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New ARAKSHI SS- "Bin Tere Jina Nahi" update part 2 and banne

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 12:58pm | IP Logged



BIN TERE JINA NAHI...


Present scene: in hospital

One man was pleading to the doctor..

Doctor:- Sorry humne unhe bacchane ki puri koshih ki par hum kuch nai kar paye...abi unke pas vakth bahut kam hai...

Man:-aisa kaise bol sakte hai ap...ap doctor hai na..!!! ap to sab kuch kar sakte hai..plz baacha lijiye usko..mai nai jee paunga uske bina...plz...!!!

Doctor:- dhekiye ap shant ho jaiye..mai aapka dard samaj sakta hu..par hum kuch nai kar sakte...uska bachna namumki hai..

Man get full angry and clutch doctor's collar.. and pinned him to wall holding his neck from other hand..and said angrly

Man:-are kis baat ke doctor ho tum..?? ek insaan ki jaan nai bacha sakte..tum jante nai mai koun hu...ACP hu mai ACP Arjun Suryakant Ratwte...aj tak mai kisi se nai hara hu...sare criminal mujhse darte hai...mera naam sunte hi kaapne (thrill) lagte hai...maine aj tak koi bura kaam nai kiya hai...khabi kisi ke sath kuch galat nai kiya hai...phir mere sath galat kaise ho sakta hai

He was crying in full mod...tears were coming out of his eyes continuesly...as he was saying... "plz bacha lo usko..mera is duniya mai koi nai hai..mere jine ki ass mujhe se mat lo..varna mai .kya karunga ye mai bhi nai janta...use kuch nai hona chaiye...samjhe ya samjhau.."

Doctor:-hosh mai aao ACP...agar mai uski bimari ka ilaj kar sakta tha..to mai use phele apni wife ko bachata...use apni ankho ke samne aise roj marte hue nai dhekta...mai sach mai kuch nai kar sakta hu..

Ye sunkar arjun ne doctor ka chod diya and zameen par baith kar jor se rone laga...he was crying so loud.. doctor put his hand on his shoulder and said.. "unke pas sach mai bahut kam time hai...plz apni wife se mil lo akhir bar.."

He compose himself and try hard to stand...he sweep his tears and went to the room where his life was lying on bed lifelessly ..Her beautiful face ha dark circle under her eyes...she was looking so pale...so week..the girl who always smile and spread smile was lying so helplessly... Arjun ..yes our Arjun...hero of Mumbai police ...was cursing his fate...dusro ki jaaan bachane vala aj apno ki jaan nai bacha pa raha tha...he was feeling shame on him as he can't keep his wife safe..he went to her bad side and sit near her...he gently hold her hand...keep it near his lips and kiss her..and slightly tears again came to his eyes...he can't see anymore and went to the door...but..suddenly she hold his hand and he stood there...she said  slowly but in sweet and painful voice" Ae ACP..aj bina kuch samjhaye hi jaoge kya...???" he cry again but not face her..and ask "Kyu...ja rahi ho mujhe chodkar...??"

