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TS-RR "LOVE ME TENDER" (mature, 18+), Part 2 updated 1/1/15 (Page 3)

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 1:59am | IP Logged


Hey...u delivered as promised !

Agree with what you say in your intro...reg a lot of missed potential for the Parud story in the show.

Not sure if you had indicated earlier that your this OS on Parud would be from the Mumbai trip...if u had then i missed it...as i was reading the OS the 'separation' track was playing in my mind big time...iss liye i was like tense...so u can imagine my plight at finally i get what i wanted aur mujhe kuch kaye ja raha tha...kya hoga paro jayegi iss mein...kaise stop karega...did not want to skip to the end u see...Wink

Parud finally coming together here was very REAL in this OS - according to me - the feelings, the tentativeness, mind ka woh hulchul...etc. credit to your writing, i read it a couple of times and felt gosh its not easy writing all this; capturing the feelings, finding the right words ufff...Clap

 I confess Sonia, i prefer your MSK ka Jaipur wala coming together more, more romantic and dreamy for me...

Thanks for the dreamy ride that you have provided me with in 2014...and would love to continue on this trip in 2015 too...Tongue

Happy New Year to you and all your loved ones    Smile


Edited by nik1310 - 31 December 2014 at 4:37am

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Wow wow wow ClapDay DreamingBlushing
Happy New Year

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Thank you for this lovely new year gift. Loved the long lovely update. 
Dreams come true, memories made and hearts come together. 
For rudra it is about accepting his feelings for Paro and starting a life together. For Paro it is about making memories to last a lifetime befor she has to go away from him for his good. 

But in reality it is the meeting of two hearts which have been beating for each other since they laid eyes on each other. 


Happy new year to you. 


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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Hello sonia,
this update is HOT Embarrassed , you expressed there emotions wonderfully and I really enjoyed the looong update Wink
paro being shy and covering her thigh, rudra being understanding husband and concerned for his paro.. you wrote all the emotions so well. Thank you for giving all the parud fan's this amazing and hot update :)
wish you a very Happy New Year
Tongue

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepsel

OMG!!!!!!!!!!...Call thefreaking Fire Brigade...Now...I can't handle this

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<font color="#6600ff" size="2">Finally managed to read, away from my family peacefully, running with my Lappy from room to room , shoo shooing my kids, hiding my blushes and goosebumpsLOLLOL...usshhh my workout done for todayWink</font>
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<font color="#6600ff" size="2">Sonia you asked me to share thisgift with Rithu, after reading am having second thoughtsLOL...Rithu darling</font>
<font color="#6600ff" size="2">Also for once am not taking Paro place here since, this made me blush to the root of my toesBlushingand I want to be loyal to my Real life moochiyaROFL(So Harry, Amy, all unmarried gals , bed is yoursLOL)..See am in giving mood todayWink..</font>
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<font color="#6600ff" size="2">There are so manyvacuum spaces to be filled in RR and Mumbai scene is one such..And you have penned itdown so beautifully..I didn't concentrate on the other pair as well since I didn't follow them or their shows, but most of all PARUD stood tallthroughout the episode and captivated my senses through that beach scene and I forgot everything elseDay Dreaming..</font>
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<font color="#6600ff" size="2">I must tell you , though am a great fan of your sensual writing, am even a greater fan of your sensible emotional writings as well..the first part of the story is proof of that,.How wonderfully you have penned both their emotions..I will never get tired of reading those..Its almost like I am residing inside their hearts and feel the flowing words of emotions..absolutelybrilliantClap.</font>
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<font color="#6600ff" size="2">The second part, should I say moreBlushing..this is exactly how a madly in love couple would behave..that too after that life-shattering event..This is how their consummation should have been, with passion, emotion, heartfelt , full of love, givingand taking equally...that first touch, first kiss, first embrace, first union is always special..What they showed in original is not their SR, it was another rushed passionate needy night lacking everything you have described..that tooabruptlyinserted ..Well so many grudges still am madly in love with PARUD..Call me crazy but I love this craziness and love seeing many more like me in this forumLOL..thats the magic of RR and PARUD..</font>
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<font color="#6600ff" size="2">Special thanks for this lengthy update Sonia, coz trust me I know the pain... I almost pooped to write half of this once and decided never to attempt againLOL...So hats of to you dear for your commitment and patience<img src="http://www.sherv.net/cm/emoticons/hello/hats-off-salute-smiley-emoticon.gif" alt="" />..</font>
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<font color="#6600ff" size="2">Thank you for this wonderful New year gift again...Your stories will becherished in my heart as long as PARUD & RR stays alive ..and that is foreverEmbarrassed</font>
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<font size="2" color="#ff0000">To all my fellow FF,OS,SS,TS readers of this forum,</font>
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<font size="2" color="#ff0000">WISHING YOU ALL A VERY HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR 2015!!</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Lots of Love</font>
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Wow! Deeps in a generous mood. Is that your resolution for 2015 Wink ? I don't mind sharing with you my Parud genie. As for more fanfics, they will be as frequent as your RPM posts.
Happy new year.

