Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap


Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap
Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

Praja ss - Truth -Painful & Rewarding Last part Page 9 10/1/15 (Page 5)

Pawarneha13 Newbie

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Awesome update plz update soon

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ash41900 Senior Member

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
ok so now the cat is finally out of the bag !! lets c Wat Pratap does now ... now toh sure he wants to bang some1s head against Strong wall Wink ...
its awesome update the reality check was necessary !! update soon n Pm me plz.
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 2:17am | IP Logged
amazing update...eagerly waiting for next one! 

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sushma_marawi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Thank's for update Smile
Awesome waiting for next update

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pari0706 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prishna_fan

Very nice updates 
Now pratap knows the truth ... Want to see how VB will be punished and Hope PrAja will get close to each other and Ajab moves on as mu is cleared 

hey thanks for the longer comment. hmm VB punished ... well we will see but Ajab moving on TongueWink padhte rahiye LOL

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pari0706 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Divi.C

Wowww its superb.. Finally db's truth is out... Amazing superb update...
N now i hope ajabde will also forgive prtap.. In all this all forget one thing that prtap wil also be hurt... He is also not at fault though he should trust on ajabde ..

yes i agree that Pratap will be hurt... very hurt as he loves his chotima a lot and its very painful when someone (especially a parent figure) breaks your trust ... lets see what happens Wink
pari0706 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ash41900

ok so now the cat is finally out of the bag !! lets c Wat Pratap does now ... now toh sure he wants to bang some1s head against Strong wall Wink ...
its awesome update the reality check was necessary !! update soon n Pm me plz.

you really want the banging head on wall scene na LOL will see if i can put this in somewhere LOL no promises though

agree the reality check was absolutely necessary/.
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 8:02am | IP Logged

Part 6

JB and Ajab knew this so they were not shocked, but Pratap was stunned. As the dasi left it was only the three of them in the room. JB touched his shoulder to make him come back to the world but Pratap kept looking at the distance and started walking backwards

"choti ma ne kiya aisa?"

He didn't realise where he was going and his leg hit the leg of the bed and he fell on the bed. Both Ajabde and JB ran to him.

"Pratap? Pratap, humari aur dekhiye."

JB pulled his face towards her and patted him. After a few seconds he seemed to realise where he was

"Ranima? Choti ma aisa kaise kar sakti hai, aur kyun? Lekin us dasi ke much par jo bhay tha aur jo asun the ve nakli nahi the. Iska arth ye sara khel chotima ne kiya" he started in lost voice but as he progressed anger seemed to be the dominant emotion.

"shaant ho jaiye Pratap"

"Kaise shant rahe ranima? Chotima ne humare saath itna bada chal kiya? Humse humari maa aur patni dono ko chin liya? Kyun? Ve toh humse kitna prem karti hai, phir humare hriday (heart) ko kaise itna kasht sehne pe majbur kiya? Aisa kya ho gaya ki ve humse itni ghrina (hate) karne lagi."

As he went along, pain was clearly heard in his voice and as he turned his eyes towards JB his eyes portrayed the pain of betrayal and loss. He turned away and looked out of the window to hide his pain and avoid tears. Seeing him like this Ajab and JB had tears in their eyes, they knew the reality of DB but they knew how much it has affected Pratap. They looked at each other and silently agreed to tell him everything, or else he might blame himself thinking he must have done something to anger DB.

"Pratap, humari dekhiye"

Pratap turned to JB, and she made him sit on a dewan.

"Pratap, kya aap hum pe aur Ajabde pe vishwas karte hai?"

"Ranima, humare liye yadi koi vyakti mahatva purna hai, jispe hum apne aap se bhi adhik vishwas karte hai, toh ve aap dono hai."

Hearing this a small smile appeared on Ajab's face and she closed her eyes to savour the moment. However this went unnoticed by both Pratap and JB.