A long tear came out of her eyes...but she compose herself and said "phele to ye batao tumhare manners kaha gaye..???" She try to mimic his voice.. "tumhe pata hai na jab mai tumse bat karu to mere samne dheka karo...I hate when someone ignore me...samjhe ya samjha...aah..!!" she can't complete and a little painful gasp came from her. He turn immediately and hug her tightly..he cry for a long time by keeping his head under the crook of her neck. She path him smoothly...roaming his hand on his back and kissing his cheek...she made him calm and said "Ae Arjun ab akhir time pe bhi aise rote rahoge..to hum final baat kab karenge..humm..." he stood up...sit nearby her and said with still sobbing "please aisa mat kaho...ye doctor na kuch nai samajte...inhe kuch nai aata ...hum kisi aur doctor ke pas challenge..vo tumhe bilkul thik kardenge..tum thik ho jaogi..tumhe kuch nai..." before he complete she kiss him on her lips...so gently...softly...tasting his dried lips.. he was not giving response...so she bit him a little on his lower lip..and kiss him again but this time taking all the left strength of her body...and kiss him passionately...she was so week that he can understand..and kiss her back... after a long time they parted..she keeps her finger on his lips and said "sshhh...not a single word Arjun plz ab meri baat last  time su lo..mujhe tumse do choje chaiye...meri last wishes..hai plz puri kar do karoge na?? hummm...!!!" he look side not to face her and deny her request ...but she made her to look him..and said  so sweetly and pleedingly"plz Arjun..karoge na meri last wish puri.." he made a slight nodded she said " Arjun promise karo mere jane ke baad tum apne ap ko andhere ko nahi rakhoge...move on karoge...plz..agar zindagi mai khabi koi aisa insane aye jo tumhara hath pakd kar agar tumhe andhero se tumhe bahar lane ki koshih kare to use apna hath nai kichoge...use apna hath do ge aur uske kamdam se kadam mila ke chaloge...promise me" Arjun look her helplessly and said " ab itna bada bi punishment mat do yar...meri zindagi ki pheli aur akhiri ladki sirf tum ho...tumhare alava..mai kisi aur ke bare mai soch nai sakta..plz..aisa na karo" tears came out from her eyes..she think that she is so lucky to have Arjun as her lover...as her husband...he loves her a lot she feel so blessed but then again her past mistake came in her front of eyes...she thought "jo galti maine kari...vo ek gunah tha..and us gunah ki hi saza mil rahi hai merko..but usme mere Arjun ko bahut dard hoga...plz bagwan mere hisse ka dard ap Arjun ko mat do..uski koi galti nai hai...sara kasor mera hai..plz"she make a silent pray and said to him.. "I know Arjun its tough...par agar tum meri jagah hote to yahi karte hai..na..!!! plz said yes.." he look her and nodded.. she gave a sweet smile and said "thank you Arjun..ab dusri baat .. aage ki life mai ek pal aisa bi ayega jab tumhe mujhse nafrat karne ka maan hoga...mujhe kosoge...mere sath apna naam jodne ka gam hoga..meri galti ki saza apne ap ko doge...but plz mujhe maaf kar dena...plz..mujhse nafrat mat karna!!" he said "aisa khabi nai hoga..mai tumse nafrat kyu karunga" she said "aisa hoga but plz mujhe vada karo.." he nodded and said "but tumne aisa kya kiya hai.." she said "abi mat puccho bas mujhe apni bahoo mai le lo and mai chain se marna chahti hu..aur mujhe vo sukoon tumhari bahoo mai he milega ...plz Arjun" Arjun hug her tightly and sleep near her..and continuously path her back..after 1 hr he feel that warmth of her body has gone and he is noth feelin her breath on his chest..he look to her..her eyes was close and a satisfy smile was kept on her face.. he said no he screem "NOOO...!!!!!!!" "you can't die...you can't leave me..plz...open ur eyes...!!!"

So who is she...keep guesing...I know emotional likne mai todi kacchi hu..but plz tell me that I should continue it or not...and yes if u like it plz then hi like button and comment on it...agar accha response mila to hi age ka post karungi..nai to I don't waste ur time...!!!!



Edited by angle1shanu - 03 January 2015 at 2:34pm

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Owesome ... please continue. ..

next part jaldi se update karna. ..

or ha ye bhi bata dena ki ye story ariya pe he ya arakshi pe.

kyuki aaj kal sare friends jyada tar arakshi par hi. likh rahe he.

update soon. .

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Loved it
It was really emotional
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Reallly awsomeee nd emotional start!!!!!
It made me cry yaar...Their pain was so well written!!!!
Still lotss of questions r there...
So plase con.soonnn!!!!!

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Beautiful one dear... 
Please do continue this story... 

Maybe the girl is Roshni... 

Or Sakshi... 

Hehe... confused... LOL

Good going dear... 

Happy New Year in advance!
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 2:07am | IP Logged
awesome start
very emotional update
may be the girl is roshni 
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Loved it
It was really emotional
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Awesome awesome awesome..
Rula dya yaar!!!!!!!!!
Beautifully written..
Loved it very very much..
Please jaldi jaldi next part update karo.
Can't wait to read more..

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