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 7:35am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by rithureuben

OMG! What was that? Why on earth did this show end? I know they can't act out all the things you write being a desi show. But still they had a song and dance for Parud's first beach trip and nothing after the fire. No heart to heart after one of them almost died. And the miracle healing ignored after the episode.
<font color="#cc0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Just like you and other fans, I wonder why did such a beautiful show end? The story had such potential and it ended so soon!ConfusedExactly my sentiments----after such a huge tragedy and Rudra's hand healing, the next scene was in the train as if nothing life altering had happened!</font>Ermm

I'm gonna stop babbling now. First of all a big Thank you for the gift Hug. I hadn't expected the Mumbai trip to be a part of it. Because it was a Mahasangam episode, I didn't grudge the other couple being a part of it especially since we had better background music than usual and they were quite sweet. But I hated the fact that in the next episode Parud were sitting in a train and talking casually about his hand getting better. They should have felt a entire range of emotions with Paro being trapped, Rudra almost loosing her. Then adrenaline forces his right hand to act and save her. Finally her realising that it is time to say good bye. This was one of the tracks that should not have been rushed. Thank you for giving us the moments in between all that.

<font color="#cc0099"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank you darling Rithu! I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed this version of Mumbai trip!</font>Embarrassed</font>
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</font>Second, the lovemaking at this juncture makes so much sense. The idea that you may have lost each other forces you to realise that life is too short. So Rudra had to realise that he must let Paro know how much she means to him and accept her fully as his wife. And Paro had to give in and surrender to him for the last night she may have with him. You cannot go back to living like platonic roommates after such a traumatic experience.
Finally, thank you for taking Parud across this beautiful act as they became husband and wife in every sense of the word in a comfortable room with a warm bed. I really don't understand the logic in consummating a marriage in a hut/cottage/barn in the middle of the jungle. As for the actual event, I won't comment much. You have done full justice to what we have come to expect from your words and the screen scorching couple we saw rolling in the desert almost a year ago.

<font color="#cc0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I, too felt that after such a adrenaline pumping, hair-raising, heart pumping event, where you almost face death-------lovemaking made sense as both realized the importance of the other in their life, especially RudraEmbarrassed. What better way to feel alive than share your love with another person who means the world to you?</font>
<font color="#cc0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">As for barn/hut consummation-----I didn't really understand that as well. I am not a TV show savvy but I think a bunch of lovely readers mentioned that consummation in odd, abandoned places are sort of the trend in showsConfusedLOL</font>
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<font color="#cc0099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank you for the lovely wishes! May your new Year be amazing and wonderful as well!Hug</font>




The only time Paro's anguish was shown was when Varun died and when she was leaving Rudra. All other times when she was physically hurt, she was fine emotionally in the next episode. It's too late to complain about it but mention it because its such a relief that writers like you pay attention to her mind too.
Lovemaking makes sense because Rudra was more a man of action not words. So the timing was perfect for him.
I hope the barn trend ends soon. It's the most unrealistic thing they show.
Waiting for Part 2 now.

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Wow mama that was great!!!   And only the first part!
Loved that you showed how they both felt and what they wanted

He is so attuned to her he knows that something is wrong

omg that was one totally hot and sensual love scene!!!!(fanning)


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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Wow first of all thanks for mentioning me and thanks for the naked rudy. awww drooling with the images in mind. Hmmm super t.s will be waiting to know how can she leave him and will he allow that in first place?
Awesome thinking and beautiful point to choose and write.
Deep's awesome comment happy new year wishes to you.
happy new year to you too sonia and all the other friends I made here and also this ff friends. 
Cool will meet you all in the next year. 

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