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Praja ss - Truth -Painful & Rewarding Last part Page 9 10/1/15 (Page 2)

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prishna_fan

Very nice start plz continue ur SS !!  

thank you will post he next part today Embarrassed

Originally posted by sweetmogini

Nice ..please continue soon

Thank you 




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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Divi.C

Wow. Its superb.. i didn't knew u write also.. itsamazing.. in serial they r not showing prtap regretting n all infact ajabde was asking for forgivness in last episode n i hate it soo much.. stupid prtap...humm..
But the story is good continue soon..

Hey Divi ... so glad to see your comment here Big smile... well i occasionally write i have written some more Praja scenes and FF as well ... about Ajabde apologisingAngry i knew it i just knew it hence i didn't watch the episode and am trying not to watch till the misunderstanding is sortedCry ... so my ffs are my way of keeping my mind.LOLWink

here are the links




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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ash41900

great its good do continue !! Smile steps to clear Ajabde's name ...

Thank you ... i will post my next part today only 

Originally posted by sara1990

Please continue

the next part is belowSmile


Edited by pari0706 - 31 December 2014 at 4:20am
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Part 2

US, JB and Pratap had to pass a forest but are caught in jaal soon and were handing from the tree (similar to how Ajab trapped Pratap and Chakrapani but with stronger jaal) and before they understand anything, they are surrounded by 10 Afghan soldiers.

"humare ilake mein ane ki jurrat?"

"ruko Mansoor, inke saath toh ek aurat bhi hai, dekhe to."

And they start going towards JB. Both Pratap and US are trying to come out of the jaal. But before anyone can do anything an arrow comes between that man and the place where JB was hung.

When Pratap look to the place where the arrow came from he sees Patta's jija with 4 soldiers. She is on horse whilst soldiers on foot. He is scared and relieved. Scared as they are only 5 people and the afghan's outnumber them 2 to 1. But relieved to get help.

He tries to break the jaal but it was much stronger than he thought.

"kisne ki itni jurrat. Samne aao."

At this Ajabde and her soldiers come forward and without another moment all 10 soldiers attacks them. the 4 soldiers each fight with one afghan leaving Ajabde fighting with 6. They all surround her and attack her at once. But she takes their swords on her sword (like how she did during BK's attack on Bijolia to kidnap Ajab) and she manages to defeat all 6 and help one of her soldier.

After brief fight Ajabde and her soldiers manage to kill all with no casualty. Just then Patta comes on horse with 4 more soldiers on foot.

"Patta, un teen logo ko upar se neeche utariye sheeghra."

"ji jeeja"

US and JB are very impressed with this display of bravery and sword fight. But are stunned when they heard the brave soldier speak in a female voice. That yoddha was a female?

Soon all three were released and JB had a ghoonghat. So Ajab was not able to recognise them, but she recognised Pratap as Ashwapalak.

"Ashwapalak? Aap?"

US and JB understood that this is patta and his jija that Pratap was talking about. And were very impressed with them. but decided to let Pratap handle the situation.

"Jee haan hum"

"parantu aapne toh hume patra mein likha that ki aap yahan nahi reh sakte?"Patta asked

"haan voh humare parivar par kuch sankat aa gaya tha, jiska sandesh hume mila, toh hum vahi gaye the. Aur humare mata pita ka vahan Chittor ke pass rehna surakshit nahi laga hume toh hum unhe lekar wapas yahan aap logon ki sahayta hetu aa gaye"

"Theek hai ashwapal, chalye yahan se. Yahan par rehna khatre se khali nahi hai. Afghan iss khshetra ko apne kabse mein lene ke liye prayatna sheel hai. Aur suraj bhi dhalne wala hai. Isi liye uchit yehi hoga ki hum vapis bijolia chale. Hume baijilal ko yeh bhi batana hai ki aap apne mata pita ke saath laut aye hai. Uske pashchat age kya karna hai yeh ve hi batayeingi." Ajabde commanded

"jee theek hai chaliye."

"rukiye, aap humare ghode pe sawari kijiye, rasta lamba hai." Ajabde tells looking at JB.

"hum? Parantu aap?" JB asks

"jija humare ghode pe sawari kar lengi" Patta replies.

To this JB agrees and sits on horse with both legs on one side as she cannot sit normally with her dress lol ;) and they all slowly goes towards Bijolia.

As they reach Bijolia's checkpoint Ajab gets down from the horse and JB follows. Ajab removes the cloth covering her face and orders the soldiers to tighten the security for night.

When Ajab is going to mahal after dropping everyone at Patta's house, US stops her and tells her that he wishes to apologise to Baijilal and Rani HB personally. First on behalf of the king for not helping and then for making Pratap leave Bijolia for sometime in such terrible situation.

But Ajab refuses saying she will give the message but before US says anything elseJB intervenes and folds her hands to request her.

Ajabde holds her hands and asks her not to do this as she is elder to her and she (ajab) respects her like her mother. JB tells her that if that is the case then accept her request.

Ajab agrees and takes them to Mahal even Patta joins in saying he wants to be there as well. Just as they enter the mahal, a dasi comes

"Khama ghani Baijilal, Ranima aap hi ka intazar kar rahi thi, ve bohot chintit hai aur hume adesh diya hai ki aap jaise hi aye apko unke pass le jaya jaye."

"theek hai. Hum jaate hai unse milne. Aur suno, aaj raat yeh saab yehi rahenge toh inke bhojan aur rehne ka prabandh kiya jaye."

"Jee baisa"

"aap log aiye, hume yakin hai ki maa aap logo se milkar khush hogi." And goes towards her mother's room

However, US, JB and Pratap are stunned to know that the female warrior that they were so impressed with was none other than Baijilal aka Ajabde!

But before they could understand anything Patta speaks up

"chaliye, ranima se milte hai."

And they all walk as if in trance. They realise that the danger is very big and are shocked to know that due to their misunderstandings their daughter in law is forced to go out and fight like a warrior. The kuwarni of Mewar has to fight for her life. They did not realise when they reached HB room. 



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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 6:09am | IP Logged
OOO impressed impressed Clap Clap the way Ajabde saves his in~laws though unknowingly ... she would help any1 in the position ... but brilliant leaving them all astounded on the bravery of their bahu lovely... keep writting !! Smile

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^^ hey this scene was going on my mind for sometime now and i really wanted to pen it down. so yesterday this scene gave me inspiration to start the story... i am glad you liked it
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pari0706

^^ hey this scene was going on my mind for sometime now and i really wanted to pen it down. so yesterday this scene gave me inspiration to start the story... i am glad you liked it


totally loved it y can't the cv's do something like this n sweep us of our imaginations n let the whole world know Ajab's innocence n bravery !! will b waiting for more do continue !!

Edited by ash41900 - 31 December 2014 at 7:06am

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ash41900

Originally posted by pari0706

^^ hey this scene was going on my mind for sometime now and i really wanted to pen it down. so yesterday this scene gave me inspiration to start the story... i am glad you liked it


totally loved it y can't the cv's do something like this n sweep us of our imaginations n let the whole world know Ajab's innocence n bravery !! will b waiting for more do continue !!
Cv's r sooo stupid to write anything like this.LOL

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