"Pratap, aaj hum apko kuch batana chahte hai. Jo baatein hum apko batane vale hai unka koi praman nahi hai humare pas. Aur nahi apne aap ke alawa koi sakshi. Kadachit yehi karan hai ki aab tak hum yeh baat kisi ko nahi keh paye. Kyunki humari baat par koi vishwas nahi karta."

"ranima, hum samje nahi"

"Pratap kya apko yaad hai, ki ek baar Rani Dheerbaiji ne apko ek dudh ka pyala (glass) diya tha parantu, unki dasi Kokilaji ne ve phek diya tha?"

"ji Ranima parantu..."

"pranshna mat puchiye, apko sab pata chal jayega bus humari baat sunte rahiye."

And she told him how she found out that DB had poisoned the glass. She also told him about each  time she(JB) found out about DB's plan, and also how DB threatened her and made her (JB) stop Pratap's rajyaabhishek.

As JB reached the part when Ajab was insulted in Palace, Ajab told him the words DB said and how her sister behaved with her. She also revealed that it was DB's order to make her go with four sevaks to carry her palki and one dasi.

After that JB again took over to explain the politics DB and Umadevi played to make her (JB) agree to get Pratap married to Phool. Also how, DB sent the letter to US about Phools relation to bijolia and how she found out that DB had sent a letter to Umadevi, before everyone came to Bijolia to ask for Ajab's hand. How it might be that Umadevi did that intentionally.

Ajab also told him about how she and phool found out that Umadeviji had hid the sword and had mixed chemical that burns the skin in haldi.

This shocked both Pratap and JB. They knew something was wrong, as they had seen Phool change the haldi, but not what.  She also told them how Umadevi had threatened them and how she had revealed that DB would do her work on other side. But by God's grace, Phool and Swaubhagyawati were able to change it. This made pratap remember how desperate DB seemed to get his Haldi started but when she was asked to put it on him she seemed lost.

Once the talk came to after their marriage, Ajab told Pratap how DB taunted her and manipulated her to say that she (DB) had changed the letter. Hence in a way she had confessed and how US heard that and screamed at her and her father.

Pratap was silent for a few moments.

"itna bada vishwas ghat? Par kyun?humne to unhe apni ma mana, unse sneh kiya phir kyun ve humari jaan lena chahti hai?"

"kyunki aap humare putra hai, irsha karti hai ve humse aur nahi dekh pati ki ranaji aapse itna sneh kare. Ve apne putra ko mewar ka rana bana na chahti hai."

"ranima, itna sab ho gaya aur apne hume nahi bataya? Daajiraj ko nahi bataya? Kyun"

"Kyunki humare pass koi saboot nahi tha. Aur jab pehle pehle yeh hua to humne ranaji ko bataya tha. Lekin DB ne aise baat ko palta ki ranaji humse krodhit ho gaye"

She told him about the milk and such other incidents.

"yadi aap bhi ab yeh baatein ranaji ko batayenge to aap bhi humari aur Ajabde ki bhaati ranaji ka vishwas kho denge pratap. Aur raha yeh prashna ki humne aapse kyun nahi kaha. Toh hum kaise kehte? Hume dekhte the ki apke man mein DB ke liye kitna sneh tha, toh hum kaise aapko itna kasht dete? Nahi humse nahi hua yeh Pratap... nahi hua humse"

She started crying so Pratap hugged her.

After some time JB calmed down

"Chaliye, raat ke bhojan ka samay hone ko hai. Ajabde aap Pratap ko unke kaksh mein le jaiye. Hum aap dono ka bhojan wahi bhijwa denge." Saying so JB hugged her and whispered

"aaj raat jitna ho sake unke saath rahiyega, kisi ki fikr mat kijyega, hum saab sambhal lenge"

After coming out of the hug JB looked at ajab in her eyes and Ajab nodded.


so the Ajab and Pratap confrontation is remaining but i promise that next part will be almost double in length and all Praja buttt only if i get 10 plus replies 

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