe subah dikhate toh ve kehte ki unka din kharab ho jayega aur unke din bhar mein jo bhi yojna ho use rad (Cancel) karva dete. Ek baar data ne saat din ka upwas kiya tha. Aur ma ke kehne par humne unke liye apne haathon se bhojan aur sharbat banaya. Aur unhe sharbat dene gaye. Parantu ...

She started breathing heavily and he eyes were wide. So pratap touched her shoulder to bring her back. So she closed her eyes and took a deep breath before continuing

"hume aaj bhi yaad hai, data ne sharbat phek diya aur kaha ki iss manhus ka chehra dekh liya hai toh aab unhe aur teen din ka upwas karna padega kyunki jo punya unhe unke upwas se milne wala tha wo humara chehra dekhne se nasht ho gaya hai."

Pratap was shocked at hearing this and a little angry too

"aisi kai baatein thi, parantu hum unhe apne maan mein chupate gaye. Ek baar bhi kisi se apni pida nahi baati aur nahi roye. Pata hai, iska parinaam kya hua? Ek din, hume apni pida ke karan saans bhi nahi le pa rahe the, aur isi liye maa ki anumati lekar hum apne maan ko shant karne ke liye mandir gaye. Pura din Eklingji ke samne bethe rahe. Phir shaam wahan se ek sadhu guzar rahe the, aur unhone hume dekha to humare pass aye, unhone hums ek baat kahi jo hum aaj tak nahi bhule"

"kya kaha unhone?" Pratap asked as if in a trance.

"unhone kaha, ki aansu bahana aur rona kamzoori ki nishani nahi hai. Yadi hum kisi se atiadhik prem kare, aur badle mein hume keval unki nafrat mile toh yeh humari bhul nahi hai. Nahi hume isse glani (guilt) hona chahiye. Yeh aasun to humare saaf hriday (heart) ka sanket hote hai. Aur ro lene se humari pida kam hoti hai. Aur hume saachai ka samna karne ki Shakti bhi milti hai."

She looked at him, to see if he realised what she was trying to tell him

 Even he looked in her eyes and found ocean of love for him. As he kept looking he felt his eyes getting moist.

When she noticed his eyes getting wet she nodded as if inviting him, and he hugged her and let his tears fall.

"Hume .. hume aisa pratit ho raha hai jaise aaj humne apni choti ma ko kho diya. Yeh kaisi duvidha hai ek aur hume humari rani ma hume wapis mili toh dusri aur humne apni choti ma ko kho diya... kho diya humne unhe."

He kept on shedding silent tears and she kept on hugging him and caressing him and ruffling his hair to sooth him. But she did not say a word and let him cry. She knew how hard this must be on him but she knew that it has to come out as this was for the best. She knew that after he cried he would come out stronger than before.

Both didn't know how long they stood there hugging each other and Pratap kept telling her how much he trusted her (DB) and asked her what was his fault. Each time she soothed his fears telling him it was not his fault. And what he did was right.

After long which felt short for them there was a knock on the door. So Ajabde made Pratap sit in a place which was not directly visible from the door. Then she washed her face and after making sure she looks ok she opened the door a little to find two dasis with food. She took the food plates from them one by one and kept them inside but did not allow them to enter. After that she once again closed the door.

Then she made pratap come there and lovingly made him eat the food.

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He was now feeling much lighter and better after crying. So when she had gone to answer the door he sat there thinking, however his thoughts were now not on DB but on Ajab. He realised how much MMji's behaviour had affected his Ajab and why she was always so scared. He also realised how much he had hurted her when he had said that his love for her had died. And then she lost her father and had to look after bijolia alone.

As she came back and made him have food he just looked at her in wonder. He wondered how he was so lucky to get such a selfless girl in his life. She was so hurt yet she was here for him when he needed her. His respect for her increased 100 times and he silently promised himself to always be there for her and trust her, even when there is no proof.

But as he kept looking at her he noticed how pale she was and she was not eating at that time. So he held her hand and made her eat as well.

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Ajab was surprised yet happy when pratap started feeding her but she silently ate the food.

After finishing the food both washed their hands and looked at each other and smiled. Pratap took her hands in his and made her sit on the diwan.

"dhanyawad Ajabde, hume sachme kafi acha lag raha hai aab. Humara saath dene ke liye dhanyawad."

"hum to sadev aapke saath the, aur rahenge."

"Hume shama kar dijye Ajab, saachai jan ne ke baad hume apne aap par aur bhi lajja aa rahi hai. Jiss par hume vishwas karna chahiye tha uss par humne apna krodh jataya aur jise hume bachna chahiye tha, unhi ke pass gaye. Hum .. hum kaise nahi dekh paye ki saach kya hai?"

He couldn't look at her as he said this and looked down still holding her hands.

"nahi aapki galti nahi hai. Ve aapki maa hai. Aur hume garv hai aap par. Apne aisa kar key eh dikhaya ki aap naye rishton ke liye purine rishton ko nahi bhulte. Phir chahe aapko iss nirnay se kitni hi pida kyun na ho. Apne jo kiya woh unn halat mein uchit tha."

Pratap couldn't believe she is saying that and looked at her with tears in his eyes.

"yeh aap keh rahi hai Ajabde? Hum jante hai ki humare vyavhar se humari baton se apke hriday ko kitni pida hui hai. Aur humne apne vachan nahi nibhaye, jo humne aapko diye. Aur phir bhi aap keh rahi hai ki apko humpe garv hai?"

