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Praja ss - Truth -Painful & Rewarding Last part Page 9 10/1/15 (Page 3)

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 11:10am | IP Logged
wow...it was mind blowing...loved it so much!

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by pari0706

^^ hey this scene was going on my mind for sometime now and i really wanted to pen it down. so yesterday this scene gave me inspiration to start the story... i am glad you liked it


totally loved it y can't the cv's do something like this n sweep us of our imaginations n let the whole world know Ajab's innocence n bravery !! will b waiting for more do continue !!
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Same here, I was also hoping the same from cv's.keep on writing dear, show ajab character firm brave strong and especially show some leadership.tqClap

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Nice ..please continue soon
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Hi all 
Wishing everyone a very happy new year. Hope this new year brings a lot of happiness in your life.

here is a chotu sa part 3 but i promise i will post a lamba Praja part this evening

Part 3

As they entered and saw HB looking older then her age and in the clothes of a widow, JB couldn't hold her tears.

"Hansa"

Hansa recognised the voice of her friend and looked at her with questioning eyes, and JB lifted her pallu.

"Ranima?"

"Jaivanta?"

HB ran to JB and hugged her. Both of them cried on each other's shoulder and Patta was standing there confused.

Ajabde had tears in her eyes and kept looking at JB.

Soon JB and HB came out of hug

"Ajabde humari putri"

JB opened her arms to Ajabde

"ranima"  Ajabde hurried to her with a big smile on her face, and first touched her feet and then hugged her.

"aap ... app yahan? Aise? Aur yeh" looking towards US

" aapne hume pehchana nahi Ajabde?" US asked removing his fake beard

"Ranaji?"

Ajabde went to him and touched his feet.

"Jeeti rahiye, hume aap par garv hai Ajabde, jiss tarah se apne un Afghano ka samna kiya hume ati prasanta hai. Hume shama kar dijiye Ajabde"

"Nahi ranaji, aap Mewar ke Rana hai, aur humare liye humare data ke saman hai, aap hume yu lajjit mat kijiye."

US smiled proudly and put his hand on her head as she closed her eyes to hold her tears in without success.

Then Pratap, slowly went to HB

"Hansa masiji?"

As they heard that, HB and Ajabde both recognised Pratap and looked at him.

Pratap touched HB's feet and HB made him stand up

"Kuwar Pratap?"

Patta who was getting lot of shocks took a step back in shock and by accident he pushed a vase and made noise. This made everyone turn to him and Balwant and other soldier's and dasis came running.

"Kshama kijiye, woh yeh humse galti se gir gaya."

HB smiled "Koi baat nahi patta, hume toh iski aadat hai, fark sirf itna hai ki pehle apne abhyas ke chalte Kuwar Pratap yeh sab girate the, phir khelne ke bahane kuwar balwant. Aur ab ap. Aap bhi toh humare putra ke saman hi hai."

"maaa?"

"Massijiii"

Both Balwant and Pratap complained at this statement against them and everyone laughed.

After this everyone freshened up and changed and had food and talked about everything and cleared all misunderstanding. Pratap really wanted to talk to Ajabde in private but did not get a chance as everyone was around.

US asked Ajabde why she and none of the dasis were wearing Jewellery, this is when HB told him about the auction to raise money for army, he apologised and told her that the Mewar's army is on its way but they came ahead to sort out personal issues first and get their daughter in law. But everyone agreed that no one will go anywhere before the war is over

Then US asked about the Afghan situation and Ajabde explained everything and they decided that next morning she will show them most of the Afghan chavnis. 

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 3:38am | IP Logged
lovely keep writing !!

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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 3:58am | IP Logged
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Nice ...update soon

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Originally posted by ash41900

lovely keep writing !!

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