"haan, garv hai hume ki hum ek aise insaan ki patni hai, jo apne se badon ka maan rakhta hai. Humne kaha na. jo halat the, aur jo apke samne aya, us sab ko dekh kar aap sahi the. Humne kabhi bhi apko doshi nahi mana, bas ek shikayat thi ki apne humari baat bhi nahi suni. Par hum samaj sakte hai ki aap pe us waqt kya guzri hogi. Aur rahi baat humari pida ki, toh kya aapko pida nahi hui thi?"

At this Pratap looked away, but Ajabde put her hand on his face and made him look at her.

"dekhiye humari taraf, aur bataiye, apko pida nahi hui humse aise baat kar ke, humse dur rehke?"

He held her face with both his hands and looked at her with all the love in the world

"apko diye gaya vachano ko na nibhane ka aur apse dur rehne ki pida hume prati din, prati kshan vichalit karti rahi. Aur isi liye hum mehel se dur rehne lage aur yudh par hi apna samay vyatit karne lage. Kyunki matrabhoomi ki raksha karte samay hume iss pida ki anubhooti kam hoti thi. Par jab bhi akele hote the toh humara man karta tha ki hum bas abhi Bijolia aye aur apko apne saath. Aur usi samay hume ranima bhi yaad ati thi aur hum kuch nahi kar pate the. Apne hriday aur mastishk (mind) ke beech ki ladai mein ulaj ke reh jaate"

Hearing him Ajab couldn't hold her tears back, both looked at each other and pratap once again hugged her tightly and both cried in each other's arms. Cried for being away from each other and giving pain to each other and to themselves

After sometime both came out of the hug as they felt lighter. But pratap was still feeling guilty and a few tears leaked out of his eyes as he saw Ajab adjusting her clothes and feeling awkward in front of him, her husband. She should have been comfortable with him by now if all that had not happened

As ajab looked at him, she saw the tears, wiped them.

"bas ab hum apki ankhon mein aur aansu nahi dekh sakte, .."

"parantu Ajabde, humne jo aapke saath kiya, apka vishwas toda, apko pida di, hum.. aap hume dandit kijiye."

"nahi dand keval apradhi ko milta hai, aur apne to koi apradh nahi kiya, toh dand kaisa aur shama bhi kaisi?"

"arthat? Apne ... apne hume shama kar diya?"

Pratap looked at Ajabde stunned and she gave him a beautiful smile and nodded. Seeing this even pratap smiled and looked around as he couldn't believe that she forgave him. After taking a few breaths he turned to her and held her shoulders

"ek bar punha (again) kahiye"

"humne apko shama kar diya"

"nahi aise nahi, humara naam leke" he said irritated like a child throwing tantrum

Ajabde smiled looking at him like this, she cupped his cheek with one hand

"humne apko shama kar diya Kuwar Pratap"

"kuwar Pratap? Ajabde, yadi apko yaad ho to apne hume vachan diya tha ki jab hum akele honge tab aap hume keval humare naam se bulayengi."

At this she took her hand back and looked away form him

"hum ... hum kaise apko"

"toh iska matlab apne ab tak hume shaman ahi kiya"

Pratap asked with mischief in his eyes, and ajabde looked at him

"nahi aisa nahi hai"

"Phir hume humare name se pukar kar kahiye ki apne hume shama kiya"

She knew he would not leave her so she looked down and rubbed her hands before looking at his eyes and silently pleading him not to make her do this, but he just raised his eyes and shaked his head.

So she closed her eyes and took a deep breath

"acha theek hai, humne apko shama kiya P...Pra..Pratap"

But he didn't say a word, so she slowly opened her eyes and looked him. Only to find him looking at her with a lot of love and happiness. She couldn't take her eyes away from him and both shared a beautiful eyelock.

However they were soon disturbed by a knock on the door. So pratap went to answer the door, it was dasis who had come to take the dinner dishes as per JB order.

"raat ho gayi hai, hume aab apne kaksh mein chalna chahiye, maa kadachit hume dekhne aye." Ajab said awkwardly

"theek hai, shubh ratri" Pratap said disappointedly

Ajab looked at him and smiled

"shubh ratri, hum kal milte hai"

At this Pratap smiled and nodded and Ajab left to go to her room.

Ajabde slept remembering all the moments she spent with him and had a beautiful smile on her face as she remembered that he trusted her enough to cry infront of her and share his fears with her. She promised herself that she will never let him feel lonely again.

On the other hand, Pratap was content and happy that she finally forgave him and now they can start their new life as Husband and Wife. But he was irritated as she had to go. He knew it wasn't her fault as it was a ritual that the couple can only share the room at the groom's place after the gauna. But he just wanted to hug her and talk to her all night. So after long time he fell asleep thinking about what he wanted to show Ajab and dreaming about his life ahead with her. But he promised that he will fill her life with so much love that she will forget all her pain. With that promise to himself he slept with a beautiful smile on his face.



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again i want 10 replies 

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Amazing update

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Awesome update...waiting for the next one

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Awesome. ..loved their heart to heart talk...hope they show sth like this in the serial when pratap gets to know db's truth...looks like am asking too much from the cvs...

plz update soon. .. Tongue

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great Clap Clap final part Unhappy so soon!! ... will b waiting for it endsSmile as v say all good things comes to an end!

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Its awesome plz update soon
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Awsome... Seriously ajabde understand him n handle the situations .. Superb.. Fantastic